my story on rishbala ... after leap

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Posted: 10 years ago
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i felt boring and not interested in doing anything. i thought of rishbala... that's it. my imagination started😆
few know how i write my episodes. i dont describe much about the scene, character and it will be the original character rk and madhu. you could imagine dvd in my episodes. now also same... today i start the episode after the leap... how would it be if they had brought vd in a different role and dd as the same as in show, innocent, AK's PA and attraction towards him.
first part i m copying from my old post. i really wanted this to happen in the show
here it goes. bear with my hindi
the story starts after madhu becomes ak's pa and moving to chawl. bittuji went to madhura to take care of radha ji.
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one late evening...

after finishing her work, madhu is waiting in a small street for sunny as he told that he will pick her up. she has been waiting there for more than 1/2 an hour. but no signs of sunny. madhu lost
her patience and repeatedly looking at her watch. she just looking around the street. the place is not much crowded, actually very few people are roaming here and there. one temple is also there. some 10, 15 min before she went there. now she don't know what to do till he comes.

she started walking to and fro...she remembers her dhadhi (grandma) and feels guilty for lying to her. she is in deep thinking and ...still walking ...walking...

while doing so at one point she drips, loses her balance and dashes a person, who came in the opposite direction and she is about to fall down... suddenly that person catches her from falling down and they are in RK banner pose😳.

she looks at the person who held her. young smart looking guy... his face is very attractive and the eyes... when she meets his eyes ... he also looks into hers.

both are looking into each others eyes...for longgg time... how long they were like that she doesn't know.😳

bell sound coming from the temple disturbs them. they come to their sense. he leaves her, andsays... ''mmm i'm sorry. aap girne waali thi. tho...''

madhu...''it's ...it's ok.''...''thanks''

then, he started walking in one direction. she turns to the opposite side. she feels... something strange... like she knows him, knows him very well. she feels like she lived with him for many years and some deep connection between them... why?!

she turns back. at the same time he also looks at her. both look each other. little bit smile in his lips...then he moves.

she is still in the same feeling and confused... why??!! what she is feeling. madhu leaves the place confused.

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next day in studio, ak is giving his shot. that time madhu came out of that place and is roaming around that place. she sees the guy whom she met last evening. she is surprised and happy too. she doesnt know why she feels happy 😉

he also notices her and smiles at her and so does she.
madhu ...'' hello... aap yaha??!!''
guy...''ha... me yahan kaam kartha hoon. next studio me. director metha's assistant ''
madhu...'' assistant director !! me ak ka pa. unka shooting is studio pe horahi hai. me waha bore rohahi thi. isiliye bahar ayi...''
mahdu...''mera naam madhubala uar aap ??"
that time one of his unit people called him ... ''rk ... abi break hogaya. next shot lunch ke baad''
he ...'' teek hai''
madhu...'' so aap RK hai. pura naam kiya hai ??!!''
rk...'' rishab''
she feels something in that name and repeated his name in low voice ' rishab'
rk...''kiya huvaa??!!''
mahdu...''kuch nahi''
rk...''so... phir milthe hai. bye''.. he turns to leave but suddenly stops and asks her ''so... aap free hai toh mere saath lunch pe join kar sakthe hai??!!''
mahdu imminently without a second thought said ...'' ok ''

