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The Boy Next Door

PART 1

Madhu:bhaiya...wake up...it's already 7:00am...after this exam u can sleep for 2months how much ever u want...u know na...this is our last exam of this year...

Sultan: Plz madhu...5 more mins...

M:bhaiya...becoz of u..i will also get late...

Little madhu then runs to her mom who is in kitchen...

M:momma...y don't u buy me a cycle like bhaiya...see now daily I have to depend on him to go school...he is not at all waking...(she sadly pouts)

P: wait il see him...it's been past 7:00am and he is being lazy...

Then Padmini rushes to her lazy son who loves his sleep more than anything in the world...then after strict warnings from his mom he wakes up...After sometime...sultan on his cycle by having madhu on his backseat...goes to school...

While parking at parking place...

There comes Trishna...whom she lovingly calls trish running to her...

Trishna(shouts): hey madhu...y r u late...wait..I know this dinosaur had made u late again right...

Madhu calmly was going to explain something...but...sultan interrupts...

S: hey u..wt u said im dinosaur...u r a monkey...and...don't shout in my sis ears...with u in less time my sis will be deaf...

T:Sullu...ullu...shut ur mouth...(she shows her tongue) I know u only make madhu late everytime with ur kumbhkarna sleep...

S: me ullu u...stupid girl...

Now sultan starts pulling trishna's ponytail...

S:what me ullu...tell again...

T:aaa...

Now trish glares at him and starts pulling his crafed hair...

They soon got into pulling eachothers hair fight and madhu was scared and shouting at each one to back off...but this is daily drama for everyone...so they didn't tried to pull eachother apart...then all students started their laughing...there suddenly came teacher and watch man and pulled them apart and sent them to their class exam...After sometime...finishing off exam Madhu & trishna comes out with smiling faces...

M:trish how did u write..?

T: it was very easy...i have done well but I wish Sullu must get hard paper...

M:trish y u and my bro always fight yar...from childhood to till now...u both never stopped...see now we r going to 6th stnd and sultan 8th that means high school now atleast u two must behave.

T:madhu tell ur bro abt this thing he must behave gud to his younger people...he never respects me and always bullies me...ok let's go home...from tomorrow holidays...

M&T:Yayyy...!!

T:Tomorrow il come to ur home ok...we will play shettle...bye madhu..

M:ok bye trish (smiles)

Next day:

As planned trish and madhu were just coming outside to play their shettle cock...but suddenly...they have seen some people shifting their luggage in Madhu's neighbourhood...

T: Madhu I think new people has come into that house...

M: yes

T:ok let's play anyways

And then trishna and madhu started playing...suddenly their cock falls in their neighbours house lawn...

T: madhu u go and get the cock...I'm feeling thirsty...il drink some water and come back...

Then madhu goes outside her gate while putting her head down...then there comes her hero from other side and dashes her unknowingly...and their both foreheads get hurt...

M:aahhh...

Rk:aaah...

Madhu's specs has fallen on floor becoz of this act...so Rk bends down and takes them...

Madhu was still rubbing her forehead...then Rk with a sweet dimple wali adorable smile...says

Rk:hiii...I'm sorry...(with puppy face)

Madhu looks at him...she instantly likes the dimple smile...he is so cute and she likes him...then he puts her specs to her eyes on her face...and also gives cock which was fallen in their lawn...

Rk:I was coming to give u ur cock but u were on way so we got dashed...is ur head hurting...

M;no...(by his caring words...she even more likes him)

Rk:hmm...do u stay here in this house...

M:yes...

Madhu was all this while innocently looking at him...in a daze...he was too cute...

Rk:we r new here..what's ur name and...wch standard r u...

M:I'm Madhu... going to 6th and u?

Rk: I'm Rishabh and going to 8th and u can call me RK...which school r u...?

M:oh...St.Joseph

Rk:oh dats nice even I have joined that school...

Rk(with dimple smile):So friends...!

Madhu liked rishabh in his first meet itself and his dimple smile very much...and making her his friend has bought very much happiness to her...becoz many people doesn't like to be her friends...as they think she is a boring girl according to her attire and bookworm,shy nature.And she declared she has fallen for him...

M(smiling at him):friends...!

Suddenly sultan comes there after his match at playground with his colony friendS,...

S:hey madhu...who is this...?

Then trishna too comes out...and stands beside madhu with curious look at Rk...

M:Sultan,trish this is Rk our new neighbour and our new school mate,new friend and also going to be sultan classmate...

S: Really that's nice...do u play cricket..

Rk:yes cricket is my favorite game...I even have cricket kit which is presented by my dad for my last birthday...

S:wow...we r friends..then..

M:Rk...this is trishna..my bestie and my class mate...stays in next lane..

Sultan interrupts..."yes u can call her monkey... .u can see this monkey daily in our house..."

T:hey ullu..shut ur mouth..otherwise il tell to padmini aunty...

S: Il cut ur pony...if u say anything against me...

T:what..u will cut my pony...il puncture ur cycle...dinosaur

S:u called me dinosaur...

T:yes il also tell to Rk that u r kumbhkarna...

Sultan now lost his patience...and started pulling her hair and trishna started beating him...

Rk was looking at them in shock...and madhu was standing calmly...then Rk looked at her in questioning way...and couldn't control himself...he went near them and tried to pull each other away but they both pushed him away and madhu immediately caught his hand and made him stand on his feet...

M:Y did u go in between them...u must not go while they both r fighting otherwise u will get hurt by them...no one wil interfere while they are fighting...that's y I'm standing here calmly...

Rk was in shock looking at her...

Rk:when wil they stop...is it common for them to fight like this...

M:yes...wait here il call momma...then only they wil stop...today they r fighting too much...

Rk:ok...OMG

Padmini then comes out running and warns them and then they while glaring each other back away...

Then suddenly searching for Rk radhaji comes there and they get introduced to each other and padmini welcomes them for dinner too next day...and they become a kind of friends...and Malik and mohan too feel compatible with eachother...

Next day Rk family comes for dinner and then sultan shows his room to Rk and his play things and they discuss everything and nothing and they become close to eachother...Madhu was just admiring Rk from far with a novel in her hands as if she is reading it...Rk was too much engrossed in their boy talks with sultan as they both feels they are now big boys as they are now high school...

Madhu started a diary specially which is handmade by her...and she kept that diary only to write about her secret love Rk...and started to write events of that day around Rk...

In Diary:

Dear Diary...

He is new here..staying my neighbourhood...Shifted just yesterday...The first look at him..i forgot everything around me..so stupid of me I thought...I was just couldn't take off my eyes...he is so cute...he was friends with me next moment itself after meeting me...he is so tall and fair...his smile is one thing I can just give up everything to look at his smile and his dimples...Awww...And today he is here for dinner...but I couldn't resist myself staring at his every moment of him...Im just in love with him...Love u Rk...

She then closes her diary and puts it secretly in middle of her books rack as it should not be seen by anyone...and goes to bed smiling herself...and telling "Awww...Im in love with my Neighbour...The Boy Next door"...

The days passed..Rk and Sultan became close to eachother even can say besties and when Rk comes to madhu's house he just tells her hii and bye...and then goes to sultan room and all the while when Rk is at her home madhu puts a book to herself and sercretly stares at him and his all moments and not to miss his dimpled smile...and she loved all the naughtyness and antics of rk...he is a gud cricket player and when rk and his brother plays cricket with their friends in the ground opposite to their house madhu goes to balcony and stares at him while he is playing...and also when they play board games with sultan trishna and rk even when rk tries to cheat everyone she wud love his antics calmly and even when it is her cheated by him and he getting win she used to love to be losed by him...Madhu also started to give more time for her hobbies of joining classes of drawing potraits which is her favorite...

And as always trishna and sultan fights were going as their daily routine or it has become their hobby...and rk and madhu used to sit back and enjoy mainly rk...even he used to lit the fire between them by making sultan or trish rile up at each other...

Then their holidays came to an end...and they r gonna join their new classes...Trish and madhu were now 6th stnd...and Sultan Rk are 8th...

One day in the evening...Madhu and Trishna were in madhu's room...suddenly Padmini calls madhu for something...Then trish was alone in room and was getting bored then she looks around the room casually...and by looking at book shelf of madhu...

