RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mimibm

Are you going to post your update tonight? Please... please...pretty please...UPDATE 😆😛


Ahh... no. Not tonight. Trust me... I wanted to. I know it's been too long. I am sorry. But I am not done... yet. Will finish it in a bit though. Then will post it whenever Hiyu will be able to edit it. Most probably tomorrow night.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Imtehaan ho gayi intezaar ki
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mimibm

Imtehaan ho gayi intezaar ki


Hahah! Mimi! What if I say the same? 😛😉🤣

Kidding... I know I am late... just trying to find someone to proofread it for me... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Maria superb update, loved it, i go in a trance reading this, such is the magic of this FF on me. Must say you are a brilliant writer, continue soon, waiting to know what happens next.

Thanks for the PM dear.


Thank you so much! I am happy you are enjoying the story. Will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: GERUA

mind blowing update


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

omg!dat was one thrilling n mindblowing update👏👍🏼⭐️
. It lukd like a n action movie wid real villian. But this poor n clumsy villan doesnt know dat his real enemy is RUDRA not Rishaan ( IF RUDRA IS REAL RK ] ..

I STILL WANT LUV TRIANGLE Rudra maya Rishaan bcz TWINS hav got face of my RK so i cant tolerate my RK anyoneelse other than his /my fav Madhubala.

Hey enough of action n blood now . Plz show sum luvscenes or a lil bit progress in their luv life / luv triangle of Rudra maya Rishaan❤️ . 😉😳 Its a request 😛


Thank you so much.
Hahah... you are the first one to ask me for the love triangle... 😆
I can't say anything... tell me what you think after the next chapter... will be posting as soon as Steph is done proofreading... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome fabulous nikki.
well written loved it
tfs pm too dear. 🤗


Nikki? 😲😕😆
I am Maria, Chitra... you forgot me? 😆
Anyway... thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manna43

Fabulous update as usual.Well written .continue soon.


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! amazing chapter...but my favt part is the interview part where Shaurya saw Rudra and found that he is more like RK than Rishaan...the last part was horrifying...Did Shaurya damaged Rishaan's face? Oh no...poor guy...he finally gave up ...The part where Rudra was crying with the limp body of Rishaan made me cry too...waiting for the brothers to get united...& a face off between Rudra and Shaurya...


Thank you so much.
I am glad you liked that scene. And yes, Shaurya damaged Rishaan's face.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Another fabulous update Maria ⭐️

Thank you so much.
Shaurya's unfortunate family is introduced. His wife Shalini or the kids have no idea about his real face. Rudra questions them. When he did not get any answers then he produces those obscene sketches of Madhubala to her. Shalini identifies it as Shaurya;s. She is shocked to react, Shalini states that they had some problems in the initial stages of their marriage. Rudra asks about his Canada visit which took a little longer than necessary. Inspector agnihotri is surprised of Rudra's knowledge. Shalini tells that they reconcile their relationship after that Canada visit. Rudra asks her to attend press conference with him and make an appeal to Shaurya. Which she refuses because she wanted to protects the kids from the aftermath. But when the children are adament to attend press conference then she looked helpless and stand by them.
Yes, the family was as clueless as anyone can be. However, Rudra did find a way to make use of them, still.
Rudra was fab in this update. He seems like convinced that Shaurya's family in unaware of his doings. He was a little tough with Shalini but then very sweet with Sonia. He was behaving nicely with the children. The children trust their father very much. They refuse to believe taht Shurya is responsible for all those murders and kidnapping. They thinks that he is framed. Rudra manipulates them and make them agree to attend a press conference with him and appeal to Shurya. When Shalini protests kids argues with her for their father. Rudra manages to cajole little Sonia to confess the big secret between her and Daddy. Sonia leads them to her cupboard, where Rudra hid his gun. This was a shock to his family. There police got hold of another property paper which was not in Shaurya's name. They finally managed to find his hide out
Yeah.. Rudra was a little cunning, no? He is manipulator, alright... 😆
Shaurya is again very cruel to Rishaan. he acts very confusing sometimes. He wanted to be a father figure to Rishaan, he likes him somewhere but he hates RK's face. he is so very jealous of RK. He gave more scars in to his face. Rishaan and shaurya both notices Rudra's press conference with his family. I am sad to know that Shaurya was not moved by his family's plea. He was not affected ,not even by the little kid. Shaurya was almost sure that he will be caught soon, he notices Rudra and comments that he resembles RK more. Ia m glad that he notice that finally. Rishaan knew by the looks of his brother that he was thretening Shurya using his family. Shurya urges him to confess his past sins. He confesses that he killed all those girls because they looked similar to Madubala somewhere. And the makes an indecent comment about Maya which again angered Rishaan. I strongly believe that Rishaan loves Maya. Rishaan thinks about his past, where his bro punishing him for some mistake. My wild guess is that Rishaan killed or did something bad to their father, and Rudra was close to their father. Rishaan's original name is Aditya.
About Shaurya and Rishaan... yes... their dynamics are very twisted. Shaurya actually has feelings for Rishaan. Very conflicted feelings. I have explained that in page 18... if you are unclear about them... you can check the comments there... And, as you said, sadly his family has no effect on Shaurya, however, he did not like seeing them with Rudra. About Rishaan's feelings... well.. I can't say anything... and your wild guess is really wild.. 😆
The police team and Rudra finally arriving at the hide out only to find an unconscious Rishaan, he is dying because of horrible tortures, Rudra came for his brother calls him Aditya. Is this the first time Rudra calling him by name?? I am waiitng for the next update for Rudra and Shaurya's confrontation. Rishaan will hopefully be saved because he don't deserve to die with creep's hands.
The first time I have mentioned it yes... but if you ever get to read this story from the beginning again (haha... I know it's unlikely... but still) ... you will notice... Rudra always avoided calling him Rishaan... he mostly called him brother... he only called him Rishaan when he really had to... Again.. about Rishaan's fate... I cannot say...
Updat esoon Maria, i am dying to read more..


Will be updating soon... Thanks for your comment. Loved it.

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