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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Oh wow superb OS ! Poorva how did you get this thought ? It is simply fantabulous. Have seen drug addict only in movies yaar. You well described their pain and restlessness. Yeah most importantly the withdrawal syndrome. I can't imagine my madhu in this character but RK indeed brought back the original madhu ! He loves her so souch yaar.

Dips and mukhu are good here. But still mukhu can't be proud of his treatment as it was absolutely madhu who brought her out of her shell. Because of her father and husband she gave up. All I can see is determination stubbornness and willingness to make her family happy !

You nailed the last part poorva ! Madhu is a lion yaar!?..

Thanks for PM !

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bianyamen

@bianyamen

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

WOW.. Loved the concept and the way you wrote the struggles

that shadowed them was amazing 👏👏

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Diff concept... Nice OS dear !
Keep writing...
Tq for PM :)

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Thanks Everyone for liking and commenting..

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APARNA

@ARJUNKIAPS

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Lovely os.beautifully written.Madhu's addiction for drugs turned into her addiction for rishab.
Thnx 4 the pm.

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Thatz superb story.. But am angry with madhu for making rk suffering hell.. Really the way rk was handling drugged madhu is terrible.. Madhu's durg addicted actions were scary..!! But atlast she co operated.. Haha.. The last last is hilarious..!! Tnx fr pm

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

WOW!! wonderful story dear...loved it

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Nisha

@23121989

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

nice OS
loved madhu new addiction 😆

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..snow_flake..

@..snow_flake..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

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Wow!!! Itni achhi ideas aate kaha se hai..
Simply awesome..
You portrayed Madhu's addiction for drug was superb yaar...
And I love the last one.. The kiss... 😉
Simply awesome.. Hats off!!

Edited by ..snow_flake.. - 9 years ago

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: madhurish
First!!!🥳
Super os dear..
Interesting concept... Madhu being a drug addict & Rk as her sweet friend cum husband...
Felt bad when madhu screamed & cried in her room for drugs... & Rk crying at tge other end of the door for his wife...
Rk slapped her nicely & brought some senses back to her... That was a much needed reality check for madhu... If she had gone like this then surely she would have killes herself... Glad rk stepped at the right time & saved his madhu...
Thanks to Dr. Mukkund & dips for helping rk in his mission to cure madhu from her addiction...
Loved the last bit so much... Lion finding her new addiction in her lioness Rk haha... & their new mission is to make beautiful cubs!!! Haha... Lovely!
Thanks for this os...

Thanks dear.

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