Dark shadow Rishbala SS Last part pg20

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is the copy paste of my old Premeer ss.It has 10 chapters.Since its copy paste i won't pm daily.but there will be regular updates.


pt1=pg1 pt2=pg4 pt3-pg6 pt4-pg9 pt5-pg11 pt6-pg12 pt7-pg15 pt8-pg16 pt9-pg18 pt10-pg20


Dark shadow Part 1


Ranveer who is a professional killer sees a lady coming to his mansion.She is a tall slim fair lady who has worn a simple saree.Her straught hair is shining.Her tiny lips are like a plum..
He is surprised as no other young lady has entered his place before.
R:Please sit Madam.
She sits with a smile.
She:Hi..I'm Madhubala.
R:Nice to meet you.Tell me...how can i help you?
MADHU:I want you to kill someone.
He is shocked.
He thinks:For the first time a beautiful young lady is approaching me to kill someone.
R:Who?
MADHU:RK.
Madhu gives him RK's photo.
Ranveer looks at the photo.RK looks very innocent and cute.
R:Why do you want to kill him?
Madhu's anger destroys the beauty of her face.

A scene comes into her mind.
Madhu is sitting on the bed as a bride.Her husband Swayam enters the room and sits besides her.He looks at her with romantic eyes.Suddenly somebody knocks at the door.
Swayam gets irritated:Who has come to disturb us?
He opens the door.That was RK.Swayam and Madhu are shocked.
S:RK?Why are you here?
RK beats him heavily.Madhu cries loudly.Blood is hugging Swayam's body.

Present:
Madhu's eyes get filled up with tears.
MADHU:But Swayam did'nt die.But he got paralysed.RK killed my sister Meher also.
Ranveer is shocked.
R:RK looks so innocent.He does't look like a killer.
MADHU:There is a devil hidden behind his innocent look.
R:Why did RK kill Meher?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems interesting.
Waiting for the story to unfold.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting start.
Thanks for the pm.
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Interesting start, loved the part.
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Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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very interesting
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Very Interesting part.😊
Why Rk kills Madhu Husband and Her Sister?
Please Update Next part soon.😊
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Wow dark story

Nice starting
Loved it

Madhu wants rk to die
She's blaming him for her agony

Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome very interesting one update 👏
thanks for pm 😊 again a killing game wala story 😉
oh god Rk is a devil in innocent looks disguise
but i think something is hidden behind Rk's behavior
keep updating and thanks for pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting beginning! Continue soon please.

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