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at lunch,
rk's friend meets them and shocked to see a girl with rk. ''rk... tum ek ladki ke saath??!!'' that guy smiles at them and leave the place without disturbing them
madhu... feels shy and uncomfortable 😳
rk ...''dont feel bad. me generally kisi ladki ke saath zyadha baat nahi kartha. aaj unone muje aapke saath dheka isiliye aisa react kardhiya. dont take it personally. ''
madhu smiles ... '' kal muje aisa laga ki aapko me pehle hi jaanthi hoon. very familiar. but patha nahi kab, kaha, kaise''
rk...'' muje bhi aisa hi laga. par mene socha agar ye baat me boloon tho aapko usual ladko wale dialogue jaisa lagega. so nahi kaha'' ...
madhu ... '' ye aap vaap chodiye. bahut ajeeb sa laktha hai''
rk...''😆... muje bhi ''
madhu smiles ...'' toh mat bolo. deal ''
rk...''done deal''... ''me sach boloon... muje hi nahi patha me kaise tume lunch pe bulaya. i never did like this before''
madhu...''toh tum kisiko bhi aaj se pehle lunch pe nahi bulaya ??!! kithna bada dil dhar??!! 😉''
rk... ''mene kaha ladki ko''
madhu...''sach me muje bhi nahi patha ki me kaise 'ha' kaha !!''
rk...''woh sab chodo. tumare bare me bathavo''
madhu tells about radha ji, bittu ji and how she met ak and became his pa. she told everything, including that she loves ak
rk felt slightly low after hearing that she loves ak and remains quiet.
madhu... ''rk... rk... ''
rk... ''mmm ...''
m...''kiya huva?? kaha ko kaye ho??!!''
rk...''nothing''
madhu...''ab tum bolo''
rk...''mera zyadha kuch nahi. kuch mahine pehle yaha mumbai aaya director banne ka sapna lekar. ab assistant director hoon. jalthi mera dream movie direct karoonga''
madhu...''tume direction bahut pasand hai kiya??!!''
rk...''ha... woh mera passion''
madhu...'' tume toh actor banna chagiye. tum ekdum hero jaisa dhikthe ho. tall, handsome, hot... 😳😳... then she stops in between after realizing what she is telling.
rk...smiles at her '' thanks. par muje actor nahi banna hai. director banna hai. ''
madhu...''kiyu??!!''
rk...''direction mera passion hai. uske alava muje logo ko nachchuvana bahut pasand hai. muje nahi nachna 😉''
madhu... 😆
the same guy who met them before comes now again
''ab tak tum dhono yaga hai???!!''
''arre rk... tume toh woh heroine kab se doond rahi hai. jaldi jaavo yaar. nahi toh woh muje nahi chodegi. chaldhi aajav''
rk...''tum kuch bolke samalo. me baath me aatha hoon''
that guy starts talking to madhu...'' pls aap hi ine bathayiyena. us ladki ne 'rk rk' kehkar iske peeche khumathi hai. par ye... une palat kar bhi nahi dhaktha''
rk stops that guy and sends him form that place.
madhu...'' 😉 ... kiyu une bejdhiya??!! woh us heroine ki bareme baath kiya isiliye ??!! tum kuch chupa rahe ho''
rk...''kuch bhi nahi. us heroine se muje uski previous film me mulakath huyi. first woh baki actress ki thara thi. phir kuch dhino ke baat dhoda kareeb ane lagi. phir ajanak ek din propose kardhiya. mene nahi mana. isiliye woh mere peeche padi hai''
madhu...'' kiya ??!! heroine ??!! woh bhi is film ki heroine ??!! propose kiya??!! tune nahi mana??!!''
rk...''ithna shock kiyu horahi ho??!!''
madhu...''phir kiya. woh kithni kubzurah hai, famous hai, bahut bada star hai. woh tume pasand karthi hai. isse zyaadha tume kiya chagiye. mere kayal se tum usse jaldi shaadi karni chahiye''
rk...''mmm...iskeliye hume kisise shaadi nahi karni chahiye''
madhu...''phir kiskeliye karni hai??!! me bhi abhay sir ko na ek hi second me haa kardhiya 😃''
rk...''shaadi, piyar sirf 'kubzurah, famous, bada star aur attraction' keliye nahi hothi hai. woh badi heroine hai. isme mera koyi interest nahi hai. muje woh pasand nahi hai bas''
madhu...''muje kuch samaj me nahi aaya.''
rk...''jab tume kisise sachme piyaar hoga na tab samaj me aayegaa''
madhu...'' kiya?? piyaar hoga??!! ab toh mene kaha me abay sir se piyaar karthi hoon.''
rk... smiles at her... ''mera time hogaya muje jaana hai. phir milthe hai. bye''... he leaves the place.
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madhu comes back home. she remembers the time she spent with rk.
she herself doesnt know how did she go with him without a second thought and spoke with him about everything in their first meeting itself. actually she liked that moment and him.

