Rishbala TS : Safe & sound : Completed Pg 18 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Pheeww r hero returned home safe & sound. M sooo happy. Sorry, 2 say i did expected another part wid d pregnancy phase wid more elaboration, bt koi nahi, it was awwssuumm. Can undrstnd hw difficult it can b 4 a women, wen her hubby is away n his life is @ stake & spclly wen she has 2 kids 2 luk after & another 1 carrying. Womens shud b strong of d way u portrayed our Madhu. Our Rishabh is a warrior, who's born only 2 win coz losing is nt his cup of tea. MoDha were n awsum parent. Taking care of their pregnant daughter(i wont say daughter in law), while their own son was away, hw difficult it must have been 4 them. Ol in ol d TS was awwssuumm Rochelle(if m nt wrong wid d name). U mixed every emotion ryt from romance in d beginning, worry & fear in d middle & perfect reunion @ d end, giving it a perfect taste. Do keep writing more. Jst waiting 4 ur another master piece of writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending. Thank you for giving happy ending.
I am looking forward for your new story do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Perfect ending to a beautiful story! Loved it! Please write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was a beautiful and emotional update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very much deserved happy ending...So rishabh experienced the pregnancy phase of emotions of father with madhu...very beautifuly written that part.👏...and both super happy to welcome their doll😊
Very beautiful story.and beautiful banner...⭐️ ...Aristocratic...⭐️
Thanks for pm...Keep up the good work more...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part... !! He is back safe & sound... He also had lots of sufferings.. The baby part was cute... They got what they want, a princess... :) :) beautiful ending.. !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm Roch... !! :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silverfire

Wow...happy ending.😛

Very glad Rishu came back safe n sound.
So he's going back to Air Force. He is a warrior. It's in his blood. Nobody can stop him. Hope he is forever safe n sound n their little cocoon is intact forever.
Thank u for this lovely story.😛

Thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Ahh at last happy ending

Beautiful end
Pla come soon with a new story

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Awesome.lovely,emotional,beautiful update dear Roch.⭐️

You wrote it so well,aww that's so great that Rk came back sound and safe.😃
Mohan and Radha also played a good part .like them too.😃
Rk is a brave man,and a perfect husband and father and Madhu is a perfect wife and a strong women ,she handled everything well inspite of her pain and worries.👏 👏
Love all their moments together and with their kids,so sweet and lovely.❤️
Perfect ending 😛and enjoyed reading it so much.😳 Thanks for this story🤗and waiting from many more from you dear.😉Banner is way too awesome.⭐️

Aww thanks a lot for your lovely feedback Deepti 🤗 Glad you loved it 😳 Will be back with a new story soon 😉😆

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