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Posted: 10 years ago
Just making sure it comes on a new page...🤣
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Aww Ni di that's so sweet of you !
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I hate you like I love you!
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No more posts Shriya... The update will be on a new page...
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Chapter 5
(Still in Flashback...)
(Madhubala's POV)

He came to see me every night. We laid next to each other on my bed. He would tower over me and caressed my face gently. I began to melt in his cool touch. It was loving, but mysterious. What was he hiding from me? What secret was he waiting to tell me?

Our bond grew stronger each night. At the stroke of midnight, he would leave into the depths of the forest. His crimson red eyes glowed in the darkness. I watched him disappear, eager for the coming nights, when I would see him again. My days were dull and boring without him. I began to feel something for him. Something that I couldn't describe. That feeling that made my heart beat faster with excitement and that made me want his presence in every moment of mine. Was that what people called love?

(RK's POV)

Tonight was a full moon night. It shone brightly, casting its light through the window of Madhubala's room. She lay under me, her beautiful eyes gazing up at me. She caressed my face with her soft hands. I smiled at her, grazing a red rose along her body, head to toe. I watched her giggle, that sound was like glass bells. This ethereal beauty was almost mine. Once she was, I would take her away with me, far away from this place, and I would reveal to her my secrets. Her soul belonged to me, only me. She interested me. I was created a demon, never to experience human emotion in my entire existence. I didn't even know what emotions were, until I had met her. She made me feel them.

I used my powers to see the future. She would be reborn 180 years from now. She would die eventually, I realized. I needed to do something. I finally thought of my final plan. Once it was executed, no one could separate us. Not even death could take me away from her.

(Madhubala's POV)

He nuzzled his face in the crook of my neck and kissed me there. His icy cold lips burned against my warm skin. He continued to watch me intensely, like he was curious about me. His strange but romantic demeanor was something I was curious about. What was he? He didn't seem human, after the scene in the forest that night. Many questions repeated themselves in my mind. That was when he whispered something in my ear.

"Your questions will be answered soon, my princess..."

His eyes traveled to my necklace, and his eyes seemed to glow brighter. He picked it up in his hand and grazed his thumb over the ruby. He stared at it for a few seconds and then let it fall back onto me.

"It's time for me to go.." He said. I nodded.

He kissed my forehead and vanished without a trace. I started to feel drowsy, so I quickly changed into my nightgown and went to bed, clutching his rose in my hand.

(RK's POV)

I came back to her hours later. I had to take one last step to make her completely mine. She lay in her bed, sleeping peacefully. I went to her and carefully removed the necklace from around her neck. I held it in the palm of my hand, then pressing my other thumb into the ruby. A thick shadow formed around the ruby, it was a part of my dark sprit. Slowly, it infused itself into the shining gem. A dark aura escaped faintly from it. I smiled to myself, and carefully placed the necklace around her neck again. The gem pulsed with the dark energy. My spirit would slowly bind itself with her soul. Then no one could separate us. She would become mine for the rest of eternity.

(Next morning...)
(Madhubala's POV)

I woke up to my mother shaking me. I rubbed my eyes and got up.

"Yes mother?" I asked. She never came to wake me this early.

"Dear have you forgotten? Your engagement ceremony is today."

I did forget. It had slipped completely from my mind.

"Get ready quickly dear. The prince would be arriving soon, and the guests have arrived."

My mood went off all of a sudden, but to avoid angering my father, I had to get ready quickly. Mother left a gown on my bed. It was white, decorated lightly with sequins and it had intricate embroidery.

I began to get ready. Only then did I notice a strange burn coming from my necklace. It grew stronger each time I touched it. I couldn't take it off, because it hurt to do so. I ignored that and continued to get ready. A maid came and helped me do my hair. It was up in a bun...with a few curls falling down my face. Mother came back, and admired my beauty for a moment.

"My daughter is looking like an angel today." She hugged me. "Come." She led me downstairs.

Royalties from all over filled the place. Many subjects from the nearby kingdoms also joined us on this occasion. I was feeling shy with all the eyes glancing at me. I took careful steps down, avoiding everyone's gaze. But one man caught my eye. He wasn't staring at me in admiration, but rather in a strange fear. I leaned to my mothers shoulder.

"Mother, why is he staring at me like that?"

"Who?" I made a signal towards him. "Oh him? He's the occultist of the kingdom." She looked concerned. "I don't know what is wrong with him. I've never seen him like this before."

He shook his head in disbelief. I was confused. Suddenly, the burn from the necklace grew stronger. I rubbed the area in pain. But it lasted only for a second. I took a deep breath and moved on.

Prince Rohan was waiting next to the throne. His parents were standing behind him. I was presented in front of him, and he flashed a smile. Mother presented the rings. He snatched it in his fingers quickly, and grabbed my hand. He rubbed it for a while, then slide the ring onto my finger. I did the same, my hand shaking a little. I hesitantly slid the ring onto his finger, and the guests cheered. I forced a smile on my lips. Prince Rohan took my hand and kissed it, catching me off-guard.

