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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
pretty long update.šŸ‘ loved it ā¤ļø
I didnt like rk bcz he ditched his wife . Even after getting married to her he kept his illegal relation wid his girlfriend n used to b wid her till late night s/early morning n hw badly madhu was hurt.
madhu is really an angel to tolerate all this .
I liked rishika n parents . priya ditched rk n now he wud realise wat he did wsid madhu.
cont soon dearšŸ‘šŸ¼ but i really wanna see rk hurt/heartbroken bcz of madhu or someone who admires/loves madhu.šŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Nice character sketch and part 1, waiting eagerly for second part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
very nice story pls continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
bhool jana maat
plz update soon
lmao
m after u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
"Love"
This part is dedicated to Shurva aka nosieygirl
Part-2
Rishika ...madhubala ...listen ...shouted rohan from box office ticket counter... Madhu I think some one is calling us ...yeah even I think some one is calling us ...and they turned to rohan's direction and saw rohan waving to them and they did the same and RK looked towards them fully confused...who is he ??? Asked RK to rishi n madhu ...our friend replied madhu ... Replied madhu making face ...rohan came near them n hugged Rishika RK smilied seeing smiled seeing there friendly hug but his smiled dropped when rohan hugged madhu and madhu hugged him back tightly he wondered what is happening ...what u doing here asked madhu to rohan ...what r u doing here can u plz tell me ??? Asked rohan same question ..I m here for movie replied madhu ...even I ...okkk but why alone asked rishi getting curious I thought you and madhubala is coming alone so thought to accompany to two hot ladies ...said rohan giving sexy smirk to Rishika ...ohhh for your Badluck my Bhai is accompanying us said Rishika showing her hand to RK ...RK smiled seeing him n he replied back with smile ...did you guys buy the tickets ...asked rohan ...no I was just going for that only replied RK ...ohh okk do one thing you guys go inside I will go n buy for all of us okk ...said rohan n leaved frm there ...,,,this guy is full stupid rishi ...said madhu ...yeAh stupid replies Rishika making face ...till the time rohan was back with the tickets but was wondering something looking him confused madhu asked him what's wrong ROHAN ... Madhubala I got tickets but 2in different rows and 2 in another row ...ohhh that's not a big deal said Rishika cuasually ...but I m gona seat with you Rishika Kundra ...said rohan ..who's dying here to seat with you rohan kapoor ...said Rishika greeting her teeth ...,guys then how you will seat ..,Asked madhu ..good question madhubala ...said rohan you are going to seat with me miss madhubala malik and Rishika stupid you go and seat with your Bhai ...said rohan giving heart attack to RK ...excuse me she is mrs.madhubala Rishab Kundra not malik ..,RK said in warning tone to rohan...ohhh come on RK she is mrs.kundra for only years after then ...,he stopped midway watching RK furiously glaring at him ...I m sorry ..,said rohan ...,you better be...said RK ...chalu now let's go Inside otherwise I will miss my Sallu's entry ...said madhu and hold rohan's hand n drag him inside the theatre and Rishika did the same ...rohan and madhu was sitting in last 3rd row and RK and rishi in last row ...RK can easily Watch each and every actions of madhu n rohan ...he was damn jealous seeing there closeness to each other but didn't speak a word as it may creat issue in public place... It was almost 10 when movie was finished all four of them walked out of theatre happily chit chatting with each other but RK and rohan were glaring each other ...for the rescue rishi bid good bye to rohan n he did the same n went near madhu n hugged her she responded same to him and seeing this RK tighten his fist ... while backing off the hug rohan said ,..you made my day madhubala ...madhu blushed and give him a smile n bid good bye to him.
Drive to home was silent even dinner was silent as rishi n madhu was tired and RK was thinking what kind of relation rohan n madhu r sharing that even she told him abt 1year contract mArraige ...wondering this after dinner he silently went to his room..madhu notices RK lost in thought n decide to talk to him in room.
In there room
Madhu :- hiii RK ...
RK:- hey, come sit (he gave her sitting place on couch)
Madhu:- RK, what r u thinking ??? You are lost since evening what happen ? Are u missing Priya or what ???
RK:- shut up Madhu don't take her name in front of me did u get it ... She has no place in my life only one girl has place in my life that is you got it.(madhu was helll shocked with his declaration)
RK :- I m sorry I was ...
Madhu ;- it's okk RK , I understand and now tell me what is bothering you ????
RK:- nothing
Madhu :- it's abt rohan ???( he didn't replied)
Madhu :- RK I m really sorry , he is little immature...
RK:-how he knows abt our one year mArraige contract ???
Madhu :- wo RK he is my very good friend and I share each and everything to him ..like what I do , what I m going to do and what is happening in my life each everything, RK I know it's only 2 months since I join my new college but the day I entered the clg he was my support he guided me and help me in every possible way , I found very good friend in him n I started sharing each and every thing to him ...
RK:- so still I haven't won ur trust ????asked RK hurted
Madhu:-RK it's nothing like that ,it's just that I m very comfortable with him I don't know why...