T(in herself):omg...how many books madhu reads...I don't know what she finds...in this stupid books...if she was a movie buff like me...it wud be very nice...we wud have watched all the movies together in theaters...but she rarely comes to theater that too with my insistance...lets see any love story books are there...let me try to read one...

Trishna then checking all the books carelessly with disintrest...then there she found madhu's handmade diary...she curiously...looks at that...then opens it...and she gets...shocked and starts reading and turns page by page all the while reading...Then suddenly madhu enters the room...and sees trish and her diary in her hands...and she quickly snatches it from her...and trish looks at madhu...

Trish(with anger and hurt in her eyes):Madhu I thought...Im ur bestie..and u share everything with me..but...

As trish was talking madhu quickly closes her room door and bolts it...

M:Trish im sorry...

T(angrily):No I don't need ur sorry..never talk to me...

M(with worry and tears in her eyes):Trish im really sorry...since from our childhood this is only secret I kept from u...Believe me...

T(smiles):Its ok madhu...I can understand...it is ur first love..so u didn't tell me..now don't cry...

Madhu then smiles and they both hug eachother...

T(excitedly):So u love Rk...

Madhu blushes...

T(teasingly):madhu ur cheeks are turning red...and now I understand...y u keep on staring at rk always...

M:hey how do u know...

T:aww stupid...im ur best friend...how wud I don't know...

Then they both giggle...

T:madhu wen r u going to tell him ur love...

M(panicks):oh..no trish not at all now...wen we cross 18 il tell him...

T:why so...

M:how can I propose now...and I don't want to...u know I get fidgeted and nervous around him always..and even thinking of thought about proposing makes my head spin...so after I grow il try to get some courage then...until then u will also not tell to anyone...promise me...that u wont tell anyone...until I tell my love for rk...

T:ok..Promise...

Then the time passes days to months...months to years and they are now in 10th standard...and Rk,sultan is in Inter 2ndyr college.

Rk had become more handsome day by day...sultan and rk even started working out together...they have become now inseperable besties as same as trishna and madhu...

Madhu's love and feelings for Rk were growing more strong day by day...And as a routine Trishna and sullu's bickering towards eachother also followed...

Now Rk had got many proposals from his Inter 2ndyr girls...he has become kind of a flirty now...he is enjoying the attention he is getting...even in his colony the girls of his age couldn't turn their eyes when he goes on street...they wud wish for a look from him...And about madhu she used to feel irritated and wen Rk gives them all flirtatious smiles she used to get jealous and sad...he never used to be with her like that...he only talks to her about anything help in his assignments and asks her do his writing works and class books...with a sweet smile...and he always cared for her that is for sure...becoz whenever madhu eats her favorite icecream..which effects her immediately with fever or cold...Rk used to scold her and get her kada from his mom...and even now he learned that kada to make and forcefully makes her drink and wen she makes a puking face he laughs at her and goes away and he always cared for her as a friend...and used to protect her even he doesn't talked much ..and when he goes busy in playing cricket with her brother and gang and wen rk and his bro comes back with all sweat and wen ask her for water...she wud run to them as it is her favorite site to see becoz rk wud be all sweating and he wud look more sexy and adorable in that look...then she wud stare him without him or her bro noticing...

For Rk madhu was always a same sweet little innocent girl he first saw...for him madhu never had changed...yes in appearance..she was same with her specs and salwar kameez and a pony with a sweet smile always on face when he sees her...he never have looked her in another way and he never got attracted or tried to flirt around her...he used to care for her always...but he never had given much concentration on her...she was just a nice and sweet friend to him...

And Trishna had always been encouraging madhu all this while to tell her feelings for Rk...but madhu was not at all ready and was procrastinating...

After some years...

In these all years...Rk had become a total flirty and was always surrounded by hot sexy girls around him and also dated some of them...And he is the most handsome guy of whole college.Girls would try to get his attention.Sultan is also a one of the handsome guy of college...as these both handsome men enter the college...girls just hover around them like bees.And even these two are badass of college...Not only in all these but in acadamics and talents also these two were well and gud.And they would enjoy the attention they were getting in college.And now they are super seniors...

Madhu had got very much miserable day by day...she had decided she is not worth of him...he could never love her...she is not like those girls he likes...she is so bore and plain...And Rk can never even look at her in that way...she had cried very much when Rk had got girl friends in his life and went on dates...and one day seeing miserable condition trishna couldn't take anymore and she told her that she wud tell Rk...but madhu made a stern decision and also told trishna...that she don't want to confess her feelings ever...and she doesn't want to become a laughing stock...she wud try to forget him...But madhu never able stop her feelings for him...becoz she had loved him truly,with her heart and soul...but she tried to avoid the feelings but everytime she wud get hurt when he was close to some girl or goes on date...trishna also knows that madhu still loved Rk...but she didn't tried to talk to her about Rk much becoz it wud only give her pain and she thought to not push over that topic madhu wud someday forget him...but madhu didn't have any choice to share her turmoil with...she only had her handmade diary which she exclusively kept for one nd only love Rk...so she wrote all her feelings of that day around him and about him in that and she has also now became perfect and got the certificate in doing pencil potraits...so in frequent pages there were Rk's pencil sketches...after letting out all her crazy feelings or sad or happy feelings whatever she had got due to Rk on that day...she wud peacefully go to sleep...

It is now Madhu and trishna's 1st day at their graduation college...where also sultan and Rk were studying their final year...

Rk has now a girlfriend named Dipali who is the hottest girl of college...they have been dating from last 6months...and ...Madhu doesn't knew anything about this...

Madhu was wearing anarkali dress with specs,a small thin chain in her neck...wearing flats as footwear entered into college with trishna...who is wearing a kurti with jeans...

Madhu was not much into fashion and all stuff...she preferred always to be simple and sweet..and she used to be comfortable in salwars so she always preferred that...and trishna was also not a complete fashion freak but she used to be little modern then madhu...she liked to wear and fancy modern clothes but having a strict family not allowed her all these things...

Madhu and trish enters the college...sultan and Rk were always used to come at last minute...but trish nd madhu always used to go together from their childhood they also started earlier and entered the college...

Madhu was hell nervous becoz she knows ragging wud be done...

M(nervously): trish...im getting afraid yar...wud they make crap things to do...

T: don't worry madhu I'm with u...ragging is fun and they won't make us feel miserable as it is also prohibited strictly...but just to have communication with us they do it...

M(smiles): hmm ok...let's go in..

Madhu and trish goes to their class after some little ragging...which is done in friendly way by some seniors...Then madhu and trish left to their class...and soon it was break...trish and madhu decided to go to canteen...

When they entered the canteen...they were searching for a table as the canteen was filled...but suddenly from behind them...

Rk: hey madhu...trish come here...

Madhu and trish turned around and saw Rk sitting there with 2 girls and 1 guy...trish looking at Rk...holds madhus hand and goes to that table to sit with him...

T(smiles): hi Rk...

M(with a sweet smile): hi Rk

Rk: hi madhu...hi trish...sit here...

Then they both seated opposite to them and Rk starts introducing people who are seated with him in the table...

Rk turns to his classmates in table...

Rk: hey guys...she is trish and she is madhu...my close friends after sultan and madhu is sultans sis and trish and madhu r best friends...and we four are friends from my 8th stnd...

M&T: hi...

Rk then looks to trish & M : madhu,trish this is karan,Ria,and she is...

Then the girl cuts off...

D: I'm dipali...Rk's girlfriend...

And she smiles proudly... By looking from top to bottom at madhu...

Rk: so tell me girls...how was ur first day...and I know madhu here too u will only be the topper...

Dipali interrupts...

Di: Rk I think madhu is a topper always...and u r so confident about her...

Rk: yes dips she is topper always and here too she will be...

Di: but madhu I suggest u...being topper in studies and studying is gud but u know u also need some care about ur appearence and style...

Madhu was feeling uncomfortable at her comment and trish was hell angry at her comment...and Rk too got angry...

Rk:Dipali...what nonsense are u talking...

D(with fake concern): Rk as a girl I want to make madhu look beautiful and want to also to wear some nice clothes like u know which in our college every girl is wearing see at her and around...how she is looking...

