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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sudha, when would I dismiss a story that surely would give me a good laugh?😆
As for the prologue. 🤣
Don't get me wrong. Madhu dying is sad. But RK's reaction.🤣 She is dead, no she is alive, she is dead, she is alive, how can she be, she isn't my love. I should kill myself, but I can't she said she will come back for me.🤣 Logic Went down the drain in the prologue, and I'm loving it.🤣 Makes me laugh all the more.😆 I use logic all the time, and I will not go away from this story.😆
I guess Madhu's promise means she will return as a ghost and haunt RK.😆 Giving him goose bumps.🤣
I'm waiting for the first chapter.
Thanks for the prologue and for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Cnt sn n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I posted my comment there... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new update. .
awesome start! !! Pls continue soon. Pls pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations on your new SS :) Interesting prologue! Please continue soon :) Waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue dear...continue soon...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

Goose bumps!!! Yes... Goose Bumps!!! I got goose bumps... Along with tears in my eyes and ache im stomach... 🤣 It was a killer prologue Sudhu!!! So killer that it almost killed me... In laughter! 🤣 Sorry Sudhu but I was trying hard to deliberately haunt myself at every single line... She is dead... OMG... Kavya, darr Kavya darrr... 🤣

OK! So for me... It was one super Pagal prologue in two parts... 😆
First part... Sabse pehle to my Nation wants to know, why was she running like a Pagal on the road??? 🤣 Akal Ghaas khaane gayi Thi kya??? 🤣 Aur Wo deewaana Patidev smile kar raha Tha!! Like seriously??? Roka kyo nahi usse, nalayak!! Aisa bhi kaha kho Gaya Tha re... "... Else I will kill you..." RK Bhiyaaa... Jab maarna he Tha to Tu he maar deta... Ab Kisi aur ko credit Dena padega yaar... 🤣 "I will come back!" Super funny line of the entire prologue!!! 🤣 I just landed on the bed, laughing aloud! 🤣
Second Part... Pagalplan ka Doosra version! 🤣 Haan bhai Haan... Mar gayi woo... Dead body dekh ke pata nahi chala kya pagal! 🤣 But wait... Body to udd gayi Thi na... Gone with the wind! 🤣 Then it's OK... Cry baby cry! So, he saw someone like his Biwi... Bur he wants to die... Mar ja yaar mar ja... Kahaani khatam... Paisa Hajam! 🤣 Now, he is going to find his Biwi and I am going to have a roller coaster ride... 🤣 Bring it on Sudha...


^My thoughts written in detail! 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue Sudha 😆
I definitely got goose bumps 😆
So Madhu does right at the beginning and RK wants her back
Interesting...will Madhu become a ghost now

She should haunt RK... 😆
Continue soon and make it awesome...the suspense is great 😆

Kavya di already covered what I wanted to say 😆
Congrats sudha 🤗 🥳
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
😡Cheater khor Piyu! Chura kiya hai tune comment ko... Aage se nahi churana sanam... 🤣
Thanks Meghu! I guess I have spoke out million hearts... 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

😡Cheater khor Piyu! Chura kiya hai tune comment ko... Aage se nahi churana sanam... 🤣

Thanks Meghu! I guess I have spoke out million hearts... 🤣

Yes you did.😆

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