Rishabala SS: Kabhi Hum Na The : Part Five on Page 65 (16/02)Completed

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Awesome update dear ...
Finally u cleared about Aushman nd madhu relation...
Rishbala realtion is also blossoming...
Continue Soon...

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Awesome update dear ..love thier bonding despite all they gone through n specially jealous, insecure n funny rk. strong, independent bt caring madhu n cute baccha company...fabulous writer u r...update soon cant wait

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

awesome update dear!!

now i feel both Rk & madhu had committed equal amount of mistakes & their parents too!!

uff...finally Rk is out of his insecurity LOL!! spiderman is not a superman in madhu & her kids life but just a nice human being & glad Rk gave him a job in gratitude for what he did to his family!!

now slowly madhu started trusting him & even falling in love actually she was always in love with him but lost somewhere in her miseries & the same goes with Rk too & now they are finding their lost love!!

haha...ayusha as a business tycoon like her papa. yes, she will aptly fit in it as she is a very good negotiator & ayush a cook!! great!!

i love this two little brats exactly like their papa LOL!!

haan...i forgot to mention one outstanding scene which cracked me completely!! yes, the fire filled slap given by madhu to katherine!! Gosh! that girl would have lost all her 32 teeth LOL!! & the other slap madhu had given to Rk when he kissed her on her cheeks was cute!!

waiting for next update!! thanks for the pm!!

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Qurat-ul-Ain

@ainanwer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Really amazing very nive update

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teekay

@teekay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Nice story thank you for writing.

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Meghana

@simply.meghana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Loved the update lazy di
Glad RK and Madhu are getting close again
Meeting with the parents...hmmm
Continue soon 😉

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Part3:

Im loving this family.u have brilliantly described rk reasons fr nt recognizing madhu n his love fr her.in da past everything went against them but its good to see rk going all da things a father could do.n madhu is melting down.so rk had a baby sister whom dey lost.looking forward to da next part.