Rk(irritated): she is whatever is perfect dipali...no need of talking crap like this...

Madhu was feeling that she no longer could hold her tears she runs from there...looking at her Rk runs behind her...till then sultan comes to that table and looks both Rk and madhu running out of canteen...he then asks trish abt the matter...but she was very much furious on dips...she doesn't say a word...and no one says anything to him...

Madhu goes to a secluded area back side of college and cries her heart out...Rk reaches there...and looks madhu and he feels sad and feels like killing dips at that moment...

Rk: madhu...madhu plz look at me...sorry madhu...

He then cups madhus face and makes her look into his eyes...and speaks...

Rk: Madhu tell me one thing y r u crying...on which words of dipali r u crying...

M: I know Rk I'm not beautiful...nd I don't look gud as them but...

Then she cries again...

Rk immediately hugs her and holds her tightly and she too reciprocated the hug and feels secure in that...

Then after some minutes he makes madhu to look into his eyes and gently rubs her tears...

Rk: madhu u know u r the unique girl than these all girls...and the sweet smile u have wenever u greet me...it's really a pleasure...and u r special madhu...don't ever think that u r not beautiful...wtever u r...u r beautiful...

Madhu was feeling on cloud 9 after hearing to those words..from her Rk...but suddenly her happiness flew away...

Rk: And I'm sorry madhu...for dips words ...she is my girlfriend...so it's my mistake to let her say all those words...on behalf of her I'm sorry...(holds his ears) wil u forgive me...

Madhus heart flinched in pain after listening abt dips from Rk...but she remained calm and smiled and forgave Rk...

Then they both came back and headed to their respective classes...dips by seeing Rk not talking to her after that incident whole day she asked sorry and they both went out...

Madhu at night was again miserable and sobbing about her love life...and she instantly opened her diary and started writing it...

Dear diary...

Do u know today Rk hugged me for the first time...it was bliss...I felt secured in his arms...like he was my knight in the shining Armor...he made me unique from all...I don't know it is because he sees me beautiful or ugly from all...I find it second becoz I know for consoling he said me those words in a way I'm beautiful...but the way he told and by seeing into his eyes I felt his words to be true...but never I'm the one he likes...even I'm unique to him...and his introduction to his hottest girl friend made me more miserable...but I need to cope up with this...this is only my love...never i wud experience a love from him...but I wish I wud be his love..and he wud love me back as I do...(tear drops on the paper)

Gud night diary...!

And she turns her lights off and goes to bed...

Dipali was pissed off by Rk's behaviour for that plain jane...and her hatred starts towards madhu and trish...

The days started passing...months...passed...everything was going 50-50 for madhu..she is happy about her class and friends and she is hurted inside wenever she looks at the site of dips and Rk...then they got a vacation after their midterm exams...for 10days...

On the 1st day of vacation Rk was sleeping past 10:00am...he was in deep sleep...then suddenly...some one enters his room and goes to his bed side and sees him sleeping then next minute pulls his cheeks hard by calling..."cutie pie"...

Rk with a jerk and irritation by rubbing his paining cheeks gets up...and looks at the person...then his face was in shock...joy...excitement...and then he comes out of bed and lifts that person and twirls her...

Rk: Priya...,.yayyy...

P: common Rk get me down idiot...

Rk puts her down...

Rk: I can't believe my eyes...how come u r here...OMG...wen did u come...and y didn't u inform me...

P: oh oh...wait..wait...il tell u everything...give me a chance...

Rk : hmm...

P: I just came in morning flight...and do u know something...I'm going to stay with u from now and join ur college...So common I think it's a vacation going on to ur college right...within that time let's go and make admission...common go and fresh up...until then me too will fresh up and come...

Rk:hey wait...wait..what u said u going to stay here and join with me in colg...priya r u ok...wt r u saying yar...

P:I understood ur confusion hero...yes for a change I made a decision to stay here in india...and also decided to be with u...r u not happy about this...

R(in confusion): happy...very happy...but suddenly...it's ok wtever u r here...(excitedly he hugs her)

Ok il go and get ready...then we wil go to college for admission...

Priya is Rk's cousin who till his 7th stnd was his only bestie...and they were together in a joint family but after Priya's family shifted to US and Rk here they were apart physically but always kept touch and updated with phone calls and video chats...they are close to each other very much...she was his bestie from childhood who knows him well.

At breakfast table:

P: Radha maa where is mohan chacha...

Ra: he went with his friend on some work beta...

Rk comes and sits in his chair...

Rk:hey priya...did u get ur certificates...might be they are required...

P:ya I got it...

Suddenly as always sultan comes for Rk...

S: Rk...Rk...

Rk:Hey sultan...

S: hey...common yar let's go to some movie today...I'm bored

Then sultans eyes fall on Priya who was looking him...sultan then turns to Rk to know who is she...

Rk: hey sultan she is priya...my cousin...she had come from USA...and she is going to stay here and join our college...

S: oh yeah...I do remember u saying someone ur close friend stay at US...That's great she is joining our colg but quarter year is over right...

P:it's ok sultan I can manage...

Sultan smiles at her...

Priya then turns to Rk...

P:hey Rk...where are ur other two friends...madhu and trishna...

S: u do know them...

P: yes...he tells me everything...

Rk: madhu never comes out from her room or her house...u know she is so much introvert...and trishna..she will be coming only to madhus place and will be around her always or will be fighting with sultan...

P: oh...I know...once u sent me the video of them right...I can't imagine how I have laughed on seeing that...even recently wen I was searching for something I got that video...I watched it again like a comic clip and Rolf...

Sultan looks at Rk in shock who was now hiding his face from sultan...

S: Rk what video and which video...

Rk: hey nothing Sullu it's just that...

P:hey Il tell u...

Rk: priya plz no...

S: ok tell me...u shut up Rk...

Priya then extends her hand towards sultan and asks "then friends"

S: friends...

P: when trish was 10 stnd and u in inter 2nd year u two were fighting that time he recorded ur fight...and he had sent me that...it's not his wrong becoz wenever he tells abt u & trish fights we wud laugh a lot so actually want to see hw u people wud be while fighting and wanted to watch in real so I gave him this idea...to record ur fight secretly and send him...

S: U...Rk...idiot...u never tell me this...wait u...

Sultan then runs after Rk and after sometime he catches and he was playfully beating him...

Rk: ok ok sorry yar...

S: u better be...

P:Guys...if ur fight is over..can I meet madhu and trish...

S:ya sure...come to my place..they two r in madhu's room...

P:hmm that's nice...il give them a surprise...

Sultan,Priya and Rk goes to madhu's place and Priya...silently sneak into madhu's room by making Rk and sultan not to come with her as she wants to go alone and introduce herself and surprise them and play some prank...so sultan and rk were in sultan's room...and priya goes near madhu's room whose door was closed but slightly open...Priya tries to go near and suddenly she hears their talks...as she is always a naughty...she wants to know what were they upto...and now was hiding behind the door...

In madhu's room:

T:I can now understand ur pain madhu... Always how u feel when rk behaves like a jerk and runs and gets cozy with all the girls...these many days...I know that u always get hurt by seeing rk like that...but I since never experienced that pain...I didn't know know the depth of ur pain...

M:Trish y r u talking weirdly today...what happened to u...and about rk..i already told u...im not gud enough for him...I can never be Rk's type of girls and I also told u my feelings will be always with me...and I can never expect him to reciprocate and I made it clear in my mind so there's no use on crying over him...Im happy that he considers me as gud friend...

T:But tell me truthfully...u still write ur feelings on Rk in ur special diary at night and feel hurt right...dont lie madhu...I have seen u many times with puffy eyes in mornings...whenever Rk goes on date with someone the day before...

M:Trish y r u talking useless talks now...wt happened...

T:becoz im too feeling same like u...like crap...even I cant understand myself whats going in me...Im not beautiful right...no one can ever love me right...

M:trish who is that person...

T:who ever it is...why does it matter...he always hates me...

M:trish why r u crying...r u not gonna say...who it is...

T:if I say...u wont scold me or cut off our friendship right...?

M:no...y do i...whatever it may be I cant ever lose u...

T(with lowering her eyes down):sultan...

M(excitedly):really...wow...trish...y didn't u tell me...

