Rishbala SS: I live, for you: Chapter 1 updated on Pg.14 (30/9/16) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Fr this story i would like to thank anish too she encouraged me a lot..thank u buddy🤗
N soumya welldone🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
congo souwmiya.. Mindboggling story.. And seema.. Hats off for ur ideas..!! Will come around okk..😉

Hii.. i came.. sorry for being late..
but its reasonable.. i just cant read & comment in ur & sudha's story..
i have to think what i am writing & always get involve with u guyz story😳
Simply wow..
I opened the pm.. I thought i'll just congratz u & go.. Then come back & read..
BUT.. My all thought flew away as soon as my eye fall on first line..!!
Frankly saying, i was enjoying madhu's anger, her words, her conditions, but upto a certain point..!!
Well, the don.. I was enjoying the don, but thats too upto a certain point..
And now i feel like punching that dont in that very cc cam😡..
Reason simple enough..
I thought The don as Rk..
I thought wow, rk kidnapped madhu, he will do something with her & make her fall for him..
I was literally dancing, but my happiness was short lived..
That filthy ullu is the don..!!
And u killed Rk so brutally😭..
So bad u are.. Hope u transformed & make Rk alive..
Heart touching when madhu was crying & that sullu was feeling bad seeing madhu..
I felt like really kicking him, so that he really feel bad for himself🤣
Very catchy & interesting..
Good going guyz.. Superb..
Thanks for pm..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Now that's a dynamic start

So Sultan is Don and has killed RK
Madhu on the other hand been kidnapped yet living in luxury yearns for RK it's only him that she loves .
Sultan now worried about Madhu and her anger her hatred for this Don is justified
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
AMZING START
LOVED IT
INTERESTING
DO CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: madhurish

First!!!

Wow! This time Seema di and Souwmi combo! super! Hehe thanks akka!
interesting prologue!
Seema di... you made me kill Rk in poisonous love and i m happy you made souwmi too to kill Rk... hahaha... (this is called Sadistic pleasure) it pained my heart to kill Rk in PL... wonder how Souwmi took it... may be she knew the story fully and she also knew that Rk was alive... so she wouldn't have felt so hurt like me... becos my Rk is indeed dead and that too killed by his own wife!

Oh my! Is RK indeed dead that too killed by Madhu? I thought there is more to it than I could see...but guess I am wrong and my RK is dead 😭😭 Yeah akka...here I know the whole story 😉

okay back to the story...
God! i hate this sultan! why the f**k he always lust on Rk's wife? He is blind LOL!
Is madhu the only girl in the whole world? why can't he claim someone else and spare Rk's biwi?
I never liked Sultan and i m not going to start liking him... i will loathe him forever!
Add me to your list...Sultan haters Club 😆
Okay... Madhu hate to plates of food... good girl! u will need energy to kill that so called Don.. and reach your love... Fact 👍🏼

Yeah baby, you live for your hubby... he is alive only... he didn't die in that bomb blast... he will surely come to the palace to take you away from that asshole's clutch! Belief! That can lead a human anywhere 😉

good start... will be waiting to read more...
Souwmi, dear, you have written it so brilliantly... i could feel Madhu's pain..
Seema di... as ever your ideas are unique and amazing!
Thanks to you both for giving us a story to read! Thanks and Welcome akka! Gla dyou loved my writing 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Congrats for new story..
Thanks to seema di for her wonderfull ideas..
Intresting prologue..
Please rk ko mat marna aur ya sultan itna bada don hai kya roma and ria uska pass kam karta hai..
Ya sultan ko madhu sa pyar kyun hua??
start sa mujha laga rk don hai and madhu ka hubby koi aur par last toh shock mila huma 😳
Waiting for parts..
Update soon..

Thanks Mona dear!
The Don is so crazily in love with Madhu 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: .Poorva.

Interesting start.. Rk is dead.. Oh God! And that Sultan Who is a Don killed him... Now let's see what Madhu will do..

Thanks for reading Poorva 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Soumi congrats on the new story.

Heart wrenching prologue,RK is dead, can't believe it, Sultan is behind his death and he is back of Madhu too, he disgusts me.
Waiting for the next update, continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thanks dear!
Let's see 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
RK dead can't be true , sultan the kidnapper story seems different pls continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Will update by today dear...

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