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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update di!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey everyone,
Sorry for the delay, but this time curse my net for ditching me for past 3 days, without any delay here goes the update. I have read all ur comments and a big thanks for it.

Thanks for all those who liked and commented on the previous update


And before that would love to dedicate it to suru (My_VivJaan) for her promotion, i know its quiet late, but am sorry again.

Part 13

RK's POV

I smiled remembering the bonding between these sisters, even if i had a sister or brother, i would not have been like these girls, i kicked my bike to start, but it didn't. I moved a little and thought to start again, as i don't want their parents to get up with the sound, i started recalling all the day's event especially the things happened just before, i don't know why always mb plague my mind and i think about her too, but not in the way as i do for my madhuri, i smiled seeing her care for me, she just know me as her sister's boyfriend, but the fear in her eyes and her haste to make sure whether am alright, *sigh*, and the way she rushed to me... wait.. what did she call me.. Rishu... is that what she called or am i hallucinating. No am sure, she did,i ran back to her house leaving my bike back at the same place and kept calling on madhuri mobile.

She attended the call and i asked her to open the door and she was quiet confused, why won't she? she asked me something, but i didn't paid any heed to it except for the word Rishu, so she said it once again, so, am not hallucinating, she paused a little noticing my glare, she stepped back, and i got sure, i asked her What did she call me? She went pale, she looked everywhere but not on my face, she interlocked her fingers, there was a trace of tears in her eyes, she did all sort of work, all her parts in the body was working, except for her mouth, bloody dammit, why is she not speaking now?"

I stepped forward and asked her "Answer me Madhubala, or should i call u Madhu" i said with full anger, she lowered her face, and I continued "so, its you, right?" She remained silent, "What the hell was that, u know what u did to me? i just thought i was speaking to my madhuri and here u dare to trick me" she stood silent for some time, then said "Sorry RK, i .. i just tried to play a prank". I was taken a back, what a kind of prank it is, and what a kind of girl she is, i had given such a respect to her, much more than madhuri as i know madhuri is a kind of girl who wil take everything for granted and play pranks, but as far as i have heard mb was not that kind of girl, but hearing it from her, i was shocked, i felt disgusted to stand next to her. I left the place immediately, i decided to move away from this girl.

MB's pov

I started to shed down my tears, what else could I possibly do? His words hit me again, so his words, his love everything i felt when talking to him was never meant for me, he thought me to be madhuri, and showered me with his love, but in real, i had enjoyed that was meant for my sister, i felt like am betraying my madhuri, how could i do this to her, i should have not done this, but there is no use in thinking about it, I know i fell very low in his eyes, let it be, its for everyone's good, now i need to make sure this does not affect madhuri.I took my side of the bed.

Sleep was far from my eyes, i recalled everything from his anger to his shout, wait... what if he thinks madhuri has a part in this prank, and what if he start to hate her too, no.. no.. i can't let this happen, i need to clear it out first.


She forced her eyes to shut down to get some sleep, but she couldn't, she opened her eyes to find madhuri sleeping with a pleasant smile, for a min she felt a prick in her heart, "why was she always the unlucky one, everyone loves madhuri as she is, but whats mistake here, and why am being punished all the time."

Then her thought drift to the side thinking what will happen if madhuri come to know what has happened between her and Rishab, even if she didn't tel, RK wil tel her the truth, so she need to tel before him, but before everything, she need to clear things with RK. She took her mobile and came online just to wait for some time, as she wanted to talk to RK first. Luckily she found RK online in facebook,and thankfully he had not yet unfriended her, so she just initiated the convo

MB : RK, one min pls

There was no reply for few mins, but she saw he is still online

MB : RK, pls listen

RK : What more u have done, i don't want to hear anything from u.

MB : I know, what i did was a big mistake

RK : Atleast u realised whats ur mistake is, thats great, for god sake, never ever come in front of me or utter a word.

MB : Sure RK, but pls let me talk this time alone

RK : Do u understand or not, am not interested to hear anything from u.

MB : If its about madhuri

RK : Pleassee, don't bring her in, u never deserve to be her sister, i accept she also does pranks, but she had never hurt anyone feelings, like u.

MB : No i was just saying that she doesn't know anything about this.

RK : And i know that very well, her love is evident in her eyes, and she wil never do anything that hurt me.

MB :Even i was abt to tel u the same

RK : Thanks for ur bloody information, and never show ur face to me in ur life-time.

And he went offline

Where mb commented saying " Sure RK, wil do that, take care of urself and my madhuri, bye"

And her tears find its way out, her heart shouted "Is that not evident in my eyes Rishu, i have made my move, now i have no way of turning back, than to show me bad in ur eyes" and quit the app and came out.


I hope, u all are okay with the length of the update, next update surely in next week, and before that wil update kiss second part before Tuesday evening. Now time for ur likes and comments

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Uma di
Now RK is being all mad like and not talking to MB...what will happen next?
This confusion between the sisters has changed a lot

I hope Madhuri finds out about this and everything gets cleared between the threesome
Who will RK choose? We'll have to wait and see...that poor soul got so confused 🤣 imagine if they were triplets...it all goes downhill from here 🤣

Can't wait for the next update di...continue soon
I want to get first next time 🤣
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
RK knows that he is speaking to MB
but he loves madhuri
the update is little emotional
how can he decide that she is playing prank
cant he see the love in her eyes
hope he realise his mistake
thanks for the pm
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsumm update di...😊 Seriously loved it...!!
It was such an emotional part...I felt bad for Madhubala...awww😭😭
I thought may be she will tell the truth..but she said it to be a prank...Rk hates her now...huh...
After RK and MB's convo...i don't know whats gonna happen now...What MB is upto...??
Plz Plz update soon...eagerly waiting for next part..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rk will marry madhuri i think really felling sad for madhu n rk is blind
Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow it was awesome do update it soon 😳
thanks for pm 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar i feel very sorry for her !!her words is that evident from my eyes was too much hurting !! I hope madhuri comes to know abt this and all is sloved between them ! Superb emotional update !!thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Rk's pov!!!
Loved his pov ...
So sad of mb...
Tfs for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome and emotional update...feeling bad for madhu...

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