next day and next to next day ... almost daily they started meeting each other.
she started calling him 'rishu'... first time he was stunned and felt happy too.
madhu asked the reason nad he said ...''muje mere ma, baap, ghar walo aisa bhulaya karthe the. yaha ane ke baat sab 'RK, RK' bulathe hai. par mera naam toh rishab hai na. me, log muje mere naam se bulana chatha hoom, short form se nahi 😆. pehli bar yaha tum muje aisa bhulathi ho, achcha laktha hai''

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madhu...''rishu, tume patha hai, 20 saal pehle ek bahut bada famous actor tha 'RK' ''
rk...''patha hai.''
madhu...''yaha ke log kehthe hai uski biwi ki naam madhubala hai. uski shakal bhi mujse milthi hai''
rk...''patha hai''
madhu...''kiya... sab ko patha hai patha hai bolthe ho??!! ''
rk...''mmm... us rk ko tum dheki ho??!!''
madhu...''nahi''
rk...smiles and doesnt say anything.
madhu...'''tum hamesha aisa smile kiyu karthe ho. koyi jawab kiyu nahi dhethe ho??!! us din bhi 'jab sachcha piyaar karthe ho tab patha chalega'... aur ab bhi. kuch bolthe ho aur hasthe ho. jawaab nahi dhethe ho.''
rk...''kuch jawaab khuth doondna hai. 😉''
madhu...''uskeliye mere paas time nahi hai. tumhi bathavo pls...''
rk...''ha... tumare paas time kaha hai kuch sochne keliye... ''

he has gone. madhu is totally confused and slightly irritated. 'kuch jawaab khuth doondna hai... hmmm kiya doondoon ??!! kaha doondoon??!!'

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another day she goes to a studio where rk is working.
she sees rk and his unit member trying to explain a scene to the hero and heroine. she starts watching that without disturbing him.
hero...'ye kiya rk??!! koyi dialogue nahi par expression se hi piyaar ko express karna hai. ye kaise ho saktha hai??!! koyi hamare director ko samjayiye pls''
rk...''😆. kabi kabi, kuch bolne ke zaroorath hi nahi hai, especially love. woh ek beautiful feeling. uskeliye hame woh theen words nahi chagiye. agar kisine kisi ko dil se chatha hai, uska anko me sab kuch dhiktha hai. kehne se zyadha hamara expression, unkeliye hamara feelings bahut kuch boldhetha hai. wahi toh director karne ki koshish karrahe hai.''
hero ...''ye mujse nahi hoga''... goes back to his vanity

then only he realizes that madhu is there...
rk...''madhu??!! yaha sube sube?!!''
madhu...''woh me baat me bathathi hoom. ye bolo, woh hero teek kehthe hai. bina kuch kahe bole, piyaar ko hum kaise samaj pathe hai??!!''
rk...''real life me, ordinary log jo piyaar karthe hai woh aisa 'i love you honey' 'i love you too darling' nahi kahenge. woh sab sirf filmo me hotha hai. film aur asal zindhagi me bahut fark hotha hai. agar woh do log sach me ek dushrose piyaar karthe hai toh un dono ko automatically patha chaltha hai''
madhu...''nahi, me nahi manthi. anko me kiya dhiktha hai??!! chalo ab me tumare anko me dhekthi hoom, dhekthe hai tumare anko me kiya hai''
they start staring into each others eyes. after a while they have lost in it.
she feels something ...some connection between them. this is her first experience. she havent felt like this before. suddenly she finds something and moves her sight from his eyes.
rk...'' kiya huvaa??!! ''
madhu feels embarrassed and wants to talk something ...''tume patha hai, abhay sir ne muje kaise propose kiya ... ... ...''

he stops in between and diverts her as though he is not interested in hearing that.

