The Vengeance Lover.......Updated Part 27 @page 118

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

if possible please pm me

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Interesting but y there is not mb's character sketch

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silent.desire

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Liked the title. Nice one keep it up. Want to know where is Madhu and is the one who betrayed him is Madhu or some other girl.

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LazyJane

@LazyJane

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

A very interesting introduction. I am looking forward to ur updates.

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Neera Ahamed

@drashtira

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

hi vandy,happy to seeu as a writer. 🤗
interesting prologue.
continue soon.pls bring
madhus character as bold,
bubbly and intelligent..
dis is first time I am reading
a ongoing story from
prologue itself.pls pm me
whenever u update.

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shasha

@shasha1989

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

interesting story dear..continue soon & do pm me when you update

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome prologue! Nice Banner & character sketch!
Interesting revenge story! Poor & innocent RK accepted jail for his love! Who was the girl betrayed RK?
waiting for the update! please pm me!

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awesome, intruinging start Vandy. 👏👏 I am glad you took this step, becoming a writer.

And thanks to Sweta for helping and pushing you to write this story.

May I know what movie inspired you to write this story.😳

Oh by the way I love Rasha's ans Deepti's comments and I completely agree with them. 😆

And I am sure I would do the same with Amna's comment.😆

I don't know if you will send PMs when you update this story. But if you do, please add me in the list.😳

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Superb start...

waiting for the next parts..

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ferii

@ferii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ni33
Awesome, intruinging start Vandy. 👏👏I am glad you took this step, becoming a writer.
And thanks to Sweta for helping and pushing you to write this story.

May I know what movie inspired you to write this story.😳

Oh by the way I love Rasha's ansDeepti's comments and I completely agree with them. 😆

And I am sure I would do the same with Amna's comment.😆

I don't know if you will send PMs when you update this story. But if you do, please add me in the list.😳

HEy our blockbuster movie is something which we made after our long chat that's it 😉 😆 😆

Edited by ferii - 10 years ago