Rima 3S: AANKHEN (part 2, 3 + epilogue updated on pg.11)

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Rksuperstar

@Rksuperstar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome and emotional start. I love it. Wait for next update. Thanks for pm me.

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catharsis

@catharsis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Beautiful concept n story, Sudha di. 👏
I was emotionally moved.
Waiting to know more.
Thnx for d pm.
Update soon.

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AdeebA

@pirl18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Ver emotional ...
but bittu g is mota golgappa uncle
🤣

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

lovely start..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awesome and brilliant TS, loved the concept, the importance of eye donation.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Continue soon, waiting for the next.

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

OMG!! what a topic! I just loved it...& the story was also very good...

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

what a beautiful story. I do not think you have offended anyone. In fact you have brought an important topic to light.

I do not even know where to begin. Madhu and Trishna's friendship is beautiful. From the beginning their relationship was about accepting each other and giving the other strength.

Madhu lost her eyesight and Trishna lost her father and brother. Two people who became everything to each other.

RK's behaviour is understandable to me now. His shock, his loss is so painful.

Though RK & Madhu are strangers to each other, they already have a bond between them. Hopefully with time and patience, that bond will get stronger.

I am looking forward to the next part.

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

nice concept
beautifully written 😊
waiting for the next part cont soon 😊
i have a great desire to learn braille since years but cant able to learn as there is no such instutions near us
😔

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Wow !!! Awsm story ,
interesting start ,
I luvveed the topic very much ,
Nd nice charactersketch ,
Rk is a doctor nd madhu a teacher ,
haiye !!! rishbala's hug in rain ,
Madhu nd trishna ws best friend
nd trishna asked rk to give her eyes to madhu .
nd rk did the opreation ,
me thinking how madhu killed trishna ????
waiting for the next part ,,
keep writing nd keep rocking ;)

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