Fault in our stars - Rishbala TS (Next part updated on Pg 5) - Page 8

Originally posted by: parimaniya

very nice its heart wrenching...feel sad 4 madhu n what is mysterious reason behind rishabh's behavior...pls update sooon waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: Sharoan

End part of the story was so emotional..Nice update loved it..

Originally posted by: ainanwer

welcome back dear

Originally posted by: ..Annabelle..

It was really emotional & very well written :) Waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: silverfire

A very sad start. I hope it is different from the novel version. That book was too sad. RK has cancer. Hope he is not going to die like the book. Think he will come back n cure his daughter. Looking forward to the nxt update.

Originally posted by: shriyakadge

OMG ! I loved it !! It was so awesome ...n sad (N i love sad stories 😆 )

Katya ! Aww...Now that made me sad ! Because she is just so young 😭 I cant even imagine such a thing...secondly...i feel there is something wrong with Rishabh ..i dont knw whether it is cancer or something . But then these lines made me feel so :

The blood was flowing through Rishabh's face in the photograph

Infact, he wanted to go away from her. He had a reason to do so. It may be unfair but it was a painful mysterious reason he wanted to hide from her. The busy working schedule was some sort of a blessing for him to stay away from her

BUt whatever it is , he shouldnt leave her away like that. I mean...i understand that there is a reason which he feels that if he would reveal it, then MAdhu would be hurt. But even after leaving her, she would be hurt right? So what is the bloody use ? 😆

Anyways, let me not make assumptions..coz they always end up wrong 🤣 BUt i would make a final guess 😆 I feel that the camp in which katya goes to, Rishabh would be there as well..like a doc or someone. I just think so..haha. Maybe it is possible maybe not 🤣

N ..i forgot to tell u ..the first line stole my heart ❤️ The diart thingy! I just loved it! U seriously write awesome Vinu di 👍🏼

N finally, i wanted to be 1st to comment :( But then u posted it yourself :( Anyways thts ok. Haha. I just hope u give the next part to me for posting..haha. So tht i can quickly res 🤣 Wait...i dont knw whether u r gonna read all the comments or not 😆 I guess u will be busy studying..lmao . But thts not a problem..i will tell u my reviews ther 😆 Now, off to study 😆

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

I like your writing. So happy to see a new story.

It was a nice start. The compulsions of profession resulting in drifting apart. Being doctor its expected that Madhu should have understood her husband and reacted more maturely.

It seems Rishabh is suffering from serious illness most probably cancer and so he drifted apart.

Feel he would come back most probably to save his daughter as a doctor.

Waiting for the second part.

Originally posted by: lathaprasad

superb awsome update

Originally posted by: Desire6

Hey Vinu...welcome back dear..
was missing u...
nd bang on updt...
it was way too emotional...
cant wait for next part...
...waiting
waiting

all d best for ur forthcoming xams dear

Originally posted by: ankitashaw1996

love it dear plzz continu sooon n pm me for sure