RK:- hmmm
Madhu:- RK u felt bad then I m
Really really sorry yaar
RK:- it's okk madhu , now leave this topic here only and smile
Madhu ;- RK really u r not angry with me na
RK:- not at alll
(Madhu excitedly jumped n hugged him)
Rk:- cool madhu I m not angry with u , you haven't won World Cup
(Laughingly to madhu )
Madhu :- hahaga very funny RK
RK:- chalo now let's go to sleep
Madhu, I m having very imp meeting tommrow and u have ur clg right so come let's go to sleep ...
After 1 week
RK comes back to home full tired and saw madhu and Rishika chatting with there friends happily
RK wave his hand to madhu n Rishika and both wave there hands happily to him
Rishika :- Bhai come meet our friends...
Rishi :- this is Trishna mine best friend and this is dipali she is in madhu's class our very good friend
(RK shakes his hand with them )
Dips:- rishi your Bhai right and madhu's ??
Both rishi and madhu were hesitant to reply and seeing them like that RK speak up for them
RK:- hubby
Trish :- lucky one madhu , RK you are really very handsome man ... Said Trishna flirtingly
Madhu:- stop it Trishna , stop drooling over my hubby now ..said madhu angryly
Trish:- sorry madhu , I was just pulling ur leg
Rishi :- haha very funny
RK :- you guys carry on I m having one presentation to compelet ... Nice to meet you ladies ... He gave them bright smile and went to his room
RK's prov :- today she was hestiant to introduce me to her friends but I handle all the siuatiaon but I loved her jealous nature , wow how she scolded Trishna for complimenting me ohhh god I m in love with her ... Wait but if she is angry only with flirting then I was staying with Priya how she had controlled herself ohhh god RK you do such stupid mistakes ...god has blessed you with such beautiful and caring wife ...I have to make up for my sin ...ohh god plz give me that much courage to make up for my mistakes plz god ... (He prayed to god and returned back to work what he was doing )
( end of RK's prov)
Next day
RK came home totally tired and frustrated ...madhu saw him and went to there room making excuse of giving tea to RK
Madhu:- RK what happen , looking tired ??
RK:- madhu I have to go New York tommrow , u remember I was working on one project I told you that was very important for our company for that project I have to go New York for 15 days
Madhu:- what ???
RK:- yeah madhu
Madhu :- can't you send anyone else
RK:- no madhu it's very imp deal it's very important for me to be there
Madhu:- okkk
RK:- you r sad
Madhu:- yes , I m
RK-oh madhu
Madhu:- I m gonna miss like hell RK , now I m habbited of you
RK:- even mee madhu , I m gona miss you badly
Madhu :- even I , she hugged him n cried her heart out for him
RK was happy that his madhu is going to miss him and she is crying becoz he is going away frm her ...
Next morning RK left for New York and at that time also madhu cried a little .
At night
Madhu's calling started ringing n was flashing RK's name
Madhu:- heya
RK :- hiii , what's up???
Madhu:- missing you RK
RK:- even I m , u had ur dinner or not ???
Madhu :- yeah I had n u
RK- yup I had , I m so tired madhu but not sleepy
Madhu :- why
RK :- you are not around me na that's why I m habbited of it now
(Madhu's heart skip a beat hearing that)
Madhu :- same is with me RK
They chit chatted for hour and go to sleep there cells in there hand
(This was there routine for those days and after that the day came when RK was at home but his madhu was nowhere to be seen , it was almost 3 hrs now but still madhu was no where to be found, it was engouh now RK decides to ask Rishika abt madhu becoz it was almost 8:00pmshe never goes out after 7 and suddenly she was not at home )
RK :- rishi where's madhu???
Rishi:- madhu , she is at rohan's place na Bhai she didn't inform you abt it ???
RK:- nooo ...he replied n went out without hearing what rishi wanted to say
(RK tried calling madhu but her cell was switch off , whole night RK can't sleep wondering what madhu and rohan would be doing at this hours of nite )
In morning at 10 RK opened his eyes and found madhu making tea for him ,he was going to washroom when madhu hugged him
Madhu:- I missed you RK , I thought you would be coming today as your 15 days are finishing today
RK:- hmmm ( he didn't gave any response to her and left frm there )
( madhu felt really bad but didn't take on mind knowing well his mood swings )
At dinning table
(Radha n mohan are out of station )
Rishi :- Bhai come fast , Chalo have ur breakfast fast ...
RK:- yeah (still angrly )
Madhu served food to RK n was packing her bags when they heard horning from outside
Rishi:- ohhh god this rohan na stupid why he is horning so much
Madhu :- he is mad rishi you know na
Rishi :- you plz go fast that kapoor is going to turn me deaf seriously
Madhu :- hehehe yeah bye rishi meet you in clg ... Bye RK
Rishi:- bye bye
RK didn't replied n tightens his fist he can't take sight of his madhu going to other man then him
Rishi :- madhu , who's your partne, Bhi or what ???
Madhu :- it's rohan he already asked me ... Yours??
Rishi :- Mukund ...
