Marble meadow part5page15dt12/3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Marble Meadow
Prologue


r u sure chief"asked bittuji
"U are asking the same question from last two days...And my answer is always yes...And you can leave me...If u are scared"rk
"No... Chief...But"bittuji
"No more arguments just ask someone the way to that damn place the GPS is not working here"rk
He slowed the car seeing a villager."excuse me... can u say the way to Marble meadow..."rk"what...Sir did u ask about that Bhoot banglow...sir,don't go there it's a haunted house...No one goes there."villager
"Can u guide us or not?",rk
"Left then straight through the grass land and through that grass land ...The houseid in the middle of grass land."villager
"Thank you...Rk closed the window and drives to leftside road..
"Chief...The villagers scared about the place."bittuji
"Bittuji...You know about me na...I want to write a horror story...So I need asuch a place for it...Who told u to accompany...Ma BHI na..."rk
"Radhaji is very much worried..."bittuji
"Yes...I know ...But that producer...He kept calling me ten times a day...I am committed to my work bittuji..."rk
"Chief...I heard about a care taker of that house...Producer arranged him to cook food for us too"bittuji
"Bittuji...Y that ghost didn't haunt that man?It's all bakhwas by the villagers..."rk
"But chief heard that the house was built by a man named shamsher Malik...He named it so because it's a marble house in between a grass land.they were afamilu of four.parents and two children...After few days they all disappeared from that house.The villagers believed that the grass land was haunted place ..So they didn't dare to go there...Shamsher didn't believe it and look what happened to him...After that no one dared to go there..."bittuji
"Wow...Great story...Bittuji..If the ghost is still there and it helps me to write a story ...It will be cool na...And then I could write e on screen INSPIRED BY REAL LIFE..."Rk laughed..



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Akka.
Nice start..
I am surprised about u..
How u r manage three stories at a time?
Super Story ka..
I like this type of story..
What is in that house?
Is ghost or anyone?
Waiting..
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow !!! another supernatural story
thanx rachana di
love ur magic of M
rk is a writer nd want to write a horror story but bittuji is worried
rk don't believe in this
thanx for pm Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting.
Looking forward to read it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow chechi..
Superb start..
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats fir new story..
Nice start ..
RK n bittuji are going to a haunted house bcz RK want to write a story..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Interesting prologue,
Rk is writer he wants to write horror story,
Bittuji is scared,
now they are going to haunted house,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thank u for the pm...so a mystery cum horror story...waiting for the suspense to unroll...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Horror story
Interesting start di
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rach congrats on the new story.
Supernatural one wow
Interesting prologue, where did Malik and his family disappear and RK is a scriptwriter by profession.
Excited to read more of the story.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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