T: y r u excited ..so much...

M:then what trish...who will be more than happy if u become my bhabi

T:oh shut up madhu...he never can like me...and he likes that ria...

Priya understood everything now...so she suddenly knocked on door like she came there just then...

M:who is it...

Madhu then opens the door to see a bright smiling face looking to her curiously from top to bottom...

M:excuse me...who r u...

P:hi bhabi (and she hugs madhu tightly)

M:what?

P:ya...bhabhi...common..Rk told me everything...

Trish now comes to them...

M:what r u saying...im not getting anything...

P:bhabi now don't play innocent...I know everything about u and rk...

Madhu's heartbeat had stopped suddenly with fear...she thought that did her love matter knows to her...but how...? She was thinking...

T:hey who r u...and what do u know about rk and madhu...

P:I also know about u trish...

Rk and sultan comes there...and looks at confused state of madhu and trish...

Rk:hey priya did u introduced urself...

P:yes Rk bhabhi IS too cute...(she then gives a flying kiss to madhu who blushes unknowingly for the word cute)

T:Rk...who is she...?

RK:what...Priya plz stop ur stupid pranks now...

Priya laughs out loud...

M(in herself):I think she is new girlfriend of Rk...may be she is... Becoz she is too beautiful...no doubt...

RK:sorry madhu...trish, madhu.. she is priya...my cousin...she is going to be here and join our college...

P:hey sorry two of u I wanted to play prank..thats it...come on...friends...

Then they became friends...After getting admission in college...The whole week Priya,Rk,madhu,trish and sultan spent their week together having funtime...this whole week priya observed all 4 of them keenly and their way of treating each other...and she also came to know Rk's mentality clearly...even she know him well...but about girls what does he thinks and about madhu how does he think and she also came to know about his love for dipali...madhu and trish also found a great friend in Priya...she was very naughty and friendly...Meanwhile Rk was also having talk with dips on phone but not much as he totally involved himself with these 4 and he was enjoying his time more with them and he unknowingly forgot dips much...And after much time they 4 friends were together having funtime only after priya came...and she again taken back them to their childhood memories

On last day of their holiday...at late night...Priya was in balcony of their house...and looking at full moon thinking something seriously...Rk who was pissed having a heated argument with dips came to have some fresh air in balcony...at that time he looked at Priya who was lost in thoughts and was gloomy and surprised to see her at this time here... and came near her...and was calling her from last 2mins...then he shaked her by shoulder to get her attention...

Then Priya...came out of her trance...and looked at Rk with tears which are at corner of her eyes...Rk was shocked to see her in that condition but Priya...instantly again masked her cheerful face and...

P:hey dude...whats up...y r u here...

RK(with serious stern tone):I think even u have to answer my same question...

P:oh...nothing just thought to see the full moon from india...(and she laughs)

RK roughly pulls her arms...and asks her...

RK:Y r u lieing me...and why r u crying...? Plz tell me yar...I never seen u this emotional...if u r in this state...then there must be some serious reason behind it...tell me priya...don't u wanna share with ur best friend...

Priya with flowing tears smiles and thinks for a while and looks at Rk and...

P:Love...that is the problem...

Rk:do u love someone...

P:no loved someone not anymore...he made a mockery of my love...but u know what Rk...when u truly love someone u can never forget them...being also known that he wud never love u or loved u...u still crave for their love...and somewhere in u...u wish to get that love from them...and want to be in their arms forever...

Rk(smiles):wow...is it u saying all this...never thought of u falling in love...and never even thought of being u serious in love and talk this emotionally...but anyways tell me what happened yar...

P:Abhay...my friend in US when I was doing my high school...I also mentioned him as my friend sometime back with u...we were very close friends...eventually I liked being with abhay,spending time,and having always around him...but I don't know about him and his feelings for me...but on one valentines day suddenly he proposed me...I was on cloud 9 and thought he also liked me the same way I did...we were together for 8 months and then one day...he took advantage with me...then I was madly in love with him...I gave myself to him...then after few days he started avoiding and going around other girls...then one day he made a mockery infront of our classmates that he has won his bet of making me fall in love with him...and I was totally shattered,depressed I couldn't stay there anymore...so I came back here...

BY saying all this she was all in tears and broken and fallen on her knees...and rk..felt bad and went and hugged her and consoled her...after sometime Rk made some jokes to make her cheerup and she quickly was back to herself...and then they both sat their in balcony talking to eachother...

P:Rk...I forgot to ask ...y were u here late night...

Rk was feeling hesistant then priya holded his hand and asked him...

RK:dips...she is pissing me off day by day...she is getting into my nerves...she feels that Im not giving her my undivided attention...and not calling her,or not gifting her anymore...and in these holidays she feels that u and me became pair as after u came I told her about u...so she is thinking becoz of u Im not calling her...and talking to her...

P:Rk...do u really love dips...

Rk looked for a while at priya...

Rk:ofcourse priya...but 24 by 7 being only with her and talking only with her is impossible right...

P:yeah...do u think dips really loves u...

RK taken back with that question...

Rk:ya...but she is little demanding priya...dats it...

P:dips is hot right Rk...

Rk:yeah kind of...but y now...

P:casually asking...lets talk tomorrow about this now im sleepy..come on go to sleep...

Then its morning and college reopened and Priya's first day at college...Priya was very modern and hot girl...but she never gave much importance to beauty in other persons...she always preferred character to beauty...

In the morning Rk and Priya came on Rk's bike,Trish and madhu on trish bike and Sultan on his bike and everyone at college was staring at the new modern hot girl in aww...and She being with Rk on his bike everybody made fun of dipali on her back and some of them were witnessed by her...they were saying that now dipali has hard time to be girl friend of Rk...and her being college beauty...as there came a competition to her...Dipali was hell angry and went to parking plot and looks at all 5 of them and comes to Rk...but he doesn't care as he was already angry on her and he goes away from there...Then she nicely with fake smile goes to Priya...

D:hi im Dipali...call me Dips...Im Rk's girlfriend...the hottest guy of college...u r priya right..actuallly Rk told me...about u...

Common come with me...u r our class right...and u have some class so be with people who r our class...not with behenji's (by looking at madhu and trish)

Priya now understood what dips was trying to convey and what r her intensions are and how is her character...

P(smirks):oh is that...didn't he tell u that im his new girl...and class...im very much careful in maintaing class with people and u r right I shud be with people who are with class of having dignity and shame that's y u know I very well prefer madhu and trish for that...common madhu, trish lets go in...

Priya again turns to dips:do u know what dips...im sorry I cant stand shamelessness much time...so sayonaara...!

Dips was hell shocked to her audacity and dareness to give her back...and everyone around her were laughing at her...and she stomped her foot and went away...

The day had passed with dips cursing Priya and making ideas to get back Rk...and Priya with her 4 friends...had nice time till she got back home and then that night after having their dinner Rk was watching tv...there comes priya...

P:hey Rk...i need to talk to u man...

Rk:what is it...wait lets go to balcony...

They were again in balcony alone...sitting...

RK:whats it...

P:u seem to be very happy...r u not worried about ur dips...

RK:why...whats there in worrying about her...

P(smiles): Ok coming to the point...U think that u r in love with dips...but no Rk...u r not...not at all...u r attracted to her...and she too doesn't love u...she is just proud of having college handsome by her side...U both are not at all in love...and u didn't experienced love till now...the attraction towards dips u have is not at all love...becoz I have observed u and seen into ur eyes while u looking dips...and she is not at all right to love...

Rk:Priya...what r u trying to tell me...?

P:That is u don't know what is love...and what u think is not love...

Rk:u know very well about love right...I think u did a PhD in love...

P(smiles faintly): stop ur sarcasm Rk...I know I might have not done phd in love but I truly,madly and deeply loved someone...

Rk: sorry priya..I was just...

P:it's ok Rk...I wanted my friend to show the right path..that's y I'm talking to u this topic...

Rk: I agree I'm definitely attracted by dips beauty...but I don't know seriously I'm loving her or not...how can I know...

P: if u loved her truly then u wud not have been this relaxed and relieved after a fight with her and being happy avoiding her and also ur look towards her explains me everything...there will be a admiration look in u towards ur lover wen u really love ur partner...but wen u look towards dips u have blankness in u...Rk do u want to experience true love and want to see urself from the eyes of ur love...