Madhu :- good one ..,,bye
Rishi :- bye
( RK stood up without eating his breakfast , took his coat and went to office angrly )
Rishi watched RK in shocked and spoke jealous Bhai is looking very cute
In evening
RK came home and saw madhu n rishi full ready for party
Rishi:- Bhai howz I m looking ???
RK :- beautifull
Madhu :- and me ????
(RK turned to madhu's direction to see her all ready in black net saare looking like an angle )
RK was not getting word but heard manly sound from behind
Rohan :- looking like an princess madhubala
Madhu blushed on his lines n he came forward n kissed on madhu's hand ...seeing this RK just tightens his fist n hit on sofa hardly no one notices this accept Rishika but she spoke you deserves this bro
Rohan :- shall we go now madubala
Madhu:- yeah , rishi come on
Rishi :- my partner
Rohan waiting outside In car
Rishi :/ ohh okk Chalo then we will be late
Rishi :- bye Bhai
Rohan :- bye RK
Madhu :- bye RK
RK:- bye after they all gone he tightens his fist and hit on flower pot badly that his Hand was bleeding badly
( patil came running hearing noises frm drawing room n bandaged RK hand , after that RK went to his room without saying a word )
In party
Rohan :- madhu Kya hua ???
Madhu :- rohan RK is not talking to me properly ??
Rohan :- why ??
Madhu ;- I don't know
Rohan :- ohh kkk chal abhi mood kharab mat kar , kal Subha me uth ke pahale you go and talk to ur RK first n clearing everything okk
Madhu :- hmmm
Rohan :- so can we go and dance now
Madhu :- yeah
(Here RK gulped down 2 bottles of whisky thinking of madhu with rohan was killing him frm inside )
Near 1 madhu and rishi came back home frm party , Rishika directly went to her room as she was very tired and madhu inquired abt RK and found out he didn't had his dinner n went directly to there room n there she found him drinking.
Madhu :- RK , what's wrong with you , why you started drinking again??
RK didn't replied to her n continue drinking
Madhu :- RK answer me , why r u drinking ???
Still he didn't reply
Madhu :- RK what is wrong with plz tell me ???
RK :- what is wrong with me , what is wrong with you madhubala ??? This is the wAy you treat your hausband??
Madhu :- RK what happen ??
RK:- you enjoyed with your bestest friend na
Madhu :- RK
RK:- why this drama now ?? I know you moved on madhubala
Madhu ;- RK what are you talking abt ???
RK :- mee , madhu I know I m
Biggest kamina but still I love you madhu I love you , I can't see you with any one if he is your friend or something still I can't see you with that bloody rohan
Madhu:- r u jealous RK
RK :- yes I m jealous madhubala , how I can't be jealous then my wife shared all her secrets with that rohan not me , she goes to party with that rohan not me , she watches movie taking that rohan's hand in hers not mine , you stay whole nite at his place but not bothered to inform me once how come I can't be jealous ha ...,he pindded her to nearby wall
Madhu;- RK it's nothing like this
RK :- whatever it would be let me clear you one thing that you was mine , and you will be mine got it ...said RK warningly
Madhu :- RK leave me you r hurting me
RK:- I m hurting you , you are hurting me damn it ... ...
It's the end of part -2 plz ignor mistakes n do like and comments
Hope you all will liked it especially Shurva this part is dedicated to you baby
Plz plz plz like and comment guys it will take one 2-3 mins to like m commet it means a lot to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
superb update dear!
jealousy Rk is always a treat to read!!šŸ˜‰
loved Rk a lot in this update!!
Gah..rohan u r irritating man!! can't u allow madhu to sit with her hubby!! even madhu is doing mistake yaar!! she shld give priority to Rk after all he is her pati parmeshwar LOLšŸ˜†
waiting for next update dear!!
thanks for the pm but i resed before it šŸ˜†
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
superb part so rk is jealous
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
SUPER UPDATE
O BOY RK IS JEALOUS šŸ˜† GETTING THE SAME TASTY RK 😈
HOW COME THAT STUPID ROHAN KISS MADHU'S HAND YUCK 🤢

I REALLY DID NOT LIKE ROHAN AND MADHU WHY SHE SHARE ALL HER PERSONAL THINKS TO HIM
YA U CAN SHARE WITH FRIENDS BUT EVERYTHING HAS LIMIT

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE COME ON GIVE FAST
AND WHAT ABOUT UR OTHER STORY TOO LONG GIVE THE UPDATE YAAR😊
Edited by bevi-najim - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
aww amazing update
loved the possessive n obessive side of rk
but i really didnt liked that madhu shared their private thing with rohan
no mater how they were but it was something too personal n i hated rohan like annything
wat was the need for madhu to blush on his remarks wen she loves rk
no girl wld blush to other mans comment
infront of her hubby atleast
loved rks last outburst
cont.soon
Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Ahaan so rk is jealous good as rishi said he deserves it !!! Very superb update !!full of j reasons !! I like this rohan only if he is truly a frnd of madhu !!dont make him a villian let him be good frnd only !!curious to know watwill happen next !!thanks for the pm

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