Oh my god!! i am speechless!!
First u deserve this...đđđ for successfully completing this amazing story... i enjoyed every single update of this story... right from the prologue to the epilogue... madhu's struggle to bring up her kids... rk finding his long lost family... rk making up with the lost time with his kids & madhu... rk earning madhu's trust... kids love for their super cool parents... oh god! so many cute, emotional & funny scenes... this story is one complete package... u have written it so beautifully till the end line "Movie it is then" haha... poor kids got scared their parents will do it on their SR too & bring one more baby...LOL
trust me, ts such a fantastic final part & epilogue lazy dear...
really loved it...
so hilarious... yeah! Rishbala were so engrossed in baby making process & keep on postponing their wedding.. LOL
i found the wedding scene so cute.. rk really cares for his kids more i guess... & also madhu's trust on him that he will surely come...
& their kids? they are super cool... & i don't think rishbala will ever step down from being a super cool parents.. till the end moment they were super cool... loved the scene were they openly discuss things with their kids & also the maturity their kids showed...
And haan... one thing to mention.. the names of the kids... Ayusha-Ayush, Dhruva-Dhruv... superb! u really choose super cute names for the kids in your stories... Sassy will be my all time fav.. bcos these two are brats!! LOL... i m sure the new additions dhruva & dhruv will also be brats but all the four will grow up good in nature... they are so frank & honest..
my heart swells with happiness that this Rishbala are blessed with four lovely kids & all of them are living happily forever...
thanks a ton dear for giving us this great piece of writing...!!
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago