Rishabala SS: Kabhi Hum Na The : Part Five on Page 65 (16/02)Completed - Page 41

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sweet and cut ending
Plz add me your pm list
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have been re-reading ur stories till now... But today u made my day by telling that you r gng to get back to ur writing again... :) missed u lazy but the stories u already written kept me really happy when ever I wished of reading something like a happy-reading for me LOL
Coming to the update it was exactly like the nature of child ayush & ayusha if grown up now t they wud be :) excellently written !! Mainly ayusha is fun to read ha-ha
Enjoyed well !
Plz pm me ur updates dear :)
And wel come back ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back di...
Awesome epilogue...ayush and ayusha has grown up and r very understanding towards the situations happening in their parents life...
Loved this story so much...and I'm on clod nine seeing you back :)
Please be active this time di ...its a humble request ...missed u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
unresed my comment on page.65
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome di. Was waiting 4 this since ages. My every day goes reading one of ur stories. Yesterday read dancing at midnight 4 the 500th time. Atlast they got married after having 4 kids. Good I like even numbers more. Thanks a ton for the pm And 4 adding me to the pm list
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayy u finally gave the epilogue. I read the story 4 times or more !!!! Epilogue was very different from rest of the 4 parts !!! Omg this update is an example how parents are so cool and share everything with their kids i mean even talking about babies nobody does that !!! Even ayush going for a date with dad's permission is such a bold thing !! Ahaan rishbala really increasing population 4 babies !!! Ayush and ayusha have become really different in epilogue. The change in their characters and behaviour so different and evident from what they use to be !!! Nice name selections dhruv dhruva ayush ayusha !!!
Just a small sugestion you could have shown not married only as live in only!!!
This epilogue reminds me of my sociology teacher as she took similar kinds of examples to teach how broad our concepts and mind should be !!!
I will miss this story and i think i will read this many times more !!
Thanks for pm and do continue with your other stories !!!
I want pm for all your stories!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely ending
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
idon;t knw wat to say.it was hatke epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am sooo happy that you updated.
And your right I imagined them to grow up in the same way

Loved their close knit family

Thank you for updating
Luv
Kj
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally d last part...
Awesome ending dear...
loved their relation with their kids...
Ayush and Ayusha grown up character is also Awesome ...
loved it ...

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