Rima 3S: AANKHEN (part 2, 3 + epilogue updated on pg.11) - Page 4

Originally posted by: madhurish

Awww...😭😭

Naa kasta pattu oru emotional subject ah vachi story eludhu na nee comedy panra?? Aww...😭😭😆

Boss unga mulai ye mula... Epadi neenga plot ah guess pannenga?? Naa apadiye shock agiten... Yes...rk will not accept madhu's love... He will say he could see her sister in her eyes lol... 😆😆 neenga sonna maathiri kannu matum dhan un thangachi dhu mathadhu ellam enadhu dhanu open ah sollala naalum oru mathri solli rk va accept panna vachiduven... I will make madhu tell...rk when u do romance i ll close my eyes in pleasure so no issuse just touch me baby..😆😆

Enakum serious ah stories eludha theriyadhu...adhu unaku theriyum... But i really want to write a message conveying story so wrote this one...

Glad u liked it...thanks dear...

Next part will be a bit more emotional i guess but with a happy ending... So enjoy...

Hehe... Nee sonnadhuku aapuram dhan enake thonuchu andha scene nee varuvaayana padadhu scene madhiri irukunu Lol...

Loved ur crazy funny comment...

Thanks dear...

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Interesting story.

Loved the choice of topic and highlighting the importance of eye donation.

Waiting to know the backstory.

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

omg brilliant and awesome TS 👏
loved the concept 👍🏼
Trishna was such a true best friend of madhu
now what madhu did the she's so heartbroken by her past 😲
i think there wil be some misunderstanding
by the way loved RishBala Hug 😉
thanks for pm and update both the new TS's soon !! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: manna43

Nice cs n topic selection is very good.emotional update.continue soon.

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Very nice concept.

One line which touched me was when madhu thinks its only the world which reminds her of her disability and show their sympathy. It was very touching and true also. More than increase in the blind population it is how they are being treated in the society. Its really very sad.

You have written it very beautifully. I think you know many things about visually impaired people as you have mention about the subjects and some information about this disability. It is very nice story.

Looking forward for the next part to know why madhu thinks she killed her friend.😊

Originally posted by: ..BlackSwan..

Why did madhu call RK by the name Trish used to call?? She just donated her eyes or brain too? 😆 well jokes apart I really RK won't start seeing madhu in a SISTERLY way. 😉 as there was marriage talks I guess he's going to be her pati. ❤️ well how is she responsible for trishna's death? Same question is running in my mind. You have chosen a very different and sensitive concept Sudha..😳 plz carry on soon.. Thanks for PM.