Rk: what..?

P: do u know some one around u loves u like crazy from past 9yrs...but u r the blind idiot never recognised...and beauty is not always love...beauty is always in the eyes of beholder...

Rk: some one around me loves me...and I don't know that...that too from 9yrs...then y didn't she confessed me...

P: becoz she loves u truly and wants ur happiness and she thinks the girls u go around are ur taste...

Rk: I'm not getting anything clearly...I'm little confused..

P: wait...il come in a bit...

Priya goes away and comes back in few seconds..with a diary in her hand...and gives it to Rk...

Rk: what is this..?

P: common on open it...and experience urself...

Rk then opens the diary...it was written "Madhubala loves Rk" and he looks at priya...with shock on his face...and she encourages him to turn the paper...then he was utterly shocked..there was a pencil sketch of him with his dimple smile...and it was written at the bottom of the potrait..."love u RK" then he turns next and there written a para...he reads it...and it is about their first she has written...

Dear Diary...

He is new here..staying my neighbourhood...Shifted just yesterday...The first look at him..i forgot everything around me..so stupid of me I thought...I was just couldn't take off my eyes...he is so cute...he was friends with me next moment itself after meeting me...he is so tall and fair...his smile is one thing I can just give up everything to look at his smile and his dimples...Awww...And today he is here for dinner...but I couldn't resist myself staring at his every moment of him...Im just in love with him...Love u Rk...

(This is same as above as it is first Page of Diary)

Then he turns next page...there was another para...like this...

Dear Diary...

Today I'm very happy I have got the gift from my love of my life on my birthday...it is a pen...do u know today early morning I went to his house to just see my favorite dimple wala smile of him on my special day to be it as the first thing of this day...I wanted to experience...

Now Rk was so much engrossed and intently reading the dairy and turning pages...he then turns some bunch of papers and sees his another pencil sketch when he was in inter 1st Year with a cap on his head which was his favorite cap...and there was also mentioned dates in that diary with all her entries...below the potrait...there were some lines written...

Dear Diary...

Today Rk had worn this cap...he was looking dapper with this cap...and today is his first day of college...hope he does well...!

Rk was now astonished...speechless...then he turn some pages and got into the page wen he was degree 1st yr...

Then there he read again a page of notes written by madhu...and that page had also looked like...some water was fallen on it...

Then he started to read that...

Dear Diary...

I have now made my decision...I would never express my feelings to Rk...I came to know I'm not of his type...I'm not worth it...I cannot be beautiful like those girls...I'm just an ordinary girl for him...he never looks at me like he looks at those girls...I'm never gonna be his special one...or his love...it still hurts me when ever he gets cozy with some girl infront of me...I coudnt take it...and today he had gone on a date with payal...she is so beautiful...I wish me too had born that beautiful...may be Rk had looked over me...but now nothing is going to happen...my feelings are burried in this diary itself...but I don't know I couldn't stop loving him.,.even after making myself telling 100times to not love him...I can't help it I need a cry...gudnite diary...!

Rk read through out the diary and was in tears and in aww...he is just speechless...!

Priya walks to Rk and sits beside him...

P: Did u understood Rk what is a true love and the depth of the writings and Rk for once see urself through madhus eyes u feel special urself...the admiration,affection,love in her eyes she has for u...I can see clearly...

Rk:Priya I never imagined madhu to be in love with me...and that too...this much...and I never flirted or took advantage of her becoz I ever considered her as my gud friend and I always liked her innocence,nature,charecter nd I care for her...becoz she is not the type of girls I go around...she is so pure and fresh...I could never insult her by doing such things with her...and thought of she wud cutoff our friendship...yes I agree I didn't loved her but I always liked her in all the ways...but here madhu has written she wants the things I didn't do...and done with all the girls...

Priya grins at Rk widely at his confused face...

Rk(snaps): what...?

P: Rk remember one thing if girls say yes that means it's a no...if they say no that means it's yes...madhu is a girl...she may be doesn't look like other modern girls but she is a girl...so she obviously likes having her lovers attention...his touch...his words...his flirting for her...whatever he does for her it makes her feel special...it wud be small petty things but they are big gifts for girls...they love their partners when they praise their beauty...their attire...their work and everything...and also they get jealous when they see their partner with someone and they wants them to even strangle to death is not a surprise...they feel possessive and it referrs to boys too...

Rk: OMG...I didn't know anything...I understand now how madhu felt wen I was with some others...

P: So shall I consider now as u love her...Rk

Rk: Priya ya till now I really didn't acknowledged madhu in that way but I liked her in every way...if I expect a partner for my life long I wud see for qualities of madhu has... not the qualities of dipali or that bimbo girls and now after coming to know about her feelings in this diary...I completely fallen for her dedicated sincere love for me...who can love me more than this...

P: then what about beauty...Rk...Do u think madhu is beautiful...

Priya was testing him...

Rk: Beauty is always in the eyes of beholder...it's true...and for me never madhu was ugly...she was always sweet,cute and innocent girl for me...and she is just perfect the way she is...

Priya smiles contently at her friend and gives a big bear hug...

P: so what next mr.Rk...what r u going to do ?

Rk(smiles cheekily):I'm going to do all that my madhu wants to experience from me. Which she had missed ...and i will make her feel special by making other girls jealous of her...and will prove her how beautiful she is for me...and will love her the way she loved me...

Then they both burst out laughing...

Then suddenly Rk stops...

Rk: hey priya...how did u know about this diary...

Priya tells whatever she has listened on the first day when she went to meet madhu and then yesterday when she was in madhus room when madhu went out she has seen that and took it without her notice...

Rk: you theif...and wait what u said trish is in love with sultan...wow great...!

P: ya...need to unite them too...wanna play a cupid..(winks)

Rk : thank u darling...for all this...

P: I want a party not this stupid thank u...

Rk: ok sure now gud night...

P: yeah sweet dreams..nah madhu dreams ...

And they went to their respective rooms to go to sleep...

Rk slept thinking of madhu...still not believing how was he so blind these many years and planning for a new start of love life with madhu...

Priya...slept thinking of her friend Rk had took the right decision of his love life which definitely madhu deserves for her unsaid love these many years...and also about her love life which tored her within...her Abhay...

Madhu who now was all tired searching her special diary...turns up to bed crying that her only thing that she wud love to express herself about Rk was now missing...and curses her mom...who had solded all the wastage without knowing her...and even she wondered did her mom discovered her feelings in that diary while solding but her mom being same as always she decided that she didn't check it while solding it...and she thanked her starts atleast it was not revealed to her mom...and she quickly concluded that her diary had sold down in waste...But what she doesn't know is her diary had reached the right place where it all belonged to...

The Next Morning...May be the New Morning has started...

PART 2 : BELOW...Scroll down !!


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super cute part 1
ullu,dinosaur ,kumbakarna 😆 nice names given by trish😉
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superb ts nithu
well wat a coincidence
i watched the girl next door the other day n i was having idea of writing something like this n u wrote it
n it simply perfect rk was to die for in whole ts
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The Boy Next Door

PART 2

Early Morning...Rk was working in his gym room on his treadmill...but was in deep thoughts and a smile crept on his face and it became wide with mischief glint in his eyes which didn't get unnoticed by Priya who had now woke up and came downstairs searching for Rk and by looking at Rk she understood he was upto something...she went near him

P:Gud morning hero...

Rk: gud mrng darling...

P:if u r done...let's together have coffee...

Rk(cheekily): no I'm having coffee at my girls place...anyways have ur coffee alone ok...

Then he turned to leave...

P: hey wait...

She then looked him from top to bottom who is now with all sweaty look and tshirt which is full of sweat and muscles which are showing enough view...,

P: R u saying me...u r going to her with this look...with this sweaty look...(made a face)

Rk: sweetheart do u know my girl likes me more in my sweaty look...

P(sarcastically): oh did she come and told u...

