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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Note :_

Guys there might be some confusion regarding few things so I am clarifying it seperately.

1. Trishna went in coma straight on that unfateful day of her life. She was found unconcious that is why madhu Cldnt ever asked her. N she went in coma bcoz of sudden assault on her dignity so it was more like a shocker.

2. Malliks n kundras knew each other before as rk n trish were from same college n their friendship let to mohan n shamsher Malliks friendship n vice versa.

3.The families were close but Malliks never talked of madhu to kundras as she was sent to London for her studies before rk n trish met in their college n madhu was actually a very repulsive girl in the sense of not thinking abt. Speaking before n she had lot of crisis in neighbourhood that is y they avoided bringing her back to India until she learned some control.

4. Straight after doctors declared trish to be in coma Malliks changed their place as they feared for their daughters dignity n self respect to be mocked in world. Kundras tried to find them after rk gained consciousness but they already vanished away.

5.Rk wasn't found in room bcoz nikhil might have got him shifted to other place with help of his men's n then he himself hit himself n went unconcious on the same place as trish was molested that is how they both were found together n mind you Malliks didn't knew abt rk being hit n being eye witness of tragedy so that is one of the reason they avoided being close to anyone.

6.Madhu never told her parents that she was working with rk only after trish gain consciousness n rk asked her to leave she told them the truth of all the months n what she did with rk.

7.Malliks wanted to apologize to rk but madhu told them abt. Rk not wanting to tell anyone n she didn't wanted to hurt him by going against his words so she didn't let them brought the topic again infront of anyone n that is one of the reasons why they didn't said anything abt. Their marriage.

8.Malliks have clarified the trish fiasco to kundras but kundras are still unaware of the facts that nikhil framed rk. They only knew that he escaped from hospital straight after.

9.Rk have been searching for him but everytime they get close to him he flees away but dnt worry he ll be caught soon.

10.Most imp. Point rk flinched away from everyone he can't bear anyone's touch now. His parents are unaware of it which wld be shown in next part.

That is for all now n yes he is actually pissed n irritated he isn't faking his irritation nor his paralysis. I hope you guys realise that it isn't easy for him to live with some one who stabbed him a fear is always there in him which he needs to overcome n he ll I assure you that.

Will post the update soon. Stay tuned.

Edited by Love-Blossoms - 10 years ago

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

superb update.. Each & every update took me by surprise.. Madhu blackmailed him, well thats the best thing she did & all her redemptions going great, rk's conditions for marriage was also great, ofcouse he doesnt want his family to suffer more.. :)))

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

precap:- lastly the call rk made.. My mind wondering of two possibilities.. First, if its positive, he'll be talking about tracking nikhil out and if its negetive, he'll be planning to get rid of madhu.. Continue soon ::)) waiting for next update ::))

Edited by as-Sweet - 10 years ago

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Awesome update, so they are married and Madhu blackmailed him to get married.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Waiting for the next update, continue soon.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Well for me everything was crystal clear... U know i m smart... Lol... But still thanks for ur brief explanation...

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

The first three updates have been from my perspective now we ll move forward to Rks pov. And please let me know how many parts would you love to read in this story bcoz its really getting bigger n bigger. And thanxx for likes n comments on previous part. I have posted note on page 11 clarifying few points. Do read it. So here goes next part. Dedicated to Ishu (Burn them all) for her lovely comments.

Part 4
Rks pov.
Cappuccino House, Mumbai
"Where the hell is she, I clearly told her I ll meet in an hour but still this girl can never come on time" i cribbed for the millionth time sipping my cappuccino. Looking around I saw the place of hangout for me n my bestie (Shweta Singh) hasn't changed much. I really missed coming over here all these months. Last time I visited when shweta got the gud news of being transferred to London as she is a Psychologist as well as counselor and seeing her awesome grades she was appointed in top hospital of London. Shweta was mom's best friends daughter n that is how we met. But truth to be told we always fought more than developing friendship but still she was the only close person I had irrespective of our lil age difference of two three years we got close in our eight grade.

