Rishbala OS: Stand by You (NEW) 12-29-2015

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catharsis

@catharsis

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

What an amazing piece of work! Beautiful story, Di! 👏 So complete n so perfect!
I adore this Rishbala soo much! Madhu is one strong woman to have successfully overcome such a dreadful past. With RK being by her side, no harm can ever touch her.
RK is all that a girl can ask for. He's such a gem of a person. He was always there as an invisible pillar of strength for Madhu, even when she wasn't aware...
They loved sincerely n selflessly...
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, Di!
Thank u for this awesome OS n also for d pm...

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS.

Enjoyed reading it.

Liked the strong yet vulnerable Madhu.

RK is a real hero here.

loved the way you have written.

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome story

Rk he is Madhu's saviour

Sultan he is a real devil

And his family supporting him

Rk had made a right decision

By ruining them

The last part Madhu as a 7 yrs girl

And Rk as a15 yrs teenager

Madhu way of asking him to marry her

Loved a lot

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sss333

@sss333

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Heart touching os.

Really nice the WY to take the plot.

Naive immature madhu to rude suspecious madhu it's indeed needed for the suffering she went through.

Ohh I love this caring rishab.love u for the beautiful os

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful OS
Madhu hv proposed at age of 7 lovely
Sultan gets wht he deserved

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APARNA

@ARJUNKIAPS

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful story enriched with various emotional aspects.The way the story progressed connecting the dots was just amazing.thanx 4 pm

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RAONE8

@RAONE8

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

AWESOME OS👏👏

Beautifully written...really loved how u penned down both d characters👍🏼

it was a complete story

loved d beginning where RK handed Madhu d gun for her satisfaction😉

loved all their encounters😳

well Madhu had a very painful past...but finally she was saved by her own bravery n her hero's help😳

especially loved the childhood bit 😉

keep writing more such wonderful stories...waitin for ur next awesome creation

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

awesome awesome n just awesme. as u mentioned it was so long os but it told a long story short . u penned it in an awesome way n even included a love story within. thanks a lot for this. loved it. n thank u so much for the pm