The Vengeance Lover.......Updated Part 27 @page 118 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Ni33

Awesome, intruinging start Vandy. 👏👏I am glad you took this step, becoming a writer.

And thanks to Sweta for helping and pushing you to write this story.

May I know what movie inspired you to write this story.😳

Oh by the way I love Rasha's ansDeepti's comments and I completely agree with them. 😆

And I am sure I would do the same with Amna's comment.😆

I don't know if you will send PMs when you update this story. But if you do, please add me in the list.😳

Originally posted by: ferii

VAn congrats for u r first story in MB forum 😛 🤗 🤗 ...I hope its just beginning and to get more and more stories from u family 😛 😛 😉 ...
Yipppiiieee i and hin read u r prologue three times ...congrats to us 😉 😛 😆
HEy van love u family 🤗 ...yaah our blockbuster movie ki zindhabad 😛

Originally posted by: abba12

first congo shongo yaar 🤗 ... best of luck haan 😉,,,

now after formalities 😆 u know na we r waiting for update 😆... first u choose such concept then making us wait isn't fair 😆

and u dedicated this to us again 😆 and THE MOVIE 🤣 ... yes our movie is the best ..unbeatable 😆😛,,, after all gr8 minds are used 😆...

wese I m waiting for my BEST FRNDS 😆😉

Originally posted by: RM14

Friend.🤗 Hey Vandy dear congratz to you n Sweta fr ur first story!🥳You r a writer now.👏So hpy fr you.😃 Awesome start of the story.Loved it.So RK is a doctor n got cheatd in life.I like Rk's char. Now he wants to take revenge.I m curious that who's the girl behind this?😲Is she Madhu or some othr girl.Well i wish Madhu's char.will be independent,modern,bubbly n intelligent.😳Waiting fr ur next update.😛

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

woww.. a revenge story..i am in...Do PM me...

ALl the best sweety 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: aaliya14

Interesting prologue and i like stories in which RK has a dark character so yay! continue soon

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

Is the lover Madhu?
Ooo RK was in jail...
Dr.RK ahannn M in ur story
Do cont and plz pm me

Originally posted by: rima4ever

if possible please pm me

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Interesting but y there is not mb's character sketch

Originally posted by: silent.desire

Liked the title. Nice one keep it up. Want to know where is Madhu and is the one who betrayed him is Madhu or some other girl.