RM FF - Always on my mind #2 (Chap 25 + Epilogue Pg 34) - Page 25

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

very emotional update and epilogue

u have so nicely penned it

I think keeping senti aside

this is to be the correct ending

Madhu is no more to love him

he is disable to walk

he lost his love, smile and everthing

but she is always on his mind

u justified the title

continue writing

Thank u so much :D Glad u liked it dear .

Originally posted by: Sharoan

Nice Story..The end part was so sad and emotional..😭

Thank U :D

Originally posted by: asmita.jain

Wowww...amazing update...
So emotional and heart wrecking...
Madhu died and rk lost his ability to wok...
I did not wannt madhu to die...bt she died...den i thot dat rk wid die n wid meet her in heaven and confront her...bt evn dat did not happen...rather u showed another side of d story...
The end would b ALWAYS ON MY MIND...

Glad u liked it dear. All i wanted was to make this story different and unique. Glad it will always stay on ur mind. It means a lot :D

Originally posted by: Clara20

i jst hate u that u killed madhu...am eagarly waiting for last part and u did this...sry to say bt nt at all liked this..and this r true feelings of my mind...i wl nt say emotional update sad update etc...etc..

bt its nt the ending i liked...its a tragic story u made

I m really sorry if u didnt like this. But i cant help it. This is wat i had planned for from the very beginning. And i didnt want to change it. If i would have changed the ending, then let me tell u tht this would have turned like another story wher Rishbala unite n live happily ever after. People who suicide or maybe get into n accident...they dont survive always. Ther's no miracle always..I knw u would say tht this is a fanfic..but i, as a writer wanted to show this story close to reality. In reality, its not always easy to forgive someone. No one stays happily ever after. I wanted this to end this way. I ended it. I had always been considering all ur requests. But i believe tht being a writer, i have the right to end this the way i want. If u dont like it, i cant help. I m sorry if i was rude..but u were the same.

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update but emotional one
thanks for pm 👍🏼

Thank u :D

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

It was painful.

but the end justified the title. And it was not crappy, it was well written.

keep writing, will be waiting for the sweet story.

Thank u so much dear :D

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

😭 😭 😭
I m doing this only!!!
I want to kill you shri foe this tragic ending how could youuu!!!! 😡
why you did this haan??? it was better if u hv killed RK instead of madhu will be more than!!! I was literally crying reading RK's pov!!! you punished him so brutally yaar!!!
but over all awesome story!!! your write it amazingly every pin emotions all!!! 👏
pls start you one but please a happy story hunnn!!!

I m sorry :( I didnt actually wanted to punish him yaar. U knw how much i love him na? :( Thank u so much. I wrote happy os now. Happy? Haha 😆

Originally posted by: bevi-najim

Aww :(

Originally posted by: bevi-najim

VERY EMOTIONAL

I THOUGHT MADHU WILL BE FINE

BUT U KILLED HER😭

I m sorry :'(

Originally posted by: silverfire

Madhu died.😭

I cried while reading the epilogue.

Awesome writing.

Plz. Let ur nxt story be something sweet n happy. It's a request.

I m sorry for ur tears.