RM FF - Always on my mind #2 (Chap 25 + Epilogue Pg 34)

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BEEVI

@bevi-najim

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

VERY EMOTIONAL

I THOUGHT MADHU WILL BE FINE

BUT U KILLED HER😭

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Madhu died.😭

I cried while reading the epilogue.

Awesome writing.

Plz. Let ur nxt story be something sweet n happy. It's a request.

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Boo Bear

@-Babydoll_Pooh-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

I loved it my jaan .

I totally loved it ...

You really got me emotional in this and guess what I again didn't cry 😆

Loved the whole story and the epilogue +last chapter.

Tfs for pm.

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Too emotionally you ended it, Shriya! :)

Loved it a lot!

But why didn't you kill RK too? 😆

Loved both the parts! Hope to read something from you very soon... Keep writing!

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tavamm

@tavamm

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Omg. ..vvery painful ending!!!! ...im crying. ..

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Am not sad with end shriya, as you explained this is the best end, madhu forgiving rk for what he did is not acceptable, but that accident and three years story is really unexpected one.. You very well explained his pain through your words.. Beautiful story.. Perfect end, sure it wil always on our mind.. Thank you for writing such a nice piece.. Come back soon with your next work

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Beautiful ending! Couldn't have been better. Kudos!

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#228

ohhh my ..never expected this...

so Madhu left RK...she is always there and will be there in his mind...

its kinda unexpected ending...but different...

Thank for such a nice story...but feeling sad for them 😭😭😭

Please start anew story plzzz

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#229

Heartbreaking update & Emotional Epilogue Shriya!
Madhu is died! You killed madhu, but why didn't you kill RK? You always killed madhu & keep RK alive to live a painful life!
RK's pov is nicely written! He lost every thing due to his revenge, his madhu, his happiness, his ability to walk everything! His life is fully shattered within these 3 yrs.! But he didn't commit suicide, he accept his punishment to live without madhu! RK's guilt, his emotions are nicely described! But i can't see him like this! You shattered my dream of Rishbala's reunion in heaven!
Keep it up writing of such good stories!