Rishbala TS: Obsession (updated on page 8)

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Okay very superb start !! Now lets not think in serious way !! I think rk is playing prank with madhu as he is angry with her !! May be he is doing this becoz he wants to spend time with madhu !!

Or if rk is dead he will follow madhu as ghost lol !!

I know my silly ideas wouldnt be there in this story !!

now lets see wat surprise package u r going to give us !!

Thanks for the pm

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

very interesting...
i think this accident thing is rk's one of kamina idea...just going on the title of the story...😛

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

So much romance in 1st part
love it dear
but what happened in the last part?
MY RK nahiii
But u promise to give a surprise
I think no accident occur at all
It's RK's plan to surprise madhu
thanks for pm dear

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SpotlighT

@Spot_lighT

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

interesting update..
can't wait for the next part..update soon.. 😃

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Boo Bear

@-Babydoll_Pooh-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Congratulations on new story di...

Very nice start eagerly waiting for the surprise. ..

Tfs for pm

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

nice start
awww my darling is yummy n angry
par kya hua use hope he is fyn
cont soon

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Congratulations di for new story!!! 🤗
awesomeee start haan!!!
so RK possessive nd obsessive!!! madhu is lovely!!!
end part was sad he met wid an accident I doubt haan!!! waiting for nxt...

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omama_raza

@omama_raza

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

wonderful update waiting for the next update

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Intersting story...
Loved it...

Madhu from rich background but left her father wealth bco z of her love...

Rk a very obessesive lover...

Plz continue soon

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Awesome first part.

Just one question. Is RK dead? My hindi is below good and I didn't understand the dialogues fully. So I'm guessing he is dead or maybe not. Your note below the part left me confused.😆

I'll be waiting for the next part to find out.😆

I'm guessing Madhu will eat herself up for shooing him away for the office and him get into an accident. She will Think it's all her fault.

Anyway great update and thanks for the PM.