The celebrations erupted. I sat on one of the seats next to the prince. He stared at me the entire time, laying his hand on top of mine. I slowly removed my hand and kept it away from him. Meanwhile, I noticed the occultist pulling my parents aside and speaking to them. I excused myself and went to them. The threesome looked at me, and father spoke up.

"Dear, please come with us." He said in a low tone.

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Posted: 10 years ago
First!!!🤣
Now I have low battery and have to study...😆
Idiotical keyboard... If it's not the browser, it's you that has to make my life a living hell...😡 I'll get my vengance some day... First on that browser... The D-day is nearing... Beware of an angered Ni...😡😈 Lets see if I remember everything now... Memory it's your time to shine...ROFL
Okay I so want that Murkha bala died right now... Those previous four chapters she got a pass. But this fifth chapter... She longs for him, can't distinguish her feelings for RK... Fine... But to later got engaged to Rohan... I so expected that RK would show up and cut his hand off (I would prefer Murkha bala's head...😆 OFF WITH HER HEAD!!! ROFL Where is the Queen of Hearts when you need her to scream out that? ROFL But since the heroji/villianji in the story is in love, or he has some feelings for silly bala, whether it's love or not... So the probability for that to happen is none... And knowing it's you Chotu who is writing the story, the chances are absolutely zero on that notion...😆)
Wow he was created a demon!😲 Was he created out of clay? ROFL No, no I know... He got created by play doh...ROFL No wonder why that bala is head over heels for that demon...😆 He reminds her of her childhood days...ROFL She created a demon just like him...ROFL No... Murkha bala has special powers... Whatever she creates out of play doh it comes to Life... RK was created by bala...ROFL Whatever created out of play doh, must lack the human emotions one usually possesses... But it was still a success, he became more successful than Frakenstein...😆 He got his handsome looks, no bolts coming out from his throat/neck...ROFL He got his brains and mobility... No scaring off people with his stiff run...ROFL Wah, wah Madhu... I starting to think you are a witch... No I know... she are a doppelganger... The previous her witch made him... I now this story is called Demon's Kiss... But it should be The Witches Curse...ROFL The Witch got a curse on the night she created her demon... That if she ever fall in love with the demon she would die a horrible, crucifying death ...ROFL Unfortunately the witch doesn't possess her previous memories... Yeah unfortunate...ROFL Just saying this... Die Murkha bala DIE!!!ROFL
Okay... Not sure whether or not I should comment on that part about RK seeing the future...😆 But will do that any how...😆 I loved it... But, yes there is a but... Don't get me wrong, it seems like it's misplaced or you weren't sure where to put that paragraph so just put it there... I mean what was the reason for RK to use his powers in exact that moment to look into the future... Why didn't he do that before? But I loved the part where you intentionally left out... No mentioning how, when or why Murkha bala would die...😆 Nor RK's final plan. But we will all know of it soon... As soon Murkha bala dies...ROFL Die Murkha bala! ROFL Now I'll leave it there, cause I know what suggestions I gave and don't want to reveal anything to your loyal readers...😆
Haha... He is cold as ice...ROFL Like his heart...ROFL Ah Murkha bala I so am looking forward for your painful death...ROFL He doesn't seem human... I am surprised... Murkha bala does have some brains in that void space, that is known as her skull...ROFL Chotu can this demon read minds? This demon turns out to have a lot of powers than what it first appears... And still no Maleficent horns and wings...ROFL Also his brain must work nonstop... You know having more than 10 percent capacity... That surely has to make a toll on him...😆 How does he rewind... Bedrocking...ROFL No taking human lives...ROFL And that too without leaving a trace, unless they provoc him...ROFL Then all claws, horns and wings are out and ready to take those humans down...ROFL
Heroji/Villianji's eyes glew brighter seeing that necklace... Murkh bala villianji isn't interested in you, but in your necklace...ROFL He is a kleptomaniac...ROFL That's why he is constantly hover around you... He wants to steal your precious family jewels...ROFL Chotu now you figure out what jewels I'm talking about...ROFL That ruby on that necklace is now cursed... Cursed like Murkh bala and her destiny...ROFL That kiss of his made her sleepy... He's all toxic...ROFL Filled with inner desires to conquer her... And make her his...ROFL A slight kiss from him revealed that and Murkh bala coulnd't handle the pressure and expectations and made her sleepy...ROFL
Okay have to ask... His spirit will bind itself with her soul? Meaning he doesn't have a soul, or that he will remove or darken her soul? Making her have a spirit like him? And no once could separate them?😕 Hello when did they have the bedrocking?ROFL They would get united with that...ROFL
And reading about the engagement ceremony...ROFL Two little things happened... Me laughing and two wanting to end her...ROFL She plays along with her parents in order to make them happy but is playing herself with RK to make herself happy... Double standard and so much more comes to my mind...😆 There is where I wanted a piano to fall on her head, her head getting beheaded and well anything that would result in her death...ROFL You read the first or second paragraph...ROFL
Looking like an angel...ROFL Dear Queen... I think I know from whom Murkh bala inherited her stupidity...ROFL That angel of yours is not only deceiving you and the king... But also Rohan and RK...😡 I like this killing RK... Reminds me of Rohan...
Wow the occultist senses something...ROFL I wonder what that could be...ROFL Some strange black aura that surrounds Murkh bala and it's coming from the ruby...ROFL Naa... Murkh bala stepped on something henceforth he senses something...ROFL Waiting for the next update... Which will be tomorrow...😆
I am last to comment even tough I came first...ROFL I came first in this story, second on PWF and third on OL... Still last to comment...ROFL Congratz Ni for such an accomplishment...👏😆 But you know Chotu what all happened these two weeks and what I had...
Well thanks for the update and for the PM... Enjoy your tremendous long comment...ROFL
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Well, i read it again...😆 As i didnt pay more attention while reading last time, may be i was disturbed then...sorry but Now i had got a clear idea on where all this is heading too...D-Day🤣
princessji is gonna die soon & Will born after 180 Yrs & Demon rk will be waiting for her to turn 20 yrs old So that he can again put a spell on her or on her necklace & Kill her yet again & Wait for another 200 yrs & It goes like vicious cycle🤣
better he could have stollen her from d hospital d very next moment she was born & Taken to his demon world & Pamper d baby till grows to beautiful lady & Make her his...Mrs.madhubala demon kundra...🤣