Rk: no...I have read her diary very carefully where I found that my girl loved my sweaty look everytime I go to her house for drink after my playing cricket with her bro...I never observed her staring at me that time..as she has written in that diary she stared at me...now wanna experience and see how my girl wud stare at me secretly ( and he laughs)

P: idiot...(laughs at Rk)

Rk then goes to madhus house right beside them...madhu was in her night dress just got up and came to hall shouting for her coffee over her mom...and her bhaiya was sleeping as he loves to do that thing very much...can't give up his precious sleep for anything in world...and her dad was deeply burried his head in newspaper...madhu was rubbing her eyes and lazily walking through hall when suddenly bumped into a hard chest and she immediately looked at the face above and was kind of embarrassed...

M:sorry Rk...I was...

Rk: it's ok madhu...it felt gud...

Madhu shot up her head...

M: what

Rk: I mean u didn't hurt urself by hitting to some wall and got hurt...it was me...and it is gud right ( he smiled with mischief)

M: ha...yes...and she suddenly noticed Rk who was dripping with sweat all over his body...and sweat dripping from his hair on to his face was giving a smug look to him and muscles were seen...then looking at a playful smirk on Rk's lips she realized what she was doing...she was shamelessly drolling...

Malik looked to Rk who was standing there and called him...

M: hai Rk...so early here...u know sultan doesn't wake up early on holiday na...

Rk: yeah uncle actually there's a work with sultan lappe as there's a project we r doing together wanted to just take it to my pen drive...

M: ok...go ahead...and did mohan go for his morning walk...

Rk: no uncle as u r also not going dad didn't had intrest to go...

Then Rk was heading back to sultans room...while madhu was going to her room...Rk suddenly pulled madhu by her hand towards him to closeer to him...madhu was shocked by this action and looked wide eyed...

Rk smiling all knowing about her reactions and well enough enjoying them...coming closer to her ear...

Rk(in husky tone)madhu bring me a coffee prepared by u while I be in Sullu room...

Madhu has got a feeling of chill send through her spine...she nodding vigoriously went away from there...

Rk was trying hard to hold his laughter...by looking at madhus nervousness...

When Rk was working something in lappe sitting on study table of sultan while sultan without any concious sleeping on his bed which is opposite to study table...Madhu comes there with coffee for Rk...Rk knows that madhu was coming from behind very well with her coffee as madhus coffee was always been his favorite he could make it out with just smell of it...then madhu puts coffee silently with nervousness on study table while Rk didn't take off his eyes from lappe madhu confirms herself that everything was normal as always Rk when working something on lappee doesn't care about the world and she feels unnecessarily she is thinking more today...with that relief when she turns to go Rk pulls her by her hand and makes her sit on his lap...then looks straight into her eyes with an intense look...Madhu who experienced this sudden act...and realising where she was sitting her eyes go wide in shock...then when she looks at Rk into his eyes...she gets lost...they were sharing a big eyelock where the love in both their eyes reflecting for eachother was transparent if third person sees them...but madhu was first to realize where she was and breaks the eyelock and was going to getup but then Rk holds her tightly and says...

Rk: where r u going sweetheart...(with husky intense voice looking straight into her eyes) u know what madhu u r looking beautiful in this pink night dress of urs...

And then madhu goes in a daze and was experiencing butterflies in her stomach and it was like a dream to her...and Rk in his sweaty avatar being near her was raising fire in her body...then Rk suddenly losens his grip on madhu but madhu was lost in him to even realise that and get up...

Rk(smirking): Madhu I love to be like this having u in my lap all my life...but I think it's the time ur bro wakes up...

Then madhu quickly looks to her bro who was soundly sleeping and turns again to Rk panicked and in a jet speed runs from there as if to save her life...

Rk smiles at her and thinks himself: ohh my innocent cutie madhu...I know why r u so much confused and panicked...and the expressions u r giving when I'm nearer and touching the face of urs is priceless...love u madhubala...

And then he goes away from there to his house...

After like spending 1hr in shower and thinking continuosly without coming out of her room for some hours and not understanding a single thing...madhu decides to tell herself as a dream which she experienced with Rk on that morning...Then after having lunch there comes her bestie trishna excitedly to her room...

T: Madhuu...

M(smiling): hey trishu...

T: Madhu why aren't u ready till now...but it's ok get ready now fast...I'm very happy for u today...atlast u r coming for theatre...leaving this stupid room of urs and books...

M: wait...what u said...? When did I say that we r going to movie...r u day dreaming...

T: oh come on Madhu...Rk called me...that we all are going to movie and when I asked about u particularly he said...u r also joining...

M: trishu u know I hate theatres and movies...wait y Rk wud say that I'm coming to movie...and when the hell did u guys planned for movie without knowing me...

Rk suddenly enters Madhu's room...

Rk:Common girls...we r getting late...

Madhu looks at Rk who is now very much cool and calm and she again thinks herself and calms her nerves by telling herself a white lie to satisfy herself that morning events would never happen in her life and Rk is not a guy who likes her.And tries to convince herself today morning didn't happened...

Then when she is lost in deep thoughts sultan and Priya enters...

P: madhu common yar still not ready...we wil be late...go and get ready...

Then sultan interrupts...

S: Oh...it's ok Priya...Madhu doesn't take hours to get ready unlike her useless her best friend...common madhu...

When madhu wants to say something...trish who is now riled up with sultans comment...

T: Oh yes I may take hours to get ready but I look decent...but what about ur Ria who even takes hours but looks like a fashion disaster...

P: oh common guys plz not now...agreed you two are very much enjoying this fighting with eachother buisness but after returning from movie.

M:But Priya plz I won't come yar...u all enjoy...

T:but madhu...

Rk interrupts...

Rk: hey u guys just head out...madhu will be coming...

They all of them go out leaving Rk and madhu alone...then Rk comes to madhu who was on bed...

Rk: why don't u want to come madhu...if ur reasons are heavy crowd and not intrested in watching movie then u can happily come with us...becoz u r not at all going to be uncomfortable in crowd as u r going to be with me in that crowd and(with naughty glint in his eyes) I promise u...that u r going to be forgetting ur surroundings and nervousness and il totally take care of that...(winks at her)...and about movie r u really going to watch movie having me around...just droll over me as much as u want sweetheart...

Madhu's jaw dropped down if it is possible it might have reached down to the floor...with Rk's open flirting and calling in a nickname to her...

Rk: Madhu close ur mouth and go and get ready in my favorite lemon yellow chudidar of yours...in 15mins...

By telling this Rk goes away closing the door behind...

Madhu was now utterly shocked...and was thinking when has her lemon color chudidar became Rk's favorite and when did he even started noticing her...and on top it all Rk is flirting with nerdy madhu...is it the 8th wonder...then morning incident is also true...wait let me pinch myself...after pinching herself hard..." aaa yes it's all true..." OMG first I must get ready...

Then she freshens up and opens her dresses rack...then she looks yellow lemon chudidar...she was tempted to wear Rk's choice but suddenly...

M(herself): what shud I wear now...I'm not getting anything clearly from Rk...no il wear blue...becoz he is making me crazy with his antics from this morning...I'm being a confused soul from morning becoz of him...so il wear this...

She then quickly gets ready with simple look with her specs on her in blue chudidar and comes out to their gang for going...

Rk gives his car keys to sultan to drive...

Then Priya, and Rk with pulling madhu along with him getting as close as possible to her quickly occupies backseat...but trish was not at all ready to sit infront with sultan...she was hating him or she tells but trying to be away from him from the chapter Ria opened in sultans life.

Trish was standing out not ready...Sultan then warns trish to get in otherwise she will be missing her favorite salmankhan show...after they ending up in theatre by Rk making his seat with madhu and priya making sultan trish sit together...movie starts...

Madhu was totally confused with Rk's flirtatious smile,talks and then she decides not at all to droll over Rk and better strictly not to turn her gaze from screen she then looks at the screen...but after some time wen she sees from corner of her eyes giving a side glance towards Rk...he was simply like no care in the world resting his head on the seat by leaning backwards putting his leg one on the other like a prince...was happily staring at madhu without blinking and admiring her taking every feature of hers...madhu turns to him and looks him and frowns...but Rk didn't stopped his gaze on her...madhu cheeks were now turning colour...

M:Rk...watch the film...

Rk: Im watching what I want to watch madhu...

And then he takes hold of madhu's hand...for which madhu stiffens silghtly getting nervous by his touch...

