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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends,i am aiswarya this is my first ff.i hope u all support me.i have no previous experience in writting ff.so if i made any mistakes please forgive me.


Part-1

Howling voice of the thunder spread all the village.people are afraid to come out side the house.A man along with a pregnant lady is trying to get lift from vehicles but no one stops.the lady is crying with labour pain.he continued asking lift.a car stops near them.the man in the car lowered the and looks at them.

'Please help my wife's life is in trouble...'the man.

A lady in the car tells 'mohan jii lets help them'

'Yes radha' mohan

Mohan tells them to get inside the car.while driving he asks ' what is your name' mohan

'I am shamseer and this my wife padmini'shamseer

Radha patches on the little boy's sholder who is sleeping on her lap.they reached at hospital.shamseer asked for streacture.staffs take padmini to labour room.after some time a sister comes out the labour room with new born babay girl in hand.'congrats you have a daughter'nurse.

Shamseer gets happy and kissed his daughter.he called her madhubala...my little princess madhu...



Special thanks for priya akka u give me inspiration for writing this story and rachana dii too..

Please read & comment...

INDEX

Part:1-ABOVE

Part:2-pg 2
Part:3-pg 3
Part:4-pg 4
part:5-pg 5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4769989/rishbala-ff-swear-of-my-love?pn=7
Part:8-pg 8
Part:9-pg 10
Part:10-pg 12
Part:11-pg 16
Part: 12-pg 18
Part: 13-pg 21
Part: 14-pg 24
Part:15-pg 27
Part:16-pg 29
Part:17-pg 31
Part:18--pg 33
Part:19-pg 36
Last part-pg 38




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start Aishu.
Radha & Mohan helped for Madhu's parents.
Princess Madhu...
Update soon..
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful prologue dear.so our madhu is born and rishab is also with her.waiting for update make it soon.congrats on your story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Aishu congrats on the story.
Nice start dear, waiting to read more of it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you.i will try to update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start...
Radha n mohan helped padmini n shamsher..
A baby girl is born shmsher named her as madhubala..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you friends 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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GREAT START KEEP IT GOING AND FLOWING. THUMBS UP
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely starting dear
Congrats for ur first story
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Congrats for your first story,
Nice start

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