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@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Awesome part... is that madhu who is doing all the stuff to welcome rk n bittu!??

Its interesting to read this skoopy things. ..waiting for next part

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sapana

@sapnaf52

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Amazing part di. .
I feel like watching some horror movie. .
bittuji. .poor boy he is so scared. .
candles, rose petals, bouquets, black cats ,anklets sounds. .wow. .like horror movie. ..
and not forget. .door opens itself. ..
early waiting for next part. .
thanks for pm

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: aishu007
superb update chechi..
waiting fpr madhu's entry..
update soon...

Thank you. sorry Madhus entry will be a little late...Will update soon

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: manna43
Awesome update.I feel as I am watching a horror movie.perfect setting.fragrant candles,fresh flowers ,warm water n delicious food n sound of anklets.

Thank you.i was very much confused about writing this story..But now I feel to continue it.thank you for the support.

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: twinklev20
👏👏👏 excellent part, very well written and absolutely humor that too within a ghost story...

very well written.. ❤️ 🤗

Pls continue soon.

Thank you twinkle.please keep reading and of course commenting.

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: harini_
Awesome part,
amazingly written,
loved it

Thank you dear.first I were really not confident enough to write .I had written the next episode but not confident enough to post.yet I will post it asap

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
Awesome update dear
I m really curious to know who did all this ??

Thank you.will update soon

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Rach loved the update, it's fantastic
RK reached the mansion and everything is neatly arranged, waiting for Madhu's entry.
Thanks for the PM dear

Thank you ananya.thanks for the support.will update asap

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rachana

@magicalmirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: dharsii
Super update ka.
Comedy horror story..
Loved it ..
Rk is so brave..Who is in there?
Bittuji is so weak .He is going to faint..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..

Thank you .Priya actually I am a serious person but I am happy that my writing make you laugh.will update soon.