Rima 3S: AANKHEN (part 2, 3 + epilogue updated on pg.11)

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

brilliant and awesome story 👏
loved the concept 👍🏼 thanks 4 focus on this concept its very nice n fabulously written also...Trishna was such a true best friend of madhu bt how madhu is responsible 4 trish's death ? waiting 2 know 4 that eagerly...n pls dont separate them n mainly pls pls pls update both the new TS's soon

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Back to back surprise from u sudha, lovely start,well bonded friendship, i guess madhu was not really responsible for trishna death, let me wait for the truth to come out.

Story for a goo cause, super dear, keep up the good work, waiting for next part

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Clara20

@Clara20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome start dear...

madhu killed trishna...i dnt think so...want to knw why she said that...wht actually happened...

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: 989859
Awsome concept dear
But I m
Curious how Madhu killed Trishna
Plz update next part soon waiting
Tysm for pm

Thanks dear...

U ll know in the coming updates...

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: _Angel-Juri_
loved the concept 👍🏼
story is interesting...waiting for next part 😃
cont. soon...thanx for the pm...

Thanks dear...

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: silverfire
Wow...a new concept.
Madhu was blind n trishna donated her eyes.
Her eyes reminds him of his sissy.
Very emotional.
They both were involved in an accident n madhu thinks she has killed trishna. She is living in guilt.
Waiting for tHe story to unfold.
Awesome writing as usual, di.

Thanks dear...

Lovely discription...

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Nithunavi
Firstly its a great choice of concept...must say..!! Its very beautifully penned...the organ donation by trish and madhu and also the words u came up with trish as dialogs when she was going to make madhu donate their organs was excellent...its an encouraging way to make aware everyone the importance of organ donation...trish was a real bestie here...Rk is really shattered as same as madhu for trish...loved Rishbala hug...it wud be a misunderstanding i expect that Rk blaming madhu...but i know u will give us happy ending...overall beautiful & emotional Story...!! 😊

Thanks dear...

Such a sweet comment...

Loved it...

Glad u liked the concept & the way i have written it...

U will get a happy ending only...