what d eff is this?😡 She wonders whether d feeling is love or not, he spend his nights with her, kiss her on forehead, nuzzle her neck, he graze her with rose but at d end of the day that moron rohan will slid d ring in her hand & she in his & On top of that he will kiss her...this is gross😡

i want to kill him but i guess demon king had already done some wicked thing with d chain...😉
his dark spirit is in that ruby stone & Will a dark gigantic monterous shadow will swallow rohan?🤣

but i think d occultist will chop all rk's plan of making her his forever... as he was curiously studying d ruby so he must have found d hidden dark spirit in it & Hinted abt it to king & Queen... & d dark spirit Instead of killing rohan, it burns princess lol...

oh no...will i get a demon's kiss in flash back or only after 200 yrs...??😕

awesome update meg.👏
i loved it...😛
story is gripping & Intriguing too...👍🏼
looking forward to read futher...😛
thanks for d pm but u know there is no need for sending pm for me, ni & Shri as we will be gawking ur thread onmass update day like a hawk...🤣

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Hola Meghu! 😆 I'm the last to Unres my comment😆 Ni di this time I'm the one who unressed the comment last not you 😆 Now I'm going to congratulate myself for Unressing it last! Congratulations Shriya for Unressing it last!!!👏👏👏 🤣


And now comes my comment!
Oh Meghu! What have you done!😆 You are going to make Madbala die so soon not very good! 🤣 I seriously wanted her to die very...very...brutally 🤣
And Rk's shadow is going to be inside her pendant till she dies😡😆
Well now I think Madbala will get her answers for loving The Demon Rk 😆 .Shall I tell you how!? By dieing simple!😆
Now I think I should come to My Rohan!😆 Aww such a sweet awesome handsome very..very Sexy Prince😳😆 Kissed Madbala's hand and they got engaged!!! To bad now I'm crying because even Rohan isn't going to be mine😭😆
Wait a minute Why should I cry hun? When I still have Rk the Demon!😆 After Madbala dies and she goes to heaven Rk will be I hell right so I will go join him in hell That's it easy right!😆

And Tada I once again forgot Rohan is still going to be mine because he wouldn't die with Madbala would he?!😆 Nah.. he wouldn't die because after Madbala dies he is still going to be mine and he will run and come and hug me ...Like this 🤗🤣

And now over to my Rk ...Aww My handsomest of all including Rohan😆 The s exist and ho test ever Demon of all The only and only Rk☺️ 🤣

Rk I'm angry on you! You now right I don't like your shadow to be on Madbala but never mind I'm still going to have you forever with me 🤣

I wish I wish I could see your 'Black Wings'😆

And now I come to that man who would dare to save Madbala!😡😆
Man I'm going to kill you brutally if you save that Madbala!😆

And now I'm over to Meghu!😆

Aww Meghu! Should I even say you this you are one hell a great writer and I love to say this. ' You always steal my heart with Your update!' Especially Demon's Kiss and PWF. ..Love ..Love it to the core I even loved OP but it's over now 😔
But I know that you are going to start puppy operation 2 🤣

Okay now should I say thanks for the pm or not?!😆 I think I shouldn't tell thanks ..
So no Thank u for pm!😆
I'm eagerly waiting for the update and I'm a hawk😆
Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago
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Ooo...wat was dat burn thing...?? I cudnot undrstand d magic dat rk did wid madhus pendent...
Waiting fr d nxt update..
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Awesome and mysterious update Meghna.😃 Oh,Madhu didn't know about Rk but she trust him so much and love him too.😳 What was Rk doing with the necklace,some magic and the burning thing,what was that?😕 Intresting,Madhu got engaged and want to know about what did the strange man said. Waiting for next part.😛
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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