rk...''haa...tum sube hi yaha ho. tumara 'ABHAY sir' tume nahi doondenge??!! ''
madhu...'' ak sir ka shooting katham. kal raath unone uske family ke saath foreign tour kaye. 20 days muje chutti 😃''
rk...''oh...!!''...''so kiya plan hai??!! madhura jaarahi ho''
madhu...''nahi. ''
rk...''kiyu??''
madhu...''dhadhi ko nahi patha hai me yaha kaam karthi hoon. ab me kaise boloom ki abhay sir tour gaye hai isiliye muje chutti mili. ''
rk...''ye sab bolne ki kiya zaroorath hai. hamesha ki tara 'office me chutti mili. so dhekne aayi' aisa kaho. isme kiya problem hai. tume toh yaha aane ke baat tumara dhadhi ko nahi dheka na!!??''
madhu...'' woh sab teek hai. par me nahi jaavoongi''
rk...''kiyu ??!!''
madhu... ''woh sab muje nahi patha me nahi jaavoongi.''
rk smiles at her.
madhu...''phir hasna shuru kardhiya ??!! ''...''me already parishan hoon ki me kaise abhay sir ko dheke bina '20 days' rahoongi''
rk gets irritated but doesnt show it out ...''isiliye me kehraha hoon madhura jaavo''
madhu...''nahi ''

that time, producer comes and asks the director to change the scene and to shoot as he wants. both start arguing. rk inquires about this with other assistants.
guy...''kuch nahi hai yaar. hero aur producer ko woh scene without dilaogues pasand nahi aaya. producer ko ek hot scene chagiye is scene ke badhale me''
rk...''kiya??!! hot scene. matlab??!!''
guy...''intimate scene...hot kiss aur ho sake toh usse zyadha. director is not convinced.''
rk...''owh kaise manenge. story me, hero heroine abhi abhi propose kar rahe hai. yaha kaise intimete scene ayegaa??!!''
guy...''abi trend hi aisa hi na!! sab kuch shaadi ki pehle hi hotha hai 😉. producer ko bhi yahi pasand hai. hum kiya kare??!!""
rk...''muje ye bath samaj me nahi aaraha hai. agar piyaar karne walo shaadi ki pehle hi sab kuch karenge toh shaadi ke baat kiya karenge??!!''
guy...''karenge na???!! ... kuchi dino me divorce 😆😉''
rk...''😆''
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madhu didnt go to madhura and started spending her whole time with rk. she enjoyed that time.
after few days ...

both are chatting as usual in his set. that time one girl acting in that movie calls rk.
girl...''rk, muje ye scene teek se nahi aathi hai. can you do rehearsal with me?!''
rk...''ok. relax...shot keliye aur thoda time hai. till then you can practice. i will help you''
both start doing the scene. it's a bit intense scene between hero and his girl friend. while practicing, the girl should hug the hero. so she does with rk. madhu gets irritated and and cannt see him being hugged by some other girl. after the rehearsal he comes back.
madhu...'' aisa kiyu kiya??!!" 😡
rk...''kiya kiya??!!''
madhu...''us ladki ko hug kiyu kiya??!!"
rk...''excuse me. me sirf uske saath rehearsal kar raha tha.''
madhu...'' tum toh director ho na, tume ye karne ki kiya zaroorath thi??!!''
rk...''director keliye sab kuch jaanna aur karna zaroori hai. vaise tumara abhay sir bhi yahi karthe hai na??!! tab tum kuch nahi bolthe ho??!!''
madhu ...'' woh kaam karthe hai''
rk...''phir me kiya karraha hoom??!! ''
madhu...'' woh... 😕''
rk gives one mischief smile and goes back to work.

after sometime...
one unit person asks rk ...''rk, out door shooting keliye sab ready hai na. nahi toh ye producer hamara sar kajaayega??!!''
rk...''dont worry. sab ready. me aaj shaam ko hi vaha chala jawoonga.''
that guy leaves with little satisfaction.
madhu...''tum bahar jarahe ho??!! woh bhi aaj shaam ko??!!''
rk...''ha... 3 din out door shooting hai. chotasa kaam''
madhu...''kiya rk... tum muje bathaya hi nahi. muje toh bore hogaa. me kiya karoon.??!!''
rk...'' kaam me bathana bool gaya. mere jaana, zaroori hai. sirf theen din hai na??!! apna abhay sir ka movies rewind karke rewind karke dheko. time pass hogaa ''

