Chand chupa badal mein Rishbala SS Last Part pg54 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vivian fans...plz have a look at my friend Sydell's ss Lost Siblings Returns

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4332285/arhi-ss-lost-siblings-returns-last-part-part-12-on-pg-48

I thank all of u 4 commenting on this SS.
I dedicate this chapter to
-ChitraRocking- as she likes Abhiya and Rishbala equally.
Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 3

Aahil and Sanam were Rishab and Madhu's classmates in school.They are living together though they are not married.Padmini who is their maid is a mother like figure for them.

Madhu is in a supermarket.She hears some people making fun of her that Madhu and her boyfriend are living together.It hurts Madhu.Aahil who is also there in the supermarket notices it.He decides to go and comfort Madhu.But before he could do that his mobile rings.
AAHIL:Sanam?
SANAM:Aahil..please come home soon.
AAHIL:But shopping is not over.
SANAM:Shop later.Come soon.
AAHIL:Anything serious?
Sanam cuts the phone.

Aahil goes home.
AAHIL:What happened Sanam?
Sanam and Padmini smile.
AAHIL:I got tensed when your call came.But you both are smiling.
Padmini :Don't be tensed Aahil.There is a good news.You and Sanam are going to be parents.
Aahil is surprised.
AAHIL:Really?
Sanam nods.
AAHIL:I'm so happy.
He holds her closer:I love you Sanam.You are so sweet.
Sanam blushes.

Padmini :Now you both are starting a family.Don't you think that you both should get married now?
AAHIL:We both are happy.We know how much we love each other.Even you know how much we love each other.Then what's the need of getting married?
Padmini :I'm old fashioned children.I can't digest all this.
I think you both should get married.Anyways it's upto you.
AAHIL:Well..i have decided to take Sanam out as she gave me a good news.
Padmini :Good.But don't go out simply.I will pack food for Sanam.
AAHIL:No need.We will have it from outside.
Padmini :Don't eat hotel food now.Have home made food.That's better for the baby.
They smile.
Padmini packs food for Sanam.She gives it to Sanam.
Padmini :Take care.
SANAM:Yes aunty.
Padmini :Aahil..take care of Sanam.
AAHIL:Sure.

Aahil visits Rishab and Madhu.
AAHIL:I saw Madhu in the supermarket.
MADHU:Really?I did'nt see you there.
AAHIL:I left immediately.So i could'nt speak to you.I know that you both are hurt by people's comments about living together.Don't worry.There is nothing wrong in living together before marriage.I and Sanam are so happy living together without marriage.
So go ahead.
Rishab and Madhu burst into laughter.
AAHIL:Why are you both laughing?
RISHAB:I and Madhu are best friends.You don't know that?
AAHIL:Ya.
RISHAB:We are living together as friends,not as lovers.

AAHIL:What?
Rishab explains everything to him.
AAHIL:Oh!I did'nt know that.By the way let me tell you guy that i and Sanam are going to be parents.
RISHAB:Really?congrats.
MADHU:Sanam is pregnant.Still no plans to get married?
AAHIL:We don't think marriage is necessary to live together.We are throwing a party to celebrate our happiness.You both are invited for the evening party.
MADHU:We will come.


Madhu wears a grand saree.
MADHU:Rishu...let us go for the party.
Rishab is impressed by her looks.
Madhu:Rishu...why are you staring at me like this?
He stood close to her:I was admiring your looks.
Madhu:What?


RISHAB:I mean...Wow!You look so beautiful Madhu.If i'm impressed like this,what will be your future lover's condition?
She blushes.

Madhu and Rishab reaches the party hall.
MADHU:Look at Sanam and Aahil.They look so happy together.
RISHAB:Yes.They are made for each other.Madhu...Let us give the gift.
MADHU:Ya...
Aahil and Sanam welcomed them.
MADHU:Congrats Sanam.
Madhu gives them the gift.
SANAM and Aahil:Thank you guys.

Sanam and Aahil recieve the gift.It is a baby's framed photo.
SANAM:So cute.

Piya is missing Rishab.
PIYA:I should not have left India.I miss Rishab.I got my new SIM.I will call him now.
She is about to dial the number.The calling bell rings.She opens the door.She can't believe her eyes.
PIYA:Rishab!I missed you so much.
She embraces him.
He enjoys that moment which he dreamt of having many times.
PIYA:How come you are here?
He:I missed you.So i decided to join you here.
She smiles.
He holds her hand softly:This moment onwards i will be with you always.
She embraces him.
PIYA:That is so sweet of you Rishab.I love you.
He holds her tight.
He:I love you too Piya.
He says in his mind:Piya does'nt know that i'm not Rishab.but Abhay..I'm sorry Piya.I have to do this drama to get you in my life.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Lovely update
So Rishab is for Madhu
And Abhay is for Piya
Piya is missing Rishab and was
About to call him but Abhay went there
So she won't be calling Rishab
but will Rishab miss Piya
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
superb update
interesting storycontinue soon
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Very nice update... so Abhay is cheating both Piya and Rishab... interesting... lovely part...
thnx for the pm... continue soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Interesting update
Piya missing Rishabh. Abhay acting as RK to piya,
Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
nice update
but how can piya didnt differentiate rishab & abhay ? even they are identical !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Lovely update. Actually loving abhay's interference in their lives hahaha😃😆😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
i m actually like abhay
Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Awsme update
Loved it

This is getting very intrstng
Abhay is cheating both madhu n piya

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60


Nice update...
Sahil also in this story...
Rishu admiring madhu...
Abhay cheating rishu & piya...

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