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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Aww...meg, beautiful update.

u know i love all ur three stories madly but at every mass update i do pick one among d 3 As my most fav one & This time i pick Dk⭐️i just loved it more. Mainly bcos d way u have written it.. Especially d part where rk saving madhu in d forest...😉
Urgh..i hate this prince rohan😡
yes he looks sly & cunning but it shocks me when a demon say all this lol😆Well, when a demon can kiss why not he be kind & Caring lol..
wait princess madhubala..why so hurry to know who is he? First fall in love then find who is he or else u will run screaming towards the hill...wait..is this how princess died 200yrs ago? By knowing that he is a demon & She killed herself & Went to heaven instead of going to hell with him lol...
okay, whatever it is i m enjoying d flash back & Soon i want my demon to kill that rohan lol...
thanks for d pm.
waiting for next update.



The best update award goes to...this story 😆 😃
Thanks sudha...glad you liked it
You are the only one out of us insane sisters that hates Rohan...🤣 RK can be sly and cunning...just wait and watch...see what he does next 😆
She jumped of a cliff...🤣 Nah...that's an easy escape 🤣
You will like the next few updates then...operation kill Rohan is underway 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Sorry double post.

i was in a hurry to grab my spot & That CB troubled me & I was not sure whether i resed or not so did it again.

okay post iz here so there is no harm in appreciating ur wonderful work.
awesome update.👏
so demon kissed but not deep just a gentle one lol..still i loved it.😳



I did the same in Shirya's SS 😆 Its been a while since I saw CB 🤣
Thanks again 😃 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33


"De...de...demon..."

"Demon."

</div>"Demon!"
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"You are a demon!"

Well we missed that reaction...🤣 I would say a normal person would react like that...🤣 But hey we are talking about a crazy bala here... Of course she isn't normal...😆

She found him attractive even after witnessing him killing a person and making his body disappear with help of the shadows that encircled him...🤣 Wow... She is a goner... She is attractive of the darkness... And Chotu why do I have this sense that not until I make her mine...means either marriage or...🤣


Also Rohan... What do you have against my Rohan...😆He is a great man... I know you are gonna kill him... I can read between the lines... You'll make him appear awful... And on the day of his marriage with Madhu or something RK will kill him... People will freak seeing RK kill a man that way. So they will either try to kill RK and Madhu will protect him...getting killed in the process...Or the kingdom Rohan came from will retaliate Rohan's deathby killing Madhu... Bringing us back to the present...


Either way I know my dear Rohan is getting killed...😭I hope you'll reincarnate him as well, like you did with Madhu... And he founds a way to kill that demon with no horns and black wings... As I said I imagined RK to be something like Maleficent...🤣 But naa... So far nothing like that... But I like how you portrayed his killing moves... Kill a person without any trace left behind whatsoever... Like that person never existed...With the exception for the people who still remembers them and Think he they gone missing...🤣


But now a question popped up in my head... How come RK knew that Madhu would reincarnate... He waited...300 years I Think...For her to reappear...Was there some prophecy or something like that, thatpredicted it would happen or was there a curse or protection spell of some sort... Since this is about a demon I assume there is some magic involved... Also did it involve Rohan as well? 😆

You know me...😆 Trying to find logic behind every nook and corner...🤣 And knowing my Rohan is getting killed in the past I want him alive in the present...🤣 Also where was RK during these 300 years? Was he hiding in the shadows like a coward for his Madhu to come back to Life...Or did he get punished by other demons (I assume there are others...There is no way he is the only one like that)...Did they isolate him for 300 years in some hell? Or did they pity him, cause they knew he was in his personal hell for losing her?😆Thus no punishment...😆


Well I'll stop now...Even though I have more in my mind to ask you... Oryou will be cursing me for asking you all of these questions only after 4 chapters...🤣I have so many more questions to ask... One involving Deepali...🤣


Well thanks for the intriguing killing chapter... I guess you know my favorite part...😆And thanks for the PM... It served it's purpose now...🤣

