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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Rese.😳

Unres

Superb update dear Aaniya ..👏

loved it ..aww so Madhu wanted to apolozise and Rk wasn't listening ..

poor Madhu had to block his way to tell him ..😆

and he listened than ..😳

OMG!! Sultan ruined Trishna's life ..hurted her and than afterwords Rk too believe and got to know it was his bro who ruined Trishna's life ..😡

in climax Sultan died ..but ..he deserved this end ..moron..😡

Aww Madhu and Rk moments ..loved them ❤️

Hey dear so you are suffering from Writer's block..i understand ..

it happens..so ya just take a break and come back as we all are waiting for your stories ..

for now just relax..

thanks for pm ..😃

awesome piece of writing ..⭐️

thanks for this story and when ever you think of quitting writing ..just remember that i also had fallen for you and your stories so do come back soon AA..love and hugs to you too dear.🤗

Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Thanks for pm. Wonderful story n fantastic progressing n then awesome end. Firstly i would like to say really awesome end to such a criminal. It gives reasoning too as we all know such culprits dont get deserve punishment whether the victim only got punished in rape cases that too by judgemental gaze of ppl around them. So this one is a sensitive topic n u handle it with care.kudos to u. Climax is exciting full of thriller n meaningfull. N then conclusion trishna cured, radha maa ok with everything n mukund friendly with trishna n last but not least wedding of rk n madhu.

How much up down u showed in this short story was not shown in the serial itself. The strubbornness is the key of every link here as madhu is sturborn not to believe n accept Rk love n RK is sturborn not to let her go from his life. He did his every effort to secure his love n with happy ending he succed too.

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Thanks for pm. Wonderful story n fantastic progressing n then awesome end.👏 Firstly i would like to say really awesome end to such a criminal. It gives reasoning too as we all know such culprits dont get deserve punishment😡 whether the victim only got punished in rape cases that too by judgemental gaze 😭😭of ppl around them. So this one is a sensitive topic n u handle it with care.kudos to u.👏 Climax is exciting full of thriller n meaningfull. N then conclusion trishna cured, radha maa ok with everything n mukund friendly with trishna n last but not least wedding of rk n madhu.😳

How much up down u showed in this short story was not shown in the serial itself.😆😆 The strubbornness is the key of every link here as madhu is sturborn not to believe n accept Rk love n RK is sturborn not to let her go from his life. He did his every effort to secure his love n with happy ending he succed too.😳😳

Edited by Risingsun626 - 8 years ago

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#234

And ur RED NOTE was very boring 🤢n not impressive so u better concentrate on writting the stories n to give us updates not on these red notes.🥳 If u want to take a break say it directly. Ok take a break go sleep n come back tomorow with new update. I think this much break is enough for u.🤣

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#235

superb update. i loved rk and madhu's love scenes.nice ending dear.i want to tell one thing dear,u take ur own time but when u get interest in writing u should write stories dear and u r a good writter dear.thanks for ur lovely stories.

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#236

wow fabulous update with superb end loved the whole journey
thanks for pm and sorry for late buddy..

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Awesome update nice ending
thanks for pm

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Awesome and Lovely ending..
Rk jitna vi angry ho madhu ko pain ma nahi dekha sakta😳
Madhu ko apne galti rk ko itna kuch bin socha bolna ka ehsaas hua aur wo guilty hai usa maffi mangna ki try karti hai par rk usa ignore kar raha hai toh madhu na uska road hi block kar lia samna aakar aur rk na uski baat suni.. Rk na sahi kia jo vi situation ho madhu ko apne life sa hi jane nahi dia.. Omg ya sultan na trishna ka saath aisa kia wo vi rk ka bhai hai and rk ko truth vi pata chala sultan ka acha hua wo sultan mar gaya wo yahi deserve karta hai.. Trishna thik ho rahi hai and mukku ka saath friendly ho rahi hai.. Radha sab sa khush hai.. Finally rishbala ki shadi hui and lovely moments..
Thanks for pm..
Take your time and come back..

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mona singh

@rajveernainalov

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Thnkew so much for pm...
Well,I myself was trying to be a writer so got busy.LOL..
But I'ld read it before.It is updated nicely.
If you are getting bored,take a break.I think it right.I can wait.But don't quite it.I like to read your work.
Again thnx and pm me when you'll update.And feel free for a break.Take care

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sharu1109

@sharu1109

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#240

happy that Trishna got recovered... mukkund and trishna
will make a lovely couple too...
sultan got the right punishment...
i just loved the ending...
thanks for this beautiful story..

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