RM TS: The Boy Next Door

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veni7842

@veni7842

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

read part 1 ...it was amazing nithu...

sullu & trish fighting frm childhood is written superbly...

madhu love for rk is awesome...

the way u penned her feelings in her dairy is very touching...i could feel her pain by those words...

priya entry is really good for all...

but i felt sad for her love abhay...he must very unlucky person...

she did a good job by letting rk know madhu's feelings towards him...

priya is really a sweet heart...

excited to read second part...

sorry for reading it late**Puppy face**...

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veni7842

@veni7842

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

part 2 is simply superb dear...

the way rk is flirtering with madhu and his antics were really amazing...

poor madhu doesnot know that rk knows her feeling towards him through her dairy...

trish and sullu love confession is good...

both pairs r really good...

rk proposing madhu and their moments r nice...

enjoyed reading this story...

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Rochelle

@-Roch-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Wow Nithu! you are a brilliant writer 👏 You managed to hook me up for another story of yours 😆 How do you get such ideas huh? & also lengthy updates! Hats off for typing that much in one go! 👏 Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. RK & Madhu became friends in childhood. Madhu eventually fell in love with him. Time passed & they are grown ups. Madhu writes everything in a diary! So nice. Finally Priya made RK realize Madhu's true love for me! Loving Priya, the cupid 😉😆 Over to the next chapter!

PS- Loved those crazy fights between Sultan & Trishna 🤣

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Rochelle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome end! Finally they united Loved the romantic moments ☺️ I would like to suggest an epilogue for this. May be about their married life & kids 😉😆