Last to comment...🤣



Of course she isn't normal! 🤣 She is the one and only Tallibala 🤣 Maybe I could include that reaction to the present day Madhu 😆 But then again she loves horror movies 🤣 She will think RK is joking 🤣 RK's definition of mine means the statement you were going to say 🤣 the ...statement 😆

I have nothing against Rohan...but he has to die 😆 No one can stop me from not doing so 😆 He killed Rishbala in Santa OS and Message Delivered...but now it is time for revenge 🤣 One of your predictions is correct...which one that is I won't tell you 😆 You are too smart Ni...🤣 It scares me sometimes 😆

Oh no Rohan is not being reincarnated...he isn't important for the rest of the story 😆 Unless you can tell me a way...I will consider 😆

No modifications on RK please...we've already discussed this 😆 Even if you mention it in all your comments...I won't change my mind 😆 Nice try 😆 At least I've created something that you like about him...the way he kills...literally crushing people's hearts 🤣

If Madhu dies...then she will be reincarnated...how RK knew...his demonic powers led him to her...he was searching for her 😆 he recognized her soul😆 As for where he was for 200 years...he was imprisoned in hell as punishment for loving a human 😆

Throw all the questions you got 🤣 I'll try to answer them 🤣 Well maybe not the Deepali one...😆

You liked the killing part...😆 Thanks so much Ni 🤗 Glas you liked it...and glad the pm was useful 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life



Of course she isn't normal! 🤣 She is the one and only Tallibala 🤣 Maybe I could include that reaction to the present day Madhu 😆 But then again she loves horror movies 🤣 She will think RK is joking 🤣 RK's definition of mine means the statement you were going to say 🤣 the ...statement 😆

I have nothing against Rohan...but he has to die 😆 No one can stop me from not doing so 😆 He killed Rishbala in Santa OS and Message Delivered...but now it is time for revenge 🤣 One of your predictions is correct...which one that is I won't tell you 😆 You are too smart Ni...🤣 It scares me sometimes 😆

Oh no Rohan is not being reincarnated...he isn't important for the rest of the story 😆 Unless you can tell me a way...I will consider 😆

No modifications on RK please...we've already discussed this 😆 Even if you mention it in all your comments...I won't change my mind 😆 Nice try 😆 At least I've created something that you like about him...the way he kills...literally crushing people's hearts 🤣

If Madhu dies...then she will be reincarnated...how RK knew...his demonic powers led him to her...he was searching for her 😆 he recognized her soul😆 As for where he was for 200 years...he was imprisoned in hell as punishment for loving a human 😆

Throw all the questions you got 🤣 I'll try to answer them 🤣 Well maybe not the Deepali one...😆

You liked the killing part...😆 Thanks so much Ni 🤗 Glas you liked it...and glad the pm was useful 😆


nice comment & Reply.
its always a treat to read ni predictions & funny comments.
i think d place where she mentioned abt rohans reincarnation is correct i think..right meg?

i m with u meg, just kill d rohan way too brutally for killing our rishbala in MD & SCIT🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life



Of course she isn't normal! 🤣 She is the one and only Tallibala 🤣 Maybe I could include that reaction to the present day Madhu 😆 But then again she loves horror movies 🤣 She will think RK is joking 🤣 RK's definition of mine means the statement you were going to say 🤣 the ...statement 😆

I have nothing against Rohan...but he has to die 😆 No one can stop me from not doing so 😆 He killed Rishbala in Santa OS and Message Delivered...but now it is time for revenge 🤣 One of your predictions is correct...which one that is I won't tell you 😆 You are too smart Ni...🤣 It scares me sometimes 😆

Oh no Rohan is not being reincarnated...he isn't important for the rest of the story 😆 Unless you can tell me a way...I will consider 😆

No modifications on RK please...we've already discussed this 😆 Even if you mention it in all your comments...I won't change my mind 😆 Nice try 😆 At least I've created something that you like about him...the way he kills...literally crushing people's hearts 🤣

If Madhu dies...then she will be reincarnated...how RK knew...his demonic powers led him to her...he was searching for her 😆 he recognized her soul😆 As for where he was for 200 years...he was imprisoned in hell as punishment for loving a human 😆

