Rishbala OS : Addiction

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Superb update.

It was different, beautiful concept. Loved it. Keep writing

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nice OS .Madhu is addicted to drugs.

RK did the right thing by slapping her and bringing her back to sense.

Madhu got a new addiction.

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APARNA

@ARJUNKIAPS

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

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Edited by kkrnightriders - 9 years ago

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lovRishbala

@lovRishbala

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I have got addicted to ur os

It was WOW

I felt it never ending and I continue reading it

I felt sad for my poor rk , he has to suffer too much

I felt even madhu was suffering some where

Just love it

Keep writing such stories

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Lovely story with a different concept!!!!

Though I felt u could have shown rk doing something more to make madhu come out of the addiction!! Very nice try!!!

I loved the last part where madhu says come lets roar make some cubs!!

Mukund and dipali good in this story wow no villian and vamp!!!

Thanks for pm!!

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Nice os

Madhu and her struggling for her drugs

Its terrible

She is so stubborn

The song with Malik is so lovely

Loved her new addiction

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Dat was one diffrent concept...loved it very much...

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Oh my my !!! I have read first time such kind of story on MB forum 😲😲😲 This was really a very different take on a story about a drug addict .

Madz as a drug addict and RK being her best childhood friend cum lover . Quite a unique portrayal of protagonists . I really loved the way RK would always handle and stop Madz from taking drugs . But then a person when becomes an addict he/she cant give up on that particular thing that easily . At one point of time Madz frustration and irritation of not getting her drugs was sad and breaking but then this is how such ddicts in real life behaves .

But really loved RK's will and determination of healing his wife and being with her in all her tough times . And that slap was a needed one to bring Madz to reality . So finally the slap did its work . It was so painful to see everyone tensed up and sad on Madz condition but finally she got some senses and that was the best thing 👏👏

🤣🤣🤣 ROFL so now Madz has found a new addiction . Damn the last part is hilarious yet sweet 😳😳 But this addiction is much much better than all those bad addictions 🤣🤣🤣

The story was really crisp and to the point and enjoyed reading it . I really liked the title 😳

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Superb os.Ur characterization is totally different. A stubborn drug addict Madhu n a sweet ,caring n patient rk.loved the story. Last part is hilarious .Madhu got new addiction.

Thanks for pm n write more such stories.