But then time flies so quickly we opted for different fields but our friendship never changed we still fought like bunnies but remained bestie forever. Two years back she shifted to London n just after that I met trish who became a close friend too until that nikhil came who started spoiling our friendship. The things that followed after embarked a image in my head n only shweta could help me out. I contacted her last month to ask her whereabouts but still not revealing the tragedies of my life. She informed me she ll come next month n here I am waiting for her from past 30 mins. But there is no sign of her. That girl can never change in her time issues I wondered.
Finally she decide to show up but a sudden fear gripped my heart. "How will she react seeing me in this state. What if she breaks our friendship?
Stop it rk what rubbish are you thinking you know that she loves you more than herself ".I was lost in my thoughts gripping the table cloth tightly when her voice bought me out of my trance,
"Hey handsome wassup " she said beaming at me, but I just gave her a weak smile. She got confused n said "What the hell man here I have been missing you from past two years n you dnt care to even hug me i thought you will directly jump but such a lame reaction duhh ".I forwarded my hand to her closing my eyes dreading that I ll flinch away, but not feeling any touch I saw her still rooted to ground looking at me shocked n then I decided it was time to show her the real me n i moved my wheelchair out from the backside of table n looked at shweta.

Her hand went to her mouth n she gasped n a tear roll down my eye. She was by my side in seconds n she was about to wipe my tears but I flinched as soon as I saw her hand coming close to me n a horror expression crossed her face.

Sensing our environment she sat down on seat opposite to me n looked at me blankly. I was avoiding her gaze which was demanding answers but how should I tell her everything?

At first I thought it would be easy but seeing the same love for me in her eyes which was years ago I can't tell her. But I had to get it out of my chest otherwise the nightmares will never stop haunting me. Finally she decided to break the ice n asked "Are you going to tell me what happened or are you going to avoid me for whole time "she asked angrily n i could see that it was because I didn't told her anything before that's why she is mad. Atleast she is not thinking of breaking our friendship. She glared at me n gathering my courage I told her everything from befriending to trish to the incident three months back n also my marriage with madhu n the conditions.

"That girl that.. She was about to curse madhu but on an impulse I stopped her saying "no".
Don't curse her I said in a hoarse voice.
"Damm you Rishabh ". Her coffee arrived n she gulped it down n i could see her getting calm a lil bit. "Will you help me from getting over the nightmares n this flinching issues?" I asked the most imp. Question in my head n she looked at me as if I was mad n said
"do you even have to ask this what am I for to help people who are in troubles that's my job and in your case I ll do it even if you dnt ask me ".
"Thank you means a lot to me just dnt tell mom n dad they r not aware about any of these things", I really didn't wanted them to know about any of these.
"Seriously wen did we became so formal with each other I thought you called me last month for my help only bcoz i m your bestie then why these thank yous ".
Wanting to lighten the atmosphere I humored her "since you became London hot counselor ".
"Attempt was good handsome but u see I m not in mood of humour for now not atleast I kick some asses or an ass", n i knew what she meant but I dnt want her to talk to her badly no matter what happened she was my wife n i cant let my friend insult her or anything.
"Don't give me that look how do you expect me to stay quiet after what she did to you ",and I continued staring at her seriously n she sighed
"fine I won't, tell Aunty I will come in evening to meet them n tell her to prepare kheer for me i really missed it n for you sexy well I ll only say you are dam brave man inspite of everything you still love her n i can see the future in your eyes that you ll forgive her sooner or later. And yes we ll start your sessions from day after tomorrow as you have already stressed yourself by recalling it today so I dnt want you to stress yourself more just go with the flow n one more thing don't try to compare her present actions with her past ones because you had to observe her n see her in different light n if you want that to happen let her do what she is doing. I can ease your mind but not your heart. She is the one who had given you that wound n she has the only power to heal it n like you said she regrets it so let her just what she wants to do in order to reduce her guilt as well as your hurt otherwise she might get depressed if she is not allowed to show herself truely" she completed n i listened to her each word carefully.
"But why do I flinch away "i asked the imp. Question that was in my mind from long.

"Simple because the incident has created a place in your head n you think if anyone comes near you or touch you they will hurt you its not your fault it's all human psychology. Some things are not able to create a place even when they happen 100s of time but some things get etched in our minds in just one go. You just need a grip on your emotions dnt compare your past with present n especially dnt see new Madhu in old light see her in a new way because you also know that she is not to be blamed totally for her actions so just try to see her in different perspectiven yes from today onwards observe her bcoz only your observation will lead you to see the truth whether she loves you or its a facade rest I ll help u but for your heart let her the do the work dnt be the judge but a observer that's it ", she completed n i looked at amazed.