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rk went for his out door work. she doesnt know what to do, not interested in anything.
madhu...''ab toh sirf ek din bhi pura nahi huvaa, me kaise aur do din rahoongi??!!'
she spends all her time in thinking about rk and the time she spent with him. then she remembers how both were looking into each others eyes that day. 'what she felt??!! what was that ??!! agar poochoongi toh bolegaa 'kuch jawab khuth doondna hai...hmmm'
end of third day, she is waiting for his return. he will return at mid night only. then she can meet him next day morning in the shooting spot. till then she cant be patient.

next day, early morning ... rk's room bell rings
rk...opens the door and surprised to see madhu there at that time.
rk...''madhu..??!! tum yaha is waqth??!!''
madhu...''tume dheke bina 3 din mera sar pat raha tha. mujse aur inthezar nahi hoga. isiliye subehi yaha agayi ''
rk...smiles softly...''andhar aayo''
madhu...''tum bi na rishab??!! pack up ek din pehle hi hogaya na, phir tum late kiyu aaye ho??!! ek phone bi nahi kiya aur mera bhi nahi utaya. not fair''
rk... doesn't give reply for that...''muje aaj bhi jaldhi shooting jaana hai. me ready hokar aatha hoom. tu bait.''

after he gets ready both go to studio and rk starts doing pending work. she spent whole day with him. at the end of the day,
rk...''theen din se muje kiyu miss kar rahi thi??!! ''
madhu...'' patha nahi. par tumare bina kuch bhi achcha nahi laga''
rk...''kiyu achcha nahi lagaa??!! ''
madhu...'' tum tumara sawal shuru mat karo. tum jawab bhi nahi dhoge.''... chides him
rk...''nahi, mera kehne ke matlab tume toh me achchese idea dhiya tha na, abhay ki movie dheklo. aur tumare paas toh abhay sir hai, uski babe hai. dhadhi hai... ithne log hai na. toh mene aisahi poocha...''
then only madhu realized that she didnt call dhadhi or mamachacha afte rk left. she didnt do anything whole three days other than thinking about him 😲😲. aur abhay sir...
madhu...''aaj date kiya hai??''
rk... ''feb 27. kiyu??!!''
madhu...''oh god !!! aaj sabere abhay sir aane waale the. muje sab inthazaar karni hai. me toh sab kuch bool gayi... sab kuch . me chalthi hoom''... she runs without waiting for his reply.

after that rk could not see madhu for 2 days. he is worried about her.

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by that time abhay plans for marriage with madhu to get his fathers property (as in the show).
ak gives money to leelavathy to convince madhu and to make arrangements for shaadi in two days time.
madhu gets confused. 'shaadi ...woh bhi dhadhi aur mamachacha ko bhathaya bina??!! ye kiya ho raha hai mere saath. ye mami bi muje force karrahi hai. ab me kiya karoon??!!''

after some time ... 'ye kiya hai??!! abhay sir, jisse me bachpan se piyaar karthi hoon. woh bhi muje propose kiya. ab shaadi keliye poochrahe hai. muje kush hone ke baja dar kiyu laktha hai??!!😲😕. nahi, nahi agar me yahi rahoongi toh me teek se nahi soochpathi. muje bahar jaana hai.'... madhu comes out of that chawl and starts walking on the street while thinking deeply.

'kiyu??!
muje kush hone ke baja dar kiyu laktha hai??!!
me, kaise bhool gayi us din ko jab abhay sir aaye the??!!
muje kiya ho raha hai??!!
PK... tume hi muje jawab dhena hai'... in that confusion she doesnt see the path clearly and hits on a tree and comes to sense...
she looks around the place... gets surprised ...that is the place where she met rk first time.