Throw all the questions you got 🤣 I'll try to answer them 🤣 Well maybe not the Deepali one...😆

You liked the killing part...😆 Thanks so much Ni 🤗 Glas you liked it...and glad the pm was useful 😆

Now that would be a treat to read...🤣 She acts like she is scared and then burst out in laughter saying that was one lame joke he pulled...She doesn't get scared but that sort of stuff...😆 So that one...🤣 Well now for the next question will he succeed or will he strike out? 🤣 Now I know you know that reference... I saw your Giants pic...😆
Hey...Didn't I already tell you it's already a given...You know I can read between the lines...At least give him a brutal Death... 😆 I guess that RK has more tricks in his sleeves other than that heart thing to kill people...Afterall he is a demon...😆 Now me being smart...That one I have Heard Before... But even you are too smart for your own good...🤣
Well either it could be a part of RK's punishment...Having him reincarnated without telling him...And Madhu will at first feel attracted to him but RK being RK he won't let him...Ending to a second killing of the same person...🤣 Or you can take one of the earlier suggestions...😆 But I like this one more...😆
Fine no modifications...But could he try Contact linses? 🤣 Cause I Think when they get back to present... if someone sees his red Eyes they will be scared...Unless they Think he already has Contact linses...😆 You made me like RK just because of it...🤣
There is no if she dies... We already know that will happen...🤣 What is the Point of the past if not to show how they met, she got killed and RK got punished...🤣 Okay his demonic Power led him to her... Now to the next question...Did he possibly use his Powers so she could get reincarnated?😆 Can he predict the future? Now if he can... That would be something to read... If he made her his... He could have seen the future...And knowing tha he can't stop it nor alter it...He took precautions by using his demonic Powers that she will get reborn 180 years after...So when he gets free after 200 years they can meet in their adult form... Now here could that Rohan part come in... Those other demons already knew of RK's plans and much like RK they can predict the future...Maybe because they are assembled in group so they individual Powers are stronger when they are together and they could predict what would happen...Also RK leaving them and falling in love with a human and exposing his Powers in public would be against some kind of code the demons have...So as a part of RK's punishment regardless of the prison part in hell...They use their Powers so Rohan gets reincarnated in the future with Madhu...Without telling RK...They could also add a small kink like how they changed some bits of his personality to resemble RK's so Madhu would fall in love with him...And thus making a human being with a human and not a demon...😆 Now what do you Think about that? 😆 Also some early mock...now now RK that was a Dirty trick... Using your Powers so you could have your fair maiden back in the future...Well your coven (have no other Word than that, also it sounds appropiate 😆) saw through your plans...Literally...🤣
Fine...Be ready...I have thrown some more and also given you some possibilites...😆 Or making you all the more confused...🤣
Deepali...Will she enter? If she does...will she be a shedemon...trying to seduce RK...🤣 Making him a deal that he can get out of that hell if she swears that he is hers... Also when he obviously denies that... Will she try to kill Madhu in the present?😆 Like an act of retaliation and jealousy...😆
Well of course I liked it...Dare there be someone who didn't like it...😆 Brutal but effective and no trace of killing whatsoever,,, A perfect killing...Now something popped up in my mind...What if he wasn't killed but RK send him to hell...🤣 Cause there were a shadow circling that guy...The shadow swallowed him and transported him to hell...🤣
Now I wonder how long will this one post be...🤣 My guess too long...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish


nice comment & Reply.
its always a treat to read ni predictions & funny comments.
i think d place where she mentioned abt rohans reincarnation is correct i think..right meg?

i m with u meg, just kill d rohan way too brutally for killing our rishbala in MD & SCIT🤢

Thanks Sudha!🤗 I agree she replied perfectly...😛
So do I...I also gave her some suggestions about how it could happen...😆
Haha...At least give one brutal Death..Not the one with him clenching his heart and he disappears...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
!!!🤣🤣
Once you reply on the above comment... The update will be on a new page...😆
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesummm ff
Loved ot
Add m to pm list to !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
And no I am not spamming your thread...😆

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