Chand chupa badal mein Rishbala SS Last Part pg54 - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update. Rk misunderstanding madhu. 😭😭😭 Abhiya together that great. Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
i wish rishabh should listen full convo :(
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Oh piya lost her baby!!!! but she realized Abhay's love and moving on in life... but here Rishabh misunderstood the whole scene... how will madhu make him understand... hope everything will be sorted out...
thnx for the pm... continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lot Sydell for the surprise banner.

Thanks a lot 4 supporting this ss.This is the last part.So plz give me a detailed comment.Plz write ur favourite scene n favourite character too.

Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 13


Trishna arrives.Trishna is surprised to see Madhu.
TRISHNA:Hi Madhu.
MADHU:Hi Trishna.How are you?We are seeing each other after a long time.
TRISHNA:I'm fine.
MADHU:Mukund was telling me about you.
Trishna raises her eyebrows and looks at Mukund.
Madhu whispers to Mukund:Come on..tell her.
Mukund is nervous.
TRISHNA:Hey...why are you holding some roses.I love red roses.
Mukund:You love red roses?Really?
TRISHNA:Ya.
RISHAB:Then these are for you.
TRISHNA:Really?i just can't believe this.
He gives her the roses.
MADHU:Ok..i'm going.
Mukund:Remain here Madhu.
MADHU:No no.If i remain here nothing will progress.
TRISHNA:What?
MADHU:Bye Trishna.
TRISHNA:Bye.
Madhu goes to the flower area.
Trishna looks deeply into Mukund's face:Are you not talking to me?
Mukund:Ya..
TRISHNA:Then say something.
He says in a soft voice:You look beautiful.
She blushes.
TRISHNA:Anything else?
He loses his courage.
Mukund:No.
Her face becomes dull.
TRISHNA:But i have something to say.
RISHAB:What?
TRISHNA:I love you.
He is surprised.

He is excited:I love you too.
He carries her in his arms and swirls around in happiness.

Madhu reaches home.


She calls to Rishab's mobile.Rishab disconnects the call in irritation.

Madhu:Why I am not able to contact Rishu?
He told me that he will visit me now.Anyways I will get ready.He will be reaching now for sure.I will confess my feelings today.

Madhu wears a red saree with a smile.
Madhu:Where is Rishu?Why is he becoming late?

Rishab reaches home.In excitement Madhu takes the roses she bought for Rishab and goes to him.
MADHU:Rishu..where were you?
RISHAB:I just went for a walk.
MADHU:Then why did'nt you pick up my call?

He is silent.

Madhu:Ok...leave it.You know..today i met Mukund in the mall.
RISHAB:And he proposed to you.
She is shocked.
RISHAB:I was there.I saw him proposing to you.
MADHU:You went to the mall also? If you were there why did'nt you come to us?

Rishab:Because I did'nt want to come between you and Mukund.

Madhu:Stupid.That was his rehearsal.
RISHAB:Rehearsal?
MADHU:Yes.He was going to propose to Trishna.
RISHAB:Trishna?
MADHU:Ya..our old classmate Trishna.He just practiced how to propose to her.But you thought..how could you think that way Rishu?You are too stupid sometimes.
He feels ashamed of himself.
MADHU:I was planning to tell you something.But you spoiled my mood.

She turns back and walks to another room.He notices the red roses which she had held in her hand.
RISHAB:If that was not proposal,how come these red roses come in Madhu's hand?
Rishab knocks the door.She opens the door.
MADHU:What do you want?
RISHAB:If Mukund had'nt proposed to you,how come those red roses reach your hand?
She is irritated:Again doubts..you are sick.You can't change.Listen..i bought these red roses for you stupid.
He is surprised:For me?
She thinks:My God!Unknowingly i told it to him.



He asks softly:Was it for me?
She is quiet.He takes the roses:Lovely.This is the best gift i have ever received. Thanks a lot.
Slowly she smiles.
Suddenly she becomes serious thinking about his doubts about her relation with Mukund.
MADHU:You know me since childhood.If I had affection for Mukund first I would have told you.But you did'nt understand me.

Rishab is guilty:I am sorry Madhu.

Madhu's eyes are full of tears:Being my best friend instead of understanding me you doubted me.

RISHAB:What?
MADHU burst:Yes you fool.I have been loving you since i learnt the word 'love'.
He can't believe it.

Rishab:Madhu...you have been loving me since childhood?

Madhu becomes emotional:Yes.

Rishab:Then you did'nt give me a hint even once..

Madhu:When you told me about Piya I decided to hide my love behind my heart like the moon hides itself behind the clouds.
Madhu realizes what she told him.

Madhu thinks:Oh my God...what did I tell him?

She does'nt know how to escape from him.

Rishab walks to her staring at her.She is nervous.He holds her hand.

RISHAB:I love you.
She is surprised with happiness.

Madhu:Rishu...you...?
RISHAB:Yes..I also love you.But I did'nt have the courage to confess to you.

Madhu:You stupid...why were you scared to open your heart before me?

He smiles.

He takes the garland which was kept for the God's idol and puts it around her neck.

Madhu:Rishu...what did you do?It's for God.

Rishab:Your God will forgive me as I love you.

She kicks him:Naughty.

He pulls her closer.

She looks at him romantically.

He looks at her deeply:I have accepted you as my wife.You are my life Madhu.Now i'm waiting for you to accept me as your husband.

She blushes.She holds his hand:Since our childhood days i have seen you as my only man in this life.
Rishab smiles and takes an garland.
Rish:Then marry me Madhu.
She smiles and takes the garland from him.Then she puts it around his neck.

Rishab:We lived together as good friends.Now onwards we will be living together with love.

Their faces bloom.


Very soon Rishab-Madhu get married with everyone's blessing.
On the same Mandap Abhay-Piya's wedding is also conducted.

The End

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Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb end
The rishbala confession was best part
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Posted: 10 years ago
and they live happily ever after...amazing story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ending.loved rishbalas frindship and their confession.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful story
Lovely ending
Rishab he is so dumb
Madhu is the one who expressed her love first to him
In between Trish and Mukund ,Trish
Wow these girls r more better than the boys
The lines I DECIDED TO HIDE MY LOVE BEHIND
MY HEART LIKE THE MOON HIDES ITSELF
BEHIND THE CLOUDS justify the title of the story
My favourite character in this story is Madhu
She is a true friend ,lover everything
She is so beautiful at heart ,kind and understanding
My favourite scene confession of Rishbala
I was waiting Rishab to confess ,but it's Madhu
Who confessed, I loved the way she said
U made this SS more beautiful,with beautiful pics

Edited by vasavi_sri - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ending. I love it. Finally they confess their feelings And get married. Sach a fantastic story. I miss this story very much. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the pm
wonderful update
loved the story
Edited by rima4ever - 10 years ago

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