Chand chupa badal mein Rishbala SS Last Part pg54 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it
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Awesome update.. and thanks for pm !! 👏
THANKS FOR DEDICATION I M HAPPY LOVE U MY FRIEND
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well coming to the update i loved it wow RK admiring Madhu in beautiful saree wow they are lovely together 😳 and so Abhay is with Piya now finally well plz dont make piya hurt a lot that she's with RK plz let her know soon about that she's with abhay and make her Love him that RK ad Rk cant be her true love u know as he belongs to Madhu always 😉!! No comments on Sahil let then enjoy their life without marriage 😆 !!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update jas..
U include all my equally favourite couple...love u..
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Superb update. Please update soon. Thanks for pm me.
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Supperrbbb story...Read both the parts in one go...intresting...So 3 different pairs...So abhay acting as Rishu...Madhu and Rk living together...AAhil & Sanam live in relationship...3 pairs has a diff story...eager to read further..!! Amaizing concept 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it dear Aahil and Sanam are staying with Padmini and they both are in a live in relationship and they are gonna soon be parents that's nice they think Madhu and Rishab are a couple but it's not well Abhay goes to Piya house and Piya thinks its Rishab and hugs him
Luved it hope.that Piya comes to know that Abhay is Rishab for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Update

Priya wants Rishab as she really misses him
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Interesting one.Aahil n sanam also included with abhay n piya.But I am waiting for when rk feels for madhu more than a friend. Abhay is cheating piya but rk is for madhu only.waiting for next update .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 4

Thanks a lot Sydell for the surprise banner.
I dedicate this chapter to Sydell as she wants Abhay to turn positive.Abhay's redemption starts here.


Rishab seems to be upset.
Madhu:Rishu..why are you sad?
RISHAB:Piya has'nt called me till now.No news about her.Is she fine there?I'm tensed Madhu.

MADHU:Don't worry.She will call you.
Madhu's words fall on Rishab's deaf ears.
MADHU:Your brain is hot.It has to be cool.Only then you will be relieved.Let us have ice stick.
RISHAB:I have no mood Madhu.
MADHU:Come Rishu.
She pulls him.They have ice stick together.
Rishab smiles:Madhu..you remember we used to have ice stick together during our childhood days talking about our school days.
She smiles.
MADHU:Rishu..you remember all that?
RISHAB:Ya..how can i forget those sweet days?
She smiles.


Months passed...
Rishab rings up Abhay.
ABHAY:Hi Rishu...how are you?
RISHAB:I'm ok.There is no news about Piya.You are also in UK.Any idea about her?
Abhay stammers:Me?How can i know where Piya is?I did'nt see her here.She may be in some other place in UK.
Rishab puts the phone down.He is gloomy as he lost his last hope also.

Abhay is guilty.
ABHAY:Rishu is so upset about Piya.Here i'm enjoying with Piya.I'm wrong.I have to tell the truth to Piya.
Piya comes in her night suit.She looks hot.Abhay can't take his eyes off her.
Piya is shy.
PIYA:Why are you looking at me like this?
ABHAY:Even in the night suit you are so attractive.
She blushes.
She comes towards him.But her leg slips and is about to fall.He catches her.They look into each other's eyes.He leans towards her lips sensually.She closes her eyes.

He captures her skin with burning passion.
They become one forgetting themselves.
After that incident Abhay is guilty.He goes to the terrace and sheds tears.
ABHAY:What did i do?I cheated my own brother and my beloved who is my brother's girl.I made her mine in every way.
He goes crazy.
Piya comes.
PIYA:Rishab..why are you standing here alone?
ABHAY:Simply.
She sees tears in his eyes.
PIYA:Why are you crying?
Abhay is steady.
PIYA:Tell me.What makes you upset?Tell me Rishab.
ABHAY:I'm not your Rishab.That makes me upset.
PIYA:What?
RISHAB:I'm Abhay.
Piya is shocked.
PIYA:What?
Abhay tells her the truth.
Piya slaps him.
PIYA:How dare you?How could you cheat us?You cheated your own brother and his beloved.

Abhay's tears flow down.
ABHAY:I'm sorry.
I dedicate this chapter to Sydell as she wants Abhay to turn positive.Abhay's redemption starts here.


Rishab seems to be upset.
Madhu:Rishu..why are you sad?
RISHAB:Piya has'nt called me till now.No news about her.Is she fine there?I'm tensed Madhu.
Madhu's words fall on Rishab's deaf ears.
MADHU:Your brain is hot.It has to be cool.Only then you will be relieved.Let us have ice stick.
RISHAB:I have no mood Madhu.
MADHU:Come Rishu.
She pulls him.They have ice stick together.
Rishab smiles:Madhu..you remember we used to have ice stick together during our childhood days talking about our school days.
She smiles.
MADHU:Rishu..you remember all that?
RISHAB:Ya..how can i forget those sweet days?
She smiles.


Months passed...
Rishab rings up Abhay.
ABHAY:Hi Rishu...how are you?
RISHAB:I'm ok.There is no news about Piya.You are also in UK.Any idea about her?
Abhay stammers:Me?How can i know where Piya is?I did'nt see her here.She may be in some other place in UK.
Rishab puts the phone down.He is gloomy as he lost his last hope also.

Abhay is guilty.
ABHAY:Rishu is so upset about Piya.Here i'm enjoying with Piya.I'm wrong.I have to tell the truth to Piya.
Piya comes in her night suit.She looks hot.Abhay can't take his eyes off her.
Piya is shy.
PIYA:Why are you looking at me like this?
ABHAY:Even in the night suit you are so attractive.
She blushes.
She comes towards him.But her leg slips and is about to fall.He catches her.They look into each other's eyes.He leans towards her lips sensually.She closes her eyes.

He captures her skin with burning passion.
They become one forgetting themselves.
After that incident Abhay is guilty.He goes to the terrace and sheds tears.
ABHAY:What did i do?I cheated my own brother and my beloved who is my brother's girl.I made her mine in every way.
He goes crazy.
Piya comes.
PIYA:Rishab..why are you standing here alone?
ABHAY:Simply.
She sees tears in his eyes.
PIYA:Why are you crying?
Abhay is steady.
PIYA:Tell me.What makes you upset?Tell me Rishab.
ABHAY:I'm not your Rishab.That makes me upset.
PIYA:What?
RISHAB:I'm Abhay.
Piya is shocked.
PIYA:What?
Abhay tells her the truth.
Piya slaps him.
PIYA:How dare you?How could you cheat us?You cheated your own brother and his beloved.

Abhay's tears flow down.
ABHAY:I'm sorry.
She slaps him again.
She cries:How will i face Rishab?I cheated him by being with you.
She cries loudly.
PIYA:After spoiling our lives you are apologizing?Are you not ashamed?
She slaps him again.
She cries:How will i face Rishab?I cheated him by being with you.
She cries loudly.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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NICE UPDATE BUT NO PM THIS TIME

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