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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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New plot to start story👏
btw r u going to make madhu ghost?
m eager to read more plz do pm me

Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

nice start n i want pm n like button not working sorry

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Resss

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Finally i managed to get 4th place, happy that am atleast in first page.

Ok first tel me this, wil this be lil horror, or too much of Horror, because am scared to read ghost stories, if yes i wil try to read at day time, and wil avoid reading at night time?

Iread kavya's story without asking this question and she scared the hell within me. Ok coming to the story, so madhu is dead and whise that she, she came as ghost thro someone else, and whose that. After reading asha comment even i had this doubt, was it an accident or a planned murder, whatever it is, i guess u r going to kill rk at the end, am i right.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

frankly..I dont find logic in horrors...I am a gr8 fan of such stories...so..I am in..

Guess..Madhu will come back for RK...how they unite is the story...or anything...😆😆😆

or..

is this a murder???? Madhu and RK will take revenge...

hahaha...my mind is not working...need to head back..loads of work...🤢🤢🤢.

DO update and PM me...congos for the new SS👏

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats for the new story👏
Nice prologue Sudha! continue soon...
waiting for the update! thanks for pm me!

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Goose bumps!!! Yes... Goose Bumps!!! I got goose bumps... Along with tears in my eyes and ache im stomach... 🤣 It was a killer prologue Sudhu!!! So killer that it almost killed me... In laughter! 🤣 Sorry Sudhu but I was trying hard to deliberately haunt myself at every single line... She is dead... OMG... Kavya, darr Kavya darrr... 🤣

OK! So for me... It was one super Pagal prologue in two parts... 😆

First part... Sabse pehle to my Nation wants to know, why was she running like a Pagal on the road??? 🤣 Akal Ghaas khaane gayi Thi kya??? 🤣 Aur Wo deewaana Patidev smile kar raha Tha!! Like seriously??? Roka kyo nahi usse, nalayak!! Aisa bhi kaha kho Gaya Tha re... "... Else I will kill you..." RK Bhiyaaa... Jab maarna he Tha to Tu he maar deta... Ab Kisi aur ko credit Dena padega yaar... 🤣 "I will come back!" Super funny line of the entire prologue!!! 🤣 I just landed on the bed, laughing aloud! 🤣

Second Part... Pagalplan ka Doosra version! 🤣 Haan bhai Haan... Mar gayi woo... Dead body dekh ke pata nahi chala kya pagal! 🤣 But wait... Body to udd gayi Thi na... Gone with the wind! 🤣 Then it's OK... Cry baby cry! So, he saw someone like his Biwi... Bur he wants to die... Mar ja yaar mar ja... Kahaani khatam... Paisa Hajam! 🤣 Now, he is going to find his Biwi and I am going to have a roller coaster ride... 🤣 Bring it on Sudha...

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