Then he slowly looking straight into madhu's eyes he takes her hand near his lips and kisses it with a full of love...

Madhu feels a warmth and butterflies in her stomach...and she blushes and her cheeks were turning into tomoto red...

Rk smiles at her...and he interlocks their fingers...and after some minutes of looking into eachothers eyes in that screen light of theatre...

RK:madhu...come with me...want to talk to u...

M:but rk...they 3 are...

RK:madhu...they are intrested in movie let them watch it...but I seriously not turned up here to watch movie...come with me...

Rk gets up with signalling priya that they r heading out and he takes hold of madhu and goes out from the theatre...as it a Multiplex and shopping mall too...there were also some food courts...So Rk as soon as out of the theatre takes her to KFC...and sits with her by seating himself next to her...then places madhu's and his favorite order...and turns to madhu with a smile

Madhu was feeling happy nervous and butterflies,confused and what not she cant tell her present state to anyone what is she feeling now being around Rk...and that too a new Rk...who is giving her undivided attention...and what she dreamed once was happening around her out of blue...Rk and her out alone...like this and having this admiring looks from him and this flirty lines Rk using to her...

Rk:hey madhu...come out of ur confused state atleast now...u r going on in ur thoughts more faster than F1 racer...this is all real...

Madhu looks at him embarrased as how he is reading her thoughts...

RK(in serious tone by looking at her): Madhu...I broke up with Dipali...actually I never loved her...even never ever loved one...

I thought I loved Dipali...but I was really a fool back then...but not anymore...

M(confused):But why r u saying this to me Rk...

RK:Wanted to say U...to make clear of somethings...

Rk and madhu then ate in silence and then after sometime...show was over sultan called to Rk and they all met in parking plot...

Madhu cheeks were..red with blushing around Rk till then and after everyone heading to their respective places...after getting madhu into her room...Trishna who observed the change in madhu from morning and suspiciously went with her into her room and locked...then madhu who was thinking all about morning incidents with rk and smiling herself made trish more curious...

T:madhu...

Madhu looks at trish..."what trish"

T:why r u cheeks red...and y the hell r u blushing...and even u r smiling...

M:what no im not (still smiling)

T:madhu whats going on...

Madhu then looks to trish...

M:trish im too not getting anything...what is going on around me...im so much confused...but I don't know im feeling happy...

T:madhu anything is making sense to me...care to explain...

M:well...

Then madhu explains all the happenings of that day and trish was still not in terms to believe...

T:Madhu...u mean to say...Rk...Our Rk...The Popular flirty Rk...is behaving in this way out of blue...ya I observed him sitting beside u and making u sit with him in car and theatre but both the times I thought...he was just as usual...but now...and even he said u that he broked up with dips right...

M:yeah...

T(smiling happily):Madhu...I got it...He loves u...

M:what...stop it trish...

T(excitedly by falling on madhu):Yes madhu...yayyy...Rk loves u madhu...

M:trish...it will be 8th wonder if it happens...don't u think...u r thinking too much to it...how I do look u very well know...

T:yeah I know...u r pretty and cute...

M:Trish u better go home its too late...and don't put such ideas in me...

Trish understands madhu's confused state...and she too is not clear to give her confidence...so she heads back home simply to deal with this Rk matter tomorrow...

Next day in College:

Trish was parking her vehicle at parking lot and priya,madhu were talking standing there at a distance...while waiting for her to come...

Sultan and Ria comes there...and Ria was showing her new vehicle to sultan and asking him to go on a ride with her and he is the first person she is taking in her new vehicle and he immediately accepts it and they go on a ride and wen they start sultan was explaining her about vehicle gears with bending to her as he is on back seat and she is sitting infront and Ria was going all blushy with sullu touch...

Trish sees all this and remembers the day sultan had made her learn vehicle driving by being himself in her backseat and her infront and it was not at all like this...yes they were touchy but it was not this sweetly explaining sultan becoz he was all over the ride controlling trish's speed and rash drive and scolding her...and trish giving him statements of she knows everything about driving and he is the worst teacher and it was all fighting and bickering at eachother...but now the scene infront of her made the ever daring and gutsy trish who vowed to not to be weak infront of that sullu couldn't hold back her tears anymore...without her notice a single tear rolled down from corner of her eye...sultan who was also explaining ria about vehicle...remembered trish and his adventure with her and made him smile...he don't know but he actually enjoyed the moments then...and he quickly turns to trish to look at her...but then he has seen her tear and gloomy look...but then she turns away and runs from there as fast as she could...

Madhu and Priya were confused of trish running...Sultan quickly wanted to go behind her...but Ria captured his attention again and he with mind on trish and body with ria explained her and gone on a ride with her...

After sometime crying her heart out trish comes out from washroom to face madhu and priya...

Priya comes to trish...

P:So u decided to just sit and cry...hmmm

T:what

P: I thought u r a fighter and daring girl trish...

T:what r u talking priya...

P:oh...common trish I know u very well...and also sultan...he loves u trish...

T:what...r u talking...come lets go to class priya...

P(sadly):I thought im ur gud friend after madhu...but it seems not...

T:no priya u r...

P:then don't u believe me...I know trish u love sultan...if not tell me looking straight into my eyes...u cant...becoz always u r a true straight forward person...and i also know he too loves u...but he never realized it...and if he experiences the same feeling of jealousy that u r going through he will definitely come to u...what say...

T:I don't want him Priya...and better he love that stupid ria or pia and end up with some fool...I don't care...

P:shut up trish...u cant even think of him ending up with someone...right...

T(with tears):yes...but...

P(smiles):no buts...just listen to my plan...and then Priya explains the plan...and then she says...

common...lets go out now and make Mr.sultan come on his knees for u...

M(excitedly):wow...my bhai...on knees that too...for trishu...it wud be definitely a photo frame on our house walls...i want to click that...

Priya,madhu,trish were in their canteen...seated in a table...Rk comes there and sits beside madhu and winks and puts his arm over madhu's shoulder trish observed it and smiled...but madhu was still shocked as it is college canteen...all girls giving jealousy glares for madhu...Dips was fuming from corner table...

Then Rk started his flirty talks with madhu... and priya and trish didn't mind...Rk then goes for placing their order...and he also came to know about the priya cupid plan...

Then there came sultan with ria...and he joined with trishna and all...

Mukundh their classmate who already proposed trishna and was rejected by her was now coming to them ...sultan also knows about this but he always tries to glare at him and scare him to hell when he comes near her anytime...and he stopped bothering or looking at trish...but now he is coming towards their table...sultan was glaring at him but to ease mukundh...priya captured sullu attention by random talk...and

Mukundh came to trish table...

M:trish...

Trishna all smilingly..."hi mukundh..."

Sultan was angry by then...

S(with deadly glare):Mukundh...its not trish...its trishna...call her Trishna...And what makes u come here...

Rk was bedside madhu and holding her hand below the table like he is doing nothing he was while careessing her hand...Madhu was already in tensed situation wishing for sultan not hitting mukundh...and here Rk enjoying the sultan trish fiasco like a running movie and holding madhu like his favorite popcorn while watching it...

Rk then interrupted sultan...

RK(with knowing everything):sultan...r u ok...y r u shouting...

S(offended):im not shouting...just explaining him...

Trish:And y do u do that...if he calls me trish...the person that shud permit must be me not u...

Trish turns to Mukku: Mukku u can call me trish...

Sultan(raises his voice again):What Mukku...? Why r u calling him mukku...

T:Becoz I want to...and anyways y does it bother to u...

Mukundh was now shaking...

Rk whispers in madhu ears: I think becoz of ur bhaiya mukku will passout any minute...

M:shutup rk...

T(with sweet smile):Mukku what do u want...tell me...

M:Trishna...I want to talk to u something...

Trish:ohh...wait...lets go somewhere and talk...

S(pissed):why do u want to go somewhere...

RK:sullu...if he has something personal I think...y r u unneccerily bothering...

S:she is our friend...and u don't care about her...who knows...there is no safety these days...I cant believe this Makki...

T:Sultan stop it...he is not makki...

S:If he is not then u r definitely a monkey since I know...

Priya knows these two are getting into their favorite bickering...without going her plan wasted she interrupts...

P:trish...common if ur friend wants to talk to u...go now...

