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noiseygirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Part Four Updated On Page One

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1234bar12

@1234bar12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

beautiful update!!

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Edited by 1234bar12 - 11 years ago

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Superb part.

Liked the way RK talked to Padmini about parenting. Also the fact that madhu realized their love for each other but was not ready for marriage. It was beautifully written.

Waiting for the epilogue.

and yes i'm also liking Ajeeb dastaan..

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k.atrina75

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

The whole update was as beautiful as the story... it is so complicated.. its plaguing my mind.. as u sd at last about conclusion.. I dont know whay conclusion I can reach.. but the whole thing is making me so confused.. 😆

I loved how RK defended Madhu infront of Padmini.. she needed to be shown the mirror.. After bearing so much even then she was worried about the society... Madhu said sorry for what mistake she did.. but even Padmini and Malik had to realize that they were at fault too..

You know actually no one here is pitch perfect.. everybody is grey.. As for Radha.. I liked their conversation..

Madhu is totally justified in not able to forget everything.. Whatever RK does for her can never fill up the 7 years of pain and humiliation she had to face.. the whole pregnancy and the birth and raising her kids alone... all that cant go away just in a flick of a passionate moment.. and that too thinking of the very same thing that had once ruined her life...

Ayush and Ayusha are like the silver linings in this story... I was in tears when they were asking them questions after padmini's encounter. trying to solve all of their parents' problems..

RK and Madhu were kids back then.. but the elders too had acted so impulsively...

I loved that dialogue where RK tells her about Malik and Padmini being old people and stopping to take breath... 🤣

Awesome work Lazy.. As always...🤗

I am waiting for the epilogue badly

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Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

This was one great final part Kuku di.

I love those kids.😆 So cute they are. Protecting their mama from the big bad lady who makes her cry.😆 Not knowing it's Madhu's mother.😆

RK really showed he has changed over and over again. And him showing his love to Madhu.

Even Madhu realised that she loves RK, but still isn' ready to marry yet. Well that's a given thinking about their past.

I am sorry about the short comment. I have to study. Otherwise this would be a lot longer.😆

Thanks for the final part and for the PM.

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Boo Bear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Truly this is the best last part di...

I have loved this story from the start and im very happy that everything is going good between Rk and Madhu ...

I loved the way Rk defended Madhu when Padmini was questioning about the relation. ..

I'm going to re ally miss this story.

Eagerly waiting for next update. ...

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Tinku2015

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

👏 A v v wonderful update...just loved the way u have put everything so naturally n beautifully could not have been better...waiting for the other update heeeheee just so starving for more... 😛