'me kiya kehrahi thi??!! pk, jawab toh... '
then she remembers rk's word...'kuch jawab khuth doondna hai'
she starts recollecting everything, all the incident since she met rk.

'first meeting... woh yahi huvaa tha. then next meeting in studio, joining with him for lunch without hesitation.
the 'jalan,, possessiveness that happend when rk hugged a girl in the shooting spot. he was doing his job as ak. why didnt i feel the same with ak??? why with rk???!!!
why did i miss rk when he had gone out for 3 days,, while i didnt even remember to think about ak when he was not there for 20 days??!!
why did i go to rk's appartment in that eary morning??!! why could not i wait for him to come to the sets???!!!... that eyelock ... sachcha piyaar hogaa tab patha chalegaa...'

she slowly starts realizing everything. now she could feel and understand what she felt at their first meeting, the connection, the bond... she understands everything... '

she turns to see the the temple from which the bell came and disturbed them on that day (first meeting) ... PK's temple
madhu starts crying ...'jawab toh tum pehle hi dhedhiya... thank you thank you '
she stops an autorickshaw and goes to rk's working spot.
she rushes inside...

rk notices her and comes running towards her... ''madhu kiya huvaa???!! aisa kiyu dhik rahi ho??!! do din se kaha gayi thi??!! tum teek toh ho na??!!''
madhu...''muje tumse zaroori baat karni hai''
rk...''yaha??!! ... ek minute'' he calls a guy and hands over his work to him
he brings her to the next part of the studio where no unit people seen.
rk...''kiya hai??!! pehle ye bathavoo tum teek hai na??!!''
madhu...''thodi dher pehle nahi. par ab teek hogayi''
rk...''kiya??!!''
madhu...''ha, rishu... muje zare jawab mil gaya.''
rk is totally confused...'' kiya jawab. madhu pehle se hi me bahut tension me hoon, is parishan me ki tume huvaa kiya hai. ab tum mera dhimaak mat kaavo.''
madhu...''muje kuch nahi huvaa. tumhi kehrahatha na, kuch jawab khuth doondna hai... ab me sab kuch doondliya''
rk... remains silent
madhu...''ha... sab ka jawab mil gaya. pehle, muje nahi patha tha me dhadhi se joot bolke me yaha kiyu aayi. mumbai me naukari karne aayi thi lekin ajanak studio kaise pouchgayi... abhay sir se mulakath kiyu huyi... uska PA bankar is studio me aur is industry me kiyu aayi thi...
par ab muje patha chalgaya ki ye sab kiyu huvaa. agar ye sab nahi huvaa toh me tume kaise dhekpathi??!! hum dhono kaise milpathe??!! PK hi ye sab kiya aur muje bhi karvaya ''
rk...''kehna kiya chathi ho??!!''... he asked her very calmly without any expression
madhu...''kabi kabi, sab kuch bolne ke zaroorath hi nahi. agar kisine kisi ko dil se chatha hai, uska anko me sab kuch dhiktha hai. kehne se zyadha hamara expression, unkeliye hamara feelings bahut kuch boldhetha hai''
rk... smiles at her and remains silent
madhu...''muje ab sab kuch dhiktha hai. tum, tumara dil, tumare ye anke...sab kuch 😳''
rk...''... ... ... ...''
madhu...''chhh...'' ... she loses her patience and hugs him 😳😳
madhu...''ab ye mat kaho 'ye sab sirf filmome hotha hai. asal zindhagi aur film me bahut phark hotha hai''
rk... '' 😆.. nahi boloonga'' he holds her tightly
madhu...''me ithna bolthi hoom. tum kuch bi nahi kaha. muje patha hai tum bhi mujse piyaar karthe ho. par me sunna chathi hoon. kuch toh bolona.''
rk...''first meeting me hi muje patha chalgaya hamara beech kiya hai. par madam toh la la land me thi na??!! tum nahi janthi thi tumara dil kiya jaatha hai''
madhu...''tume patha hai??!! phir muje kiyu nahi samjaya??!!''
rk...''ye koyi lession or acting nahi hai, expalin karke samjaneki. ye sab khuth mesus karna hai. piyaar andhar se aana hai kisiki kehne par nahi''
madhu...''woh bhi teek hai. toh jaldi se ghar walo ko kehkar muje shaadi karlo''