She was really Damm gud now I am absolutely sure that she ll be able to help me get over this.
She left after five mins as she had some work to do n i pondered over her words.
Do I really dnt want madhu to go away from me?
Can I do this? Can I give her a chance? Am I ready to take the risk.?Can I really be normal with madhu like before?
There were so many questions in my mind but there was only one answer "those who take risk they only win in the end. "
"Madhu just prove that you truely love me dnt disappoint me this time ",I whispered to myself n left for my home to see things in different way.
May be just maybe this time I ll get love.

So no madhu or RM but it was needed because when he decides to take a step forward then only madhus redemption will be successful until his fears are there in his brain hevwont be able to forget her past action n in order to see her differently he first needs to stop having nightmares n flinching issues should be gone.
So how was new entry. Hope you guys like her. N how do u find their friendship. Do Likes n comments. Silent readers few words won't do any harm.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

"Madhu just prove that you truely love me dnt disappoint me this time" - this single line took the cake... I loved this line the most in this update which has indepth meaning & it also shows his love for her & he is ready to trust her again & take her back on his life but hoping she wont disappoint him again saying its all a facade... Then he will be completely broken... He cannot survive again if she wound him... But i m sure madhu will prove herself for worth loving..

I m so happy with the new entry... A shrink!

She is cool... Thoughy she behaved like a frnd when she saw rk in that state & started to curse her but Rk's love will never let anyone say wrong abt madhu... Or let anyone hurt her... Himself too...

Then she composed herself & tried to see the reason behind madhu's act & nicely she guided rk to see madhu in the new lime light... Hope she will help him ease from flinching... But i m sure only madhu can heal his heart...

Hmm... I think madhu might not take her entry at home positively... She might feel jealous as her relationship with rk is also not strong as she is only trying to mend things now so this entry of the doc will put her in worry but later when she realises that she was just helping her frnd rk to move forward & forget the past dreadful incident... Then they both will befriend each other i guess...

Interesting turn... Well i guessed it was a detective buy this one is fsr better than mine...

Loving my Rk so much yaar... He is really trying hard to give madhu a chance... Super...

Wonderful update baby...

Loved ur intense dialogues...

And also loved the bond btn swetha & Rk... Oops shot doc & handsome..

Continue soon...

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Yipeee Second in comments 🥳

OMG !! THANKS for dedicating this chappy to ME . I am doing Bhangra(since this is the only dance which I can do without any practice 🤣) for this chappy that you dedicated to me . 😳😳

Awww firstly I don't know where to start bcz so much of psychology was involved in this chapter that I had to actually google about all those counselling things and all LOL . 😆😆

I loved this RK- Shweta's bonding so much . She is really a true friend who guided RK in a very good way . 😳

Uff RK he is such a sweet fellow . He doesn't want to share his pain with his family and he is all the time living with that pain 😭😭 My RK . Give some happy moments to him so that he can smile from heart 😳😳

RKs love is so true and pure that he din't even allowed his bestie to curse Madz . Uff I like this RK so much 😳😳

I just can't agree more than this to what Shweta said to RK . Yes now RK can't judge her past actions to present actions but STILL I want you to let RK take his own sweet time in observing her . In overcoming his trust issues with Madz and most importantly in Loving her back once again . Although this time Madz is not going to break his heart but still from RKs POV its important for him to take time to again build that trust . 😳

Hats off to you babes for writing such intense dialogues . I am just in love with Shweta's mature and brutally true dialogues . "your observation will lead you to see the truth whether she loves you or its a facade rest I ll help u but for your heart let her the do the work dnt be the judge but a observer that's it " This dialogue I liked the most 😳😳

I hope shweta's role is lengthy bcz she is the one whom I found sensible , intelligent and quite practical who actually knows whats going wrong with RK and where 😳😳

I am waiting impatiently now that when will that Nikhil the villain enter in your story so that RK can blow him left-right and center ?? Plz make his entry soon na 😭

Once again a very nice chappy especially all the dialogues I found were so so so good . 👏👏

Thanks for dedicating this chapter to me . 😛

TC 😳

Hey ! regarding to the ques you asked that how long we want , well you are the writer and you have the freedom to write it in as many parts you want 😳 . We are anyways hungry for reading stories so you can continue according to your schedule . Bcz I want you to update this story EVERYDAY 😳

Edited by BurnThemAll - 10 years ago