Rishbala SS: I live, for you: Chapter 1 updated on Pg.14 (30/9/16)

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Zoya2

@Zoya2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Congratulations for your new story

Interesting start of the story

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dharsii

@dharsii

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Very nice start Sowmy.
Rk was dead.
No,This is not true.
Why sultan has killed Rk?
Feel sad for Madhu.
I am waiting for update.

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shree001

@shree001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

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Wow interesting prologue

Loved it dear...

firstly I thought Madhu is kidnapped by Rk but he was sultan...

oh god rk is dead... I wish rk is alive...

sultan is don...he want madhu...never in his dreams sarakchap...

waiting for next part

thanks for pm...

well written sumi...

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Interesting start
Rk is dead n Sultan kidnap Madhu
N really want to kill bloody Sultan

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Anish

@anish17

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Congrats for new story Sowmy and Seemu 👍🏼

Wow interesting prologue 👏
Rk is dead 😭
Madhu is kidnapped by don and he wants her to be with him and gives her a luxury life 😳
Y sultan is emotional when madhu cried ? 😡
Hehe Sowmy I knew the whole concept as seemu narrated me already 😉 so I should keep my mouth shut 😆otherwise she would kill me 😆
Thanks for the pm dear 🤗

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

awesome update 😳
Interesting prologue..😃
Please don't kill Rk and sultan wil see😃

in start i thought Rk as a don but you shocked me😉

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sapana

@sapnaf52

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Interesting prologue Sowmi. ..
congrats for new story dear...
unique concept. .
first I think , rk was Don. .
but I was shocked when sultan name come.
early waiting for update. ..
Thanks for pm.

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Beautiful start.

I guess that Don is Rk himself hiding his identity as madhu won't accept him. Please don't make Rk dead and that ullu madhu 's aashiq. Though the plot seems interesting I can't stand the sight of sultan and madhu. Looking forward to next part. Thank you for pm.