Rishabala SS: Kabhi Hum Na The : Part Five on Page 65 (16/02)Completed - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.su h a beautiful stofy.looking forward.can't wait.its really interesting lazy di.please update soon 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
love ur writting very much...its very very touchy...i think if rk really want 2 correct his mistake then ek chance to use milna chahiye n he already feel guilty 4 what he did 2 madhu...waiting 4 next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part one.

Whew. That was amazing. Simply amazing.

My heart was going through so many emotions and my head was just all over the place with questions and thoughts.

My heart started breaking right from the beginning when I realized Madhu was a cashier. This told me right off that Madhu must have left her home and was trying to take care of herself and child (I was not expecting twins!)

Then the mention of her second job.

Poor Madhu. She did not have her parents, did not finish her education and was alone.

Then enter RK. You set his character perfectly from that scene. And I just hated him. For a tiny second I had hope he was just another buyer but then the hammer drops and - yes sadly RK is the one who got Madhu pregnant and then ran away.

But Madhu was brilliant here. Yes she was shocked, disturbed, emotional but when necessary, Madhu was strong and determined. I just loved her here.

From calling security to kneeing him, I just wanted to hug this girl.

The chawl. Again this scene also showed the kind of life RK is used to and what he (unintentionally) subjected his children to.

I found it interesting that in RK's first interaction with his son, RK felt nothing. I don't mean a 'connection' but I mean, wouldn't any human being feel sad for a child in that situation?

RK only felt emotion when he realized the child was his.

What kind of person is this man? Oh yeah, selfish. I forgot.

The scene with RK and Madhu was emotional! So many feelings from Madhu and from RK.

So RK's parents told him to leave town. They went ahead with the marriage preparations knowing they were going to have their son abandon Madhu? That is disgusting. I am loathing those ppl.

Basically they were telling their son that what he did was fine and he can have sex with anyone. Parents of the year? disgusting.

And RK's friends tell him Madhu is a gold digger. He admits he knows they were wrong but that still did not stop him from leaving her.

Am i supposed to feel sorry for RK? Not happening yet Lazy.

I understand he did not know Madhu was pregnant but that does not excuse his behaviour and it cannot erase everything Madhu has been through.

I am sure Madhu has had to deal with her share of insults for being an unwed mother.

I am proud of the way Madhu dealt with RK. I wanted to throw the man out of the house! How dare he propose! Like Madhu should be grateful. I'd knee him again! Harder.

And by the way, brilliant writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a beautiful story
i loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww...
Do I have words for this!!

We have built a life without you
Sure thats too much painfull for a father to hear.. But he deserves it..

I hate tis RK but still I felt bad for him when his children asked that other man to let them call him papa...
but I hate this RK even more than the one from Hearts Aflame.. I mean having hot dates even now!!

lovely story...
plzzz continue soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Gr8 story... omg... itz my favrit now... update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg Rk didn't recognize her
feeling sad formadhu
super update
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...nice part dear
thanks for making it long updates

first i thought rk was with amnesia...but know,the pig even didn't remember her
and i feel very very sad for madhu when rk was buying a packet of condoms and was gonna have date when madhu was trying to meet the ends

so twins,huh??...hey hey i too liked it...so it was bcoz she started showing early...bcoz i thing even in 4th month it is just starting to show

who is this ayushman?? preethi's husband??

wanna see hw rk is going to make it up to madhu and his children
more than that i wanna see the kids expression on learning their father's secret...epecially ayush
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! First time i read any update twice n d credit goes to ur awesome n amazing writing 👏👏👏. The way u have described her feelings n sufferings is jus superb. I cud feel her pain💔😭
omg! this girl has suffered so much n dat too in her teenage when she hersef was a child she had to bear with such heartbreaks,betrayals n loss. sdhe lost her love, her parents,her shelter, her cstudies, her career , her happiness, her dreams, wishes n luxuries . And d reasons is ... RK...🤬
N he doesnt even remember her.Dat means forget love he didnt even have any feeling for her .
God knows with hw many girls he has slept n how many children he has till now.😡👎🏼
He is enjoying his life to fullest n she n children r suffering so much.
How shameless he can be ? After seeing his behaviour n attitude i hate him even more than madhu . HOT DATE .. MY FOOT😡
How i wish his children to ignore him n call Ayushman/spiderman their PAPA . Dont knw what kind of relation madhu n ayushman have but i want RK to burn in jealousy n insecurity . He too shud fall in love n then feel hurt n cry for madhu n his children n then realise what he did n what he lost.
only thing in his favour is dat he didnt knw she was pregnant wid his children. But im sure had he known abt her pregnancy he wud have forced her to abort babies.
I dnt know hw wud u mend him. I mean ofcourse u wud mend him in a right way but wat abt d sins he committed n d extent to which madhu has suffered till now bcz of him.😈
But one thing im sure is dat u wud defo balance both right n wrong. u wont make it easy for hiom😎. He too has to suffer.
I loved it when she kicked him n saiod dat dialogue😉😆
SORRY FOR D RANT😆 cudnt stop myself frm writing this 😛
U R BEST . GOD BLESS U DEAR👍🏼🤗
Edited by GOODLUCKANGEL - 11 years ago

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