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janu2006

@janu2006

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

beautiful start..

waiting to read more

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Wow nice story well written and thanks for pm

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Nice start.

Congratulations on New story .

I liked the concept and its new and fresh. Looks like Rk is a perfectionist . I like emotional but strong madhu

First I was wondering if madhu was cuckoo. but felt sad when learned what happened to Trish . I guess after the incident madhu n Trish moved away from home. Looking forward to Rk try to befriend madhu.

Thank you for pm .

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Superb update dear Aaniya..👏

congratz for new story ..🤗keep writing AA.👏

its different story and different start too ..loved it.⭐️

Aww right now Madhu and Rk don't share good vibes

Madhu think Rk is not good but its also true that Rk helped her sis to be taken to hospital ..⭐️

and hope they get to know each other well in future..❤️😳

feeling so bad for Trishna ..

Madhu is taking care for Trishna ..strong girl..waiitng for her didu to be cured..

so all in all Rk didn't have good impression on Madhu and Trihsna but but abhi toh story shuru hui hai..😛

aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya?😉

update soon though i came late but i am latest you know ..😎

thanks for pm dear 😃and sorry for late reply..wanted to read it peacefully not in hurry.😳

Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago

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call me shradha

@patelshradha50

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Good start and thanks for the pm

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Awesome start.. Madhu n her story is so heart wrenching .. but she is so strong n a fighter

RK he is ride but not bad but messing things

Seems like he is totally into madhu though not openly acknowledging his feelings

Waiting for their story to proceed

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Awesome start..
Rk Mr.Perfectionist jisa sab kuch perfect chaiha work and life ma uska car ka samna trishna aagayi aur wo usa hospital le gaya wanha sa pata chala uska mental problem hai and uska relative ki koi news nahi thi toh rk mental asylum bhejna ka socha par Madhu ki entry hui jo apne didu ki search ma thi and jab sab bura behave kia toh trishna ka truth bola aur sab shock hai omg bahut bura hua uska saath.. Rk ko vi sad feel hua guilty hai wo itna kuch madhu ko bolna and behave kia is lia.. Madhu rk ka film set ma kam karti hai omg sikky,dipali lead hai film ka aur rk yanha vi mehul ki band baja raha hai.. Rk madhu sa sorry bolta hai par madhu nahi manti aur rk ka dil ma madhu ka liya ek soft corner hai jo uska care kar raha hai.. Madhu ki life character sab kuch rk ko intresting lagta hai jo strong hai apne didu ka liya itna kuch kar rahi hai rk usa jana chahta hai help karna chahta hai.. Hope rishbala friend ho jaye aur rk ka dil madhu madu bolna lage..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Awesome.Loved it .Ur way of writing stories n portraying character is superb.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

😆😆😆

I agree the onlookers and people who pass by make it so big and let the victim suffer or soemtimes they will just stare at teh victims and ask dumb questions by just pushign aside the deal to help them first..HATE that but its the truth

LOL..the way RK dealt with such people is so good...At first I thought is that MAdhu but naah..we willd escribe our heroine ina dfrnt way so..I was kinda hoping it shoudnt be Madhu and TADaaa..she is Trish..

Loved this MAdhu,,she is confident, smart and has loads of self respect which I love..and then the way RK dealt with Trish is bad..I mean I knw he is pissed coz he lost his deal but but but ..oke lets accept that RK is RK and so is Bittuji hahhahah

The way Madhu confronted to them abt her Didus condition is heart wrenching...her life got shattered ..who is thta bas***d who did this to her..pls find him..I guess its gonna be SULLU ullu..if not them pls ignore my prediction hahahhahaha

and the way teh sisters talk and share sweet cute words..loved it..

RK si guilty...hmm really..for ac hange he got smitten by her confidence and self respect..way to go GIRL

He apologized but Madhu royallu shut him up hahhaha what a scene..LOl optimistic Radhaji hahahah..come on radhaji instigate him so that he will fall for her

LOved the last part too...whats RK gonando next...

I am waiting..thanks for the PM