RishBala MiniFF: Running Away, Or Running Into? #2 | pt33pg136 - Page 11

Awesome update Shivu.

You know I really enjoy reading this story.😳 And of course give my analyses.😆 Which I know can be sometimes a little to much.😆 Like this one.😆 Sorry in advance. But what can I do when you are such a good writer.😳

I don't know if you remember, but I gave RK a nickname in the last update of yours. Aladdin. Because he likes to fly away from his problems using a magic carpet. But this time he used his magical jet.😆 Well I don't think I can call RK Aladdin after this update. Cause this was one emotional update. And it showed RK's past. He has a right to be Aladdin as much as he wants, but I won't call him that anymore. He doesn't deserve that. He deserves to be called something greater, just because he is nothing less than a great and an exceptionell man. I admit I have a problem to come up with a name right now. But hopefully it will come to me. And don't worry you will be the first one to know what that name will be. 😉

You showed RK POV really good. Even when his lawyer insisted on using Madhu as a witness, he protected her, he didn't want her to be in a center of it all. Everyone would start question her character, because she would have to reveal the two days when she ran away from her own wedding. And the prosecution would try to ruin her reputation and that would leave another heartbroken family. They would even call that slimeball, who called himself RK's best friend as a witness and that would be a disaster. But most importantly this update shows how much RK really cared, maybe even loved Madhu even back then, even in that situation. He was willing to go to prison just to protect her, just so others won't disgrace her.

Even I would feel like RK, if I was in his position. How can his so called best friend, someone you grew up with, someone who you went to school with and someone your father helped educate do something like that. And just respond with an evil smirk. Well I hope he got what he deserved when RK was released from prison. And I really hope those policeofficers lost their job for beating up a wrongly accussed man.

Again I need to compliment how you wrote RK's POV. Through dreams, rather in fact nightmares. But it was exceptionell. Funny thing. His nightmares stopped when he met Madhu.😆 Now when he is away from her, they started all over again. Our poor RK. Madhu will take a good care of you, don't you worry. She will make sure all your problems and fears will fly away. Well maybe not fears, you will always have a fear of not being able to protect her. But other than that, she will grant you three wishes. 🤣 Sorry, back at Aladdin again. RK, just make sure you come home real soon and contact her, or she will get worried. Or even worse, he won't be able to contact her and he will get worried.

I just got an epiphany.😲 Okay nothing like when Isaac Newton got an apple on his head, and nothing as intelligent like that, but still. 😆 And no, I didn't get an apple on my head like him thus getting this epiphany. 😆 Okay, anyway this will happen. He won't be able to contact Madhu and will get to know through the news about some attack on the commencial she was covering. What if he sees her body on a stretcher and an ambulance driving off?😲 And he will hurry back to Australia, Brisbane, to see how she is. He will probably fire Steven, cause he failed to protect his Biwi. But I think along with that our Right Kameena personality will show and he will hit black and blue for failing the most important task given to him.😆 To protect Madhu. Maybe this is really what is going to happen. Maybe this is why you left that part open like that. I bet it's that dumba** that is her so called intern that will get her into trouble. Never liked him. Something is definetely fishy about him. I think he works for Rihan. You still haven't closed the Rihan chapter, so until you do I will still assume that it is he who is behind all of this.😆

Actually I have some more stuff to analyse, but I think that this would be a bit too much to read then. So I will stop right here. Like it isn't too much already. 😆 I hope you don't get that big of a shock seeing this.😆 Please do reply if you do.😆 Oh, by the way. I am really, really, really happy that you have so many likes and comments at your story. It just shows how great this story is and how great author you are.👏

I hope that even more people will come and read this story and give you their likes and comments. I really do.😳 This is actually one of my favorites. Yes it is, if you are, don't be shocked. 😆 You can see it by the number of analyses I have writen on this story.😆 Come on think of it, this might be my longest comment and analyses yet. And that too without that much of a funfactor. Now there I myself am shocked.😲😆 Okay, stopping right there or it will be too, too, too long. 😆 And no I don't mean choo choo train. 🤣 🤣

finally RK flash back

he suffered a lot

hopes he moves on for his madhu

Thank u so much