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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: leena45678

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UNRES
ACTUALLY READ IT YESTERDAY NIGHT ITSELF.I SAVED THE PAGE FOR READING.😆
WOOW !TOO GOOD OS
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POOR MADHU😭
LOVED THE CLIMAX😆😆
NEW ADDICTION FOR MADHU😆😆
WRITE MORE STORIES👏👏
DO PM ME😳😳



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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: pirl18

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Kya bat h
U made Madhu rich spoil brat. 😡
And and and
Addict too.
Beautiful OS
Loved sex addict Madhu too



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: silverfire

Lovely concept.

Madhu a drug addict n RK cures her.
Felt very sad when Madhu was crying for her drugs n RK also crying on the other side of the door.
Good that he slapped her n brought her back to her senses.
Mukku n dips were good.
So Madhu found a new addiction in the last part. Making Cubs.😃
Loved the OS.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: srksimran

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Hey there it's Simran...actually actually this my first time that I am reading any story of yours...I actually thought that we are already friends...until yesterday😆😆😆
Anyway coming back to the story...it was one the best OS i have read dear👏👏👏...you made Madhu a drug addict😲😲😲...but RK was such a sweet heart...he truly loves her😳...he showed his love to her...but even slapped her when she actually deserved. Anyone would lost his patience if his wife is acting so stubborn...he did the right thing and I am glad Malik didn't say anything to him.

Loved the way hoe finally Madhu tried her best to mend the things...Aww I really felt bas when she looked herself in the mirror and compared her old self with the current one😔...but looks doesn't matter if you love someone truly hain na??...the same thing RK did...he didn't bother how she looked instead he loves her with all his heart...sooo cute😳...hahhaa that part was good when he said you look like a Dayan🤣...and loved their lovemaking scene oops correction cub making scene😆😆😆

Lovely OS.
Thanks for the PM dear
Love you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze



Oh my my !!! I have read first time such kind of story on MB forum😲😲😲This was really a very different take on a story about a drug addict .


Madz as a drug addict and RK being her best childhood friend cum lover . Quite a unique portrayal of protagonists . I really loved the way RK would always handle and stop Madz from taking drugs . But then a person when becomes an addict he/she cant give up on that particular thing that easily . At one point of time Madz frustration and irritation of not getting her drugs was sad and breaking but then this is how such ddicts in real life behaves .


But really loved RK's will and determination of healing his wife and being with her in all her tough times . And that slap was a needed one to bring Madz to reality . So finally the slap did its work . It was so painful to see everyone tensed up and sad on Madz condition but finally she got some senses and that was the best thing👏👏


🤣🤣🤣ROFL so now Madz has found a new addiction . Damn the last part is hilarious yet sweet😳😳 But this addiction is much much better than all those bad addictions🤣🤣🤣


The story was really crisp and to the point and enjoyed reading it . I really liked the title😳



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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: bianyamen

WOW.. Loved the concept and the way you wrote the struggles

that shadowed them was amazing👏👏



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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: 23121989

nice OS
loved madhu new addiction 😆



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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ..snow_flake..

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Wow!!! Itni achhi ideas aate kaha se hai..
Simply awesome..
You portrayed Madhu's addiction for drug was superb yaar...
And I love the last one.. The kiss... 😉
Simply awesome.. Hats off!!



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