rk...''kiya???????!!!! shaadi??!! abhi abhi shuru huvaa, tum abhi hi shaadi karna chathi ho??!!''... '' thoda time do. muje is industry me apneliye ek jagaa banna hai. ek film direct karne do. phir shaadi karenge''
madhu...''ye sab kab hogaa??!!''
rk...''tum manegi toh kal hi shuru hoga''
madhu...''woh kaise??!!''
rk...''ek prducer hai. woh super star RK ka bahut close the. woh ek film banna chahthe hai, rk ki real life. unone ek bar muje milethe, tab se mere peeche pade hai. woh chahthe hai me woh film me RK ka role karna hai''
madhu...''par tume kiyu??!!''
rk...''kiyu ki sab kehthe hai mera shakal us rk se miltha hai. isiliye.''
madhu...'' kiya 😲😲??!! ye toh muje patha nahi. ''
rk...''tume bahut kuch nahi patha hai. tum aur me us rk aur madhubala ki xerox copy hai. isisliye jab bhi log hum dhono ko dhekthe hai, heran hojaathe hai. unko laga us rk madhu wapas agaye hai. friends tease karthe hai. ''
madhu...'' achcha??!! ye sab muje nahi patha.''
rk...''sirf ye bhi nahi. ek din us produce tume mere saath dhekchuke hai. uske baat ros muje poochthe hai ki hum dhono unka film me act karna hai. unone iskeliye muje hi is film director karnekeliye kaha''
madhu...''acting aur me??!! muje toh acting aatha hi nahi''
rk...''tume pehle piyaar karna bhi nahi aatha. ab seekliya na. waise ye bhi sikadhoongaa. tum sirf 'ha' kaho. aur me bhi acting ke bahane tumare saath romance karoonga 😉''
madhu smiles and hugs him back
madhu...''ye sab teek hai. lekin, ye abhay sir ke bareme soochoom toh dar laktha hai''
rk...''woh sab me dhekloonga. daro mat. ab hame bahar jaana hai. nahi toh log kuch aur sochenge.''
madhu...''kiya sochenge??!! 😳''
rk... 😳😳... ''marunga ek, chalo''
madhu... moves away from him and suddenly kisses on his cheek 😳😳😳 and about to run
rk holds her hand ... ''agar muje stimulate karegi toh achcha nahi hoga.'' pulls her towards him, colse ... very close
madhu closes her eyes. rk kisses her... on her hand 😳😉
madhu opens her eyes
rk...''baki shaadi ke baat... chalo''

both leaves that place
that is the same place where our rishbala (season 1) met each other first time 😉
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this is the end. i tried to finish it as reincarnation. but it takes too much time😆
my hands are paining. i tried to write more but could not do it.
hope you like it. enjoy 😊
i like instent comments to my posts and stories... so sent only 3/4 PM...😛


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Edited by kajal99 - 10 years ago
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wow kajal u r back with a story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Awesome story Kajal!
Jaldi jaldi se second part likho! I am curious to know next...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just imagining the characters as DVD
Wow it's awesome
What a start of the leap
Continue

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow lovely update
I loved rk's last dialogue abt true love
And ur Hindi is superb
Enakku oru line Hindi la type panna 10mins aagum 😆 and I got so many Hindi teachers here .
Usually I never read or liked rishbala stories after leap(rajbala) but this part is quite interesting kajal
Continue next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all your replies and likes guys
Will update soon
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updated in the 1st page
😊
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I imagine DVD reading this story.
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You know what..I got the visuals of RK-Madhu and their smiles and blushes as I am reading this story...
Can you write something on the phase where for teh first time RK accepts Madhu as his wife infront of Deepali...after that I want them to confess kinda...rest is ur story 😃😃

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