RK:sultan he is not a criminal yar...he is a student...and nothing happens to trish...

Sultan was clenching his fists...

Trishna takes mukundh out and its been 5mins...sultan was getting impatient...ria was now confused...to his behaviour but who r obvious about sultan anger and turmoil and his impatience Rk,madhu and priya are acting all innocent and having their food...

S:where are they...still she didn't come...is she thinking it as a park or college and he told only a minute but its been hour...

RK:sullu its just 5mins they have gone...have ur food man...

Trish comes there with all smiling and blushing on her face...and sat with them...

Sul:why the hell did u take this much time...

T:becoz we were talking...and anyways I need to go home early...Madhu,priya...wil u come to my house...I just need ur help...

P:why is there anything special...

T:yes going on a date with mukku...

By saying so she goes away from there leaving behind angry sullu...

When it was evening sultan was at trishna's place...while she was all ready to go she came out...

He was waiting for her outside in his car framing his feelings for trish...

Sultan sees trish come out...he in anger goes to her...and grips her arms tightly...

S:Where r u thinking to go...hmm...

T:Sultan leave me...im getting late...

S:shutup and come with me...

He takes trish to somewhere at hill side...in his car ignoring her protests...and gets down and stands there...trish too comes there...

S(with holding her):u want to go on date with that makki...how dare u trish...

T:If u can go on a date with that ria and can love her...then whats wrong in me going...

S:hell yes I have gone on a date with ria...but never loved her trish...and y the hell I wud love her...and I never said that I love her...I only loved u...understand only u...I don't know u love me or not...but u r not going to date with anyone...

T(with tears):Idiot then y don't u take me on date...im allowed with u right...

Sultan and trish quickly made their feelings clear...and got back home...

Next few weeks were...very happily passed for trish and sultan...ofcourse must having with their fights for silly issues...

Priya was missing abhay more by looking at the couples infront of her Rk madhu and sul trish...

And Rk in the mean while never stopped his antics with madhu and also even kissed her cheeks to her amusement...she was on cloud nine...but all confused...and couldn't accept what is infront of her...the undivided attention,touchy things he is doing,the flirtatious talks and to her surprise not even talking to any of those bimbos or caring...But she was very happy to her dreams being turned real...one by one...even somewhere she was feeling fear of again Rk turning to that bimbos...but Rk was always sure about her thoughts and not letting those insecurities suffer her...

Rk on the other hand enjoying very much the time he is spending with madhu...and when he looks into her eyes even through her specs...he could experience the love and admiration which Priya had told him...and he is getting lost in those eyes...he never felt madhu's nerdy look bore...and he loved the beauty the heart she has and the love she has in that for him...and he loved it more and more...He also understood that what is love...

Then came Valentines day...

Madhu was reading a romantic novel on her bed before the valentines day...that is 13th of feb at 11:30pm...

She was imagining the kiss which was in novel she is reading to be with Rk...like she always imagines but today was different...she already knows how it feels to have his lips on her hand and cheek...So she is wondering if that makes me have that effect just on hand and cheek what it wud be when real kiss...but she wants to go all the way with Rk...Then suddenly some sound disturbed her...and she looked to the side of sound that is when she noticed it was Rk...entering through her window...

M(panicked):Rk...u here...

RK:shuuu...madhu...don't shout...

M:but rk u here..i mean...

RK:who r u expecting madhu...

Rk then started to come closer and she took backsteps...and his

Gaze was intense and a smirk with mischeif glint in his eyes...

Madhu now was stucked to the wall and Rk comes closer to her by blocking her by resting his arms either side of wall...he came very close to her...His breath was on her...and he blowed hot air with his mouth to move the strand of hair which is on her face...then madhu instantly closed her eyes...

Rk(with husky voice):Madhu...

Madhu opens her eyes and Rk makes a proper distance from her and she looks to him...with shy...

RK:madhu I want u to wear this...go change quick...

M:what...why...

Rk:madhu please...dont ask any questions only 10mins...if u r not going to change then im ready to do that for u...choice is urs...and u know I wont backout...

Madhu...runs to washroom with the packet Rk has given her...

After 10mins...Rk started calling madhu...But madhu was not responding...

RK:madhu...r u there...plz sweetheart say something...

M:Rk...im done...but...

Rk(smiles):madhu...come out then...

M:Rk...she was feeling shy...

Rk:madhu I want to look at u...

Madhu shyly opens the bathroom door...Rk's eyes shot up at her...and he was dumbstruck...she was a pure beauty...

Rk had gifted her a pink netted disigner embroidered saree...as madhu never had wore saree...rk wants to see her in saree...It was revealing her milky white skin at waist and upper part and also a deep low neck back...madhu never revealed that much of her skin...she was very shy...but Rk...he was drawned to her in a daze without taking his eyes off from her...and for madhu it was like rk's eyes were seeing her naked form...

Rk comes in front of madhu and with his left hand he touchs the cheek of her and his other hand travels through her bare waist...with that touch...madhu tilts her head by closing her eyes and a fire explodes with her...then Rk presses her into his body...madhu's eyes were still shut...he couldn't take it anymore and he takes her head in his hands and takes her lips in his and takes her to the passion filled kiss...tasting her every inch of lips...then after few minutes they broke the kiss for breath...and then Rk looks at madhu with a small smile...

But suddenly the clock stricked 12 and sounded its bell then Rk went on his knees imediately and took out a ring...and...

RK:Madhubala Malik...Im truly madly and deeply in love with u...i want to grow old with u ...i have given my heart to u and please give me yours and we will lock them together...and lets throw away the key...what say...

Madhu was now in tears...she just want to believe the moments...

RK:madhu I know u don't believe me...im sorry for all the past side of me who was a bloody cassonova...but I never loved anyone madhu...I only loved u...after knowing what love is... and now my knee is aching...plz...tell me something...

Madhu goes on her knees and when their heads at equal height she presses her lips over his...and he after a second he takes the lead...and they kissed eachother with giving all the love,affection,promises to eachother...

After a few moments they part and Rk gives her diary to her...

M:Rk...this diary...

RK:don't worry...it has never been stopped madhu...u wanted to never stop this diary filling ur feelings for me...that's y u made a hand made one and that too large and thick one...and trust me I never stopped it...I continued it by filling my feelings for my madhu...'

Rk then explained everything happened...and said sorry for not recognising her feelings...they hug eachother...

Rk:madhu..common now go to sleep...will meet u in morning...

Then he gently carried madhu to the bed and placing blanket on her...he looks at her for few seconds...then...he unwillingly...turns to go by kissing on her forehead...

But madhu...holds his hand and stops him...

M:Rk...I want to spend sometime with u...by holding u...

Rk was tempted...but he knows if he sleeps there like that he might do something she doesn't like...with heavy heart he was going to decline...but madhu pleads him...

madhu was still in her saree...

RK:madhu if im here anymore I may do something wrong...

M:im ready to do any wrong with u Rk...and it is not at all wrong if it is with u...

Rk then gets into bed and they were soon making love...and Rk didn't go all along even after permission of madhu as he want to have that moments after marriage...

After 1year:

The two love couples were enjoying their love life sul trish,Rk madhu...and also their parents got awared of it and engaged them...And sultan and rk studies were completed too...

Priya was now heading back to US with Abhay who has come all the way for the love he lost and repented...and Rk helped him in getting back Priya...

And there was a happily ever after...

Friends...Nithu here 😊...Thank U for reading my Story...as im even being busy...to satisfy my urge of writing...I have written this 😉...Hope u all had liked it...and it wud be a pleasure if u guys...COMMENT something for my writing...atleast give me a satifaction for my aching hands...for typing this long one...😆😃


Love u all...!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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If u any of them here want PM for my Stories of written or running or

INDEX Plz buddy me or PM me....Urs Nithu !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome and beautiful part
loved both parts dear

Edited by anish17 - 10 years ago
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wow what a beautiful story
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Aww it was such a cute story ! Rks confession was really cute !! Priyas words to rk worked very well ! all credit goes to priyaa !! Thanka for pm
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awesome story..
loved it a lot..fabulously written .👏👏👏 waiting 4 next eagerly pls update soon n thanks 4 pm
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so beautiful story thnx 4 pm

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