Rishabala SS: Kabhi Hum Na The : Part Five on Page 65 (16/02)Completed

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Lovely update.

RK is doing everything he can to set things right.

He was insecure with Ayushman.

Madhu is slowly trusting him.

She is right, they both were immature.

Hope she meets her parents.

waiting for next monday.

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

awesome update loved it do update the next part soon 😃 Tfs for pm 😃

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Richa

@sarcastic_teen

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

This was the best part so far
Emotions...realization...everything was described very nicely
This is the power of ur writing when reader can't stop himself/herself to appreciate u

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Can't blame rk or madhu or their parents, liked the part, and the story is going in a matured way, like how rk said madhu was changed, he was also changed, liked how madhu maintained distance and gave him bak at right places.

Rk's securities are always worth one to read, and it never failed to entertain us this time. Keep writing, waiting gor the next part.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

ahaan ..again a very nice and geart touchign update..

love the way it has now..became a family...Ayush and Ayusha... r turning to be brats...😆😆

Ayushman...nice man..respect..😊

I appreciate Rk's efforts to win back her Love and faith...and glad that Madhu is understanding that...👏👏👏

But no one to be blamed as..they both were quite young,...but Madhu also needs some time to heal herself and comeout of that insecurities...😔

Thaanks for the lovely part Lazy...loved it 👏👏👏

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Boo Bear

@-Babydoll_Pooh-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Very nice update di... though it was a mix of emotions and cuteness. ..

Loved it very much ... Eagerly waiting for next update. ...

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Shweta Dafda

@Shweta300

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Awsome lazy loved your every stories but this story is little different n totally awsome loved it dear plz continue soon
Thanks for adding me in ur pm list

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Awsome update

Rk was not a bad persons things were wrong

N the way it were present he had taken wrong decision in it n like that he is mending his mistakes

N madhu has started to trust n love him again n its gng to get strong

Amazingly written

Cnt sn

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

I thought ayushman will be a prob but his part was so small lol !! I totally loved the insecurities of rk and his feelings towards was very emotional !! It was a super update !! I know rk is not at fault but he enjoyed his life after that but madhu didnt !! So i dont want madhu to forgivr him but shr can live with him for their kids only !! Uff now the parents !! It was all becoz of them !! Now they shud treat her with great respect !! Thanks for the pm