Chand chupa badal mein Rishbala SS Last Part pg54 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
I hope nothing happens to baby..
Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lot Sydell for the surprise banner.
Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 12

Sorry for no Rishbala scene.I had to settle down Abhay Piya before move on to Rishbala union.The next part will be full of Rishbala.
Rishab:Piya had a miscarriage.She is in the hospital now.
All are shocked and upset.
Radha:My God!
She cries.

Madhu weeps:Piya had a miscarriage?Why she has to suffer always?
They rush to the hospital.

Abhay sits near Piya who is motionless.He is in tears.

Abhay:Piya...don't be upset.

Piya blasts.

P:I lost my baby damn it.How can you tell me not to be upset?Did you forget that it's your baby too?

He des'nt know what to say as she is right.

Suddenly she faints.All are shocked.
Abhay:Piya!

The doctor comes.

After some time...

The Doctor comes out of the room.
Abhay:How is Piya now?
Dr:I'm sorry.She is in coma.
ABHAY:Nooo!
All are shocked.
Abhay cries loudly.
He goes near the God's idol in the hospital.
ABHAY:Till now i have not stood before you and prayed.First time i'm begging you to do something for my Piya.Please save her.If you want to punish me kill me.But please don't punish that innocent girl.

Two weeks passed.
The nurse runs to the doctor:Dr,Mrs.Abhay Kundra is showing some good symptoms.
Dr:That's a great news.
The doctor runs to her.

The doctor comes out of the room.
Dr:Mr.Abhay Kundra..there is a happy news.Your wife Piya is out of coma.
Abhay is excited.
Dr:It's a miracle.You are the most luckiest husband in this world.
ABHAY:Thank you so much Doctor.

Slowly Piya comes to the conscious state.
Piya opens her eyes and sees Abhay first.Her eyes get filled up with tears.
Abhay:Piya!
PIYA:You?Can't you give me peace of mind?I should'nt have escaped from the coma stage.
It hurts Abhay.

ABHAY:I'm not troubling you anymore.
He goes away.
The nurse comes:Why did your husband go away so fast?Hew was shattered when your health became bad suddenly.He prayed a lot for you.He did everything for you.Theway he was taking care of you was amazing.
She can't believe it.
N:You are so lucky to get a loving husband like him.
Piya thinks about Rishab's and Abhay's dialogues:

Rishab:Believe me.Abhay will take care of you.He loves you very much.
Abhay:I'm happy that you are not leaving this house.Thank you so much Piya.
Piya:Why should you care if i stay here or not?
ABHAY:I care..because i love you and i want to see you everyday.

Piya is discharged from the hospital.
Piya is walking downstairs.Her leg slips.She begins to fall down,but Abhay catches her.They both look into each other's eyes.He leaves her hand.
ABHAY:You need rest.Don't exert.Go to your room and take rest.
PIYA:Why do you think so much about my health?
ABHAY:Because i love you.
Piya looks deeply into his face.
ABHAY:Don't worry.I won't force you to love me.You married me for our baby.But since we lost our baby,you don't have to stay here.Don't sacrifice anymore.You can go back.
He goes away.
She thinks:Why do i feel sad even though i'm released from Abhay?
Piya's and Abhay's hearts weep...

Tum ko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Ho raha hai judaa
Dono ka raasta
Dur jaake bhi mujhse tum meri yaadon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna..{Kabhi alvida na kehna}


Piya goes near Abhay.
PIYA:I will go back.
Abhay is upset.
PIYA:But not now?
He looks at her face carefully.
PIYA:When my parents got separated they gave me a lot of wealth and went their own ways.But now i want to be financially independant.I don't want to depend on them.So i have decided to find a job.After that i will go back.
ABHAY:Ok.But not now.Take rest.Don't strain yourself.

Piya attends an interview and waits outside for bus.It is raining heavily.
PIYA:My God!I did'nt take umbrella.I'm not getting bus or taxi.
A car stops before her.Abhay looks out .She can't believe her eyes.
P:Abhay!
ABHAY:Why are you here?
PIYA:I attended an interview.I got the job.
ABHAY:Why are you in a hurry to work?Don't you know that you need rest now?You are drenched in the rain.You will catch fever.Your health will become worse than before.

His tone changes:You don't care about others.You are not bothered about what others feel when you become sick.Now listen.I will not allow you to go anywhere.Because if you get freedom you will become careless and does'nt take care of the health.
PIYA:I was waiting to hear this from your mouth.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

ABHAY:What?
PIYA:I'm happy that you will not allow me to go anywhere.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
He looks at her seriously.She smiles slowly.Slowly he also smiles.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun

He gets down and extends his arm.He holds his arm and leads her to the car.Abhay-Piya share an eye lock in the car.

Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun

Slowly she rests her head on his shoulder.He smiles and holds her closer.
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
(Tum mile).

Madhu looks at the red roses in the mall.Mukund appears there.
RISHAB:Hi Madhu.
MADHU:Hi..
MUKUND:Where is Mukund?
His eyes search for Rishab.
MADHU:Rishab is not here.I came alone.
MUKUND:Ok..
His eyes search for someone.
MADHU:Whom are you looking for?
MUKUND:Trishna.
MADHU:Trishna?Our classmate Trishna?
MUKUND:Yes.Recently we met each other.And...
She smiles:And?
He is shy.
MUKUND:She will come now.I want to propose to her today.
Madhu smiles:Good.Even i have decided to propose to Rishu today by giving red roses.
MUKUND:Great.But i'm tensed to propose to her.Can i rehearse with you?
MADHU:Sure.
MUKUND:Suppose you are Trishna..
Rishab reaches the mall.He thinks:I have informed Madhu that today I will visit her.I will buy red roses for Madhu.I will give them to her and propose.
He sees Mukund and Madhu together.
Mukund buys red roses from the mall and stands before Madhu:I love you a lot.Will you marry me?
Madhu :I love you too Mukund and I will marry you.
Rishab is shocked to hear it.He runs away with tears.
Mukund stands up.
Mukund:Is it ok?
MADHU:Ya.Perfect.Trishna will surely accept your proposal.
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Posted: 10 years ago


NICE UPDATE
BUT PLZ PLZ NO MU BETWEEN RM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very sweet and lovely update
Baby is not alive😕

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update.thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Sad for Abhay and piya
Piya had a miscarriage and went into coma
Glad she came out soon
Abhay is so carring for Piya
Finally both r United
Wow what a timing Mukund got to rehearsal
To propose his love
Rishab will be thinking he lost his Madhu
What will happen if Madhu propose him
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. At last piya accepted Abhay.But but in the what happened no plz no misunderstanding between rishbala.I am here before pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Supperbb update...even though baby is lost abhiya got united but sad for Rishabh but soon that misunderstanding also goes away and they becom couple :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh God! Misunderstanding bw Rishabala.😲
Hope everything gets cleared soon.
Nice update
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yr I m very angry
From last few updates I m not getting pms of ur fics


The update was superb
I loved it

Poor piya n abhay they lost their baby
Piya in coma


Abhay love brought back her


Wow finally everything sorted between them

Omg what a new twist
Rishu ko misunderstanding
He thinks madhu loves mukund



Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling

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