RiShbala TS 'FalliNg fOr yOu !'||COMPLETED#30||(10/01)

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Reser

unres...

first regarding your red note... LOL!!

you are facing "Writer's Block" haha... don't worry... it happens to all writers at one point of time... so u better take a break like ur friends suggested... but never quit writing becos u r good in it...

even i m facing that problem lately... i couldn't focus on my stories apart from any one or two... at the moment i have ideas only for HILY... hehe ... i need to buckle up and finish all my ongoing stories before i completely lose my interest...

now coming to the update...

lovely ending...

felt so sad for Rk at many places in this story...

he got squeezed between his family and his love...

though he want to favour his love he was bounded by the love for his own brother...

chee... sultan... you are good for doing only such shameless inhumane job...

that bas***d had the nerve to lie infront of his family.. but madhu was so sure he was the reason behind the misery here family had to go through...

loved all the romance scenes btn rishbala in this story...

they reminded me of our show... our sizzling couple...

loved the leg massage scene and lifting madhu in his arms and placing her on the chair and his strong words... super... even i loved Madhu's apology... she didn't leave him till he forgave her... very stubborn girl...

oh and that haldi scene.. one of my fav scenes of our show... i just loved it when u recreated it in this story...

oh wait.. i missed to mention Rk teasing Mehulji... planning to murder me? LOL!!! only rk can bring humor in a serious situation...

happy that Trishna got recovered... mukkund and trishna will make a lovely couple too...

sultan got the right punishment... smashed thoroughly not even they could recognise his body...

i just loved the ending...

thanks for this beautiful story...

Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago

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sapana

@sapnaf52

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Beautiful update. ..aani. .
madhu is stubborn. .
she apologize. ..when rk didn't give attention she did what rk did ...after many attempt she success. .
again accident. ..rk k saath. .
mehul ji not planning rk. ..it's our aani who planed it 😉
finally rishbala kiss ..
rk bring madhu to his home and she meet radhaji. .
oh sultan us also here, rk's brother. ..!!
and he is culprit. .and he is lie infont his family. .
but madhu didn't believe it. .
poor rk ..he become sandwich between family and love.
he inquiry about sultan. .
and know it. .
sultan ,finally he died ..burn alive. .😃
he destroy happy family. .he deserves it. .
haldi ceremony. .it reminds me our show. .
mukund and trishna ...nice couple. .
happy. .for trishna she recover.
and madhu gets her sister back. . 😊
awesome ending. ..

about note. .
take some break. .and comeback with bang. . 😎
early waiting ..

Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Updated..
With a note ..
Pms.. Later on..

Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Hey awesome update dear...

So finally trishanas culprit found out..its sullu rks brother..

And rk and madhu united...

Lovely story...

About ur note plz take ur time and write new story too dnt want to quit ur writing u write so beautifully..take brk bt dnt quit it...waiting for ur another story updates

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Aaniya brilliant ending to a beautiful story, just loved every bit of it.

RK is a sweetheart did not leave Madhu for once such is the trust and belief he has on Madhu. Sultan is the one who spoiled Trishna's life and got punished for his bad deeds too. Rishbala are getting married. Trishna and Mukund share a bond too. Radha has accepted Madhu and knows that she was blind in her son's love that she did not see the wrong side of Sultan.

Do take a break and then write but please please don't stop writing, i am addicted to your writing.

Thanks in advance for the PM.

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Nice ending...
Evil sulthan is no more...
rishbala scene is so cute...
break is okk...but dont quit writing...
waiting for your new new stories..

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Tinku16

@Tinku16

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

😛V beautiful update and a good closure to both the families...the way u have narrated the dilemma of rk n madhu was v v natural n practica⭐️l...And pl us have a good talent...don;t discontinue...take a break,refresh and continue...👏⭐️

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Awesome update,
thoroughly enjoyed reading it,
now its Madhu's turn to tail behind him and Rk is enjoying Madhu's attention on him,
like Rk Madhu too closed the door and tried to talk to him,
she apologized to him,
finally she realized her feelings and accepted it,
Rk's mom loved her son choice,she is happy after seeing madhu,
Sultan is Rk's bro he is the culprit,
Rk struck b/w family and his love,
loved Rishbala part when he came to her home fully drunk,
he decided to sought out everything and investigated about them and got to know they know each other,
Sultan is disgusting finally he was punished for what he did,
Rishbala are getting married and trishna too became normal,
Radhaji apologized to Madhu,
thanks for the update and also writing this story
Plz don't quit writing take a break from writing for sometime and then come back again with your awesome stories

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zonnakhan

@zonnakhan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Beautiful Update! 😊

Aaniya whatever u writes, its always amazing! 👍🏼

I just want to say that plz don't Quit writing! U r absolutely an amazing writer and i love to read ur stories a lot!👏 I can understand that at this time u r losing interest in writing So TAKE BREAK but plz DON"T QUIT WRITING! Complete ur other stories tooo... 😊

We'll miss ur stories! 😭