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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Oh my my! What a beginning to second thread!
Awesome but painful update. Loved every bit of it. Keep writing
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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Every time I think this can't get more painful but I find the nxt chapter more heart wrenching than the previous one. Just finished my quota of crying after reading the update.

Madhu n RK have accepted their fate n decided to move on. 😭 This is so painful. They don't deserve this pain. Two innocent souls suffering so much becos they trusted the wrong ppl. This world is so evil.

Awesome update. Their conversation near the pool is so beautiful. Both living in their dream for a few minutes. Even I don't want their dreams to shatter.😭

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vishti4eva

@vishti4eva

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

u have potrayed their emotions beautifully.waiting for the next update

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

unresed my comment on pg.6...pls do check it dear...thanks.

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

ahhh ... shayad unka saath yahin tak tha😭
it breaks my heart to see them separating ...its truly heartbreaking
just hoping for a miracle😭

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome update. Loved their pool side convo.hoping for a miracle.
thanks for the pm.

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: teekay

Congrats⭐️

I am still feeling heavy and in pain after writing that. Give me a few days to recover. It was long and draining.
You can re-read the chapter in the interim😛

That i do dear i have read this ff of urs twice only left with this update to read again vl do it in night

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

It was emotional update... both love each other but destiny is playing its game... very beautifully described all the emotions and their feelings about the separation... jus strange thought came into my mind after knowing mamiji's illness...RK could arrange crore as his accounts would be under scrutiny... wat if he arrange that sum in the name of helping his mamiji?so that he save madhu... i dont know whether it is possible to arrange crore in less than 24hrs but i don want madhu to go to tony and my RK helpless... jus small hope... but will wait for ur next update...

Brilliant as usual... thnx for the pm... take ur time but dont delay too much... addicted to this story😊

Keep writing😊

Edited by ashitha235 - 10 years ago