Rishabala SS: Kabhi Hum Na The : Part Five on Page 65 (16/02)Completed

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moumita.madhu

@moumita.madhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

awww!!! can't wait for the next part!!!! Fab plot!!

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..Razia..

@..Razia..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

OMA so many twists in one chapter ⭐️
First Madhu haveing children and that to from Rk
And second that boy that RK hurted was actually his son .
OMA I was just glued to it ❤️ , I really can't wait for the next part .
I really hope Madhu is not married , if that her boyfriend I will be
Fine but hope it's not her husband 😭

Awsome update 🤗

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riyakhanna728

@riyakhanna728

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Amazing update...

The way you have described Madhu's love , hatred and struggle in just one part is commendable 👏

Even RK's flirtatious and irresponsible character is very well potrayed ⭐️ He is a real ass here 😡

He even forgot the girl whom he left on mandap 😡😡 ... Hate him in this story

Eager to know how he will make up for Kids and Madhu's suffering. This poor girl lost her youth because of her stupid love 😕

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE ...😃😃

Thanks for another wonderful story of your 😳😉

Edited by riyakhanna728 - 11 years ago

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Great Start 👏

Felt so bad for Madhu and RK, he doesn't even remember her.

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Seema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Part 1:emotional n v well written update like alwayz.madhu n rk met after seven long yrs n dey have twins.ayush n ayusha n madhu named her after ayushmann.is he,her bro or friend who might havr helped her 7 yrs back. N dats why she named her kids after him.hmmm.thanx fr pm n looking frward to da next one

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

OMG!! after the prologue I was waiting eagerly for the next update...It was an emotional update...RK is really a dog...He slept with madhu & forget her ...Only for him , madhu & the kids are suffering...I felt sad when ayush pleaded Ayushman whether he can call him papa or not...I want RK to suffer...😡...by the way , who is this ayushman...???...Madhu's friend ???

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

rk was such a jerk...hate him for what he did with madhu.😡
poor kids suffering without any mistakes
madhu has also suffered a lot...now rk suddenly trying to come in to their life must be more torturing for her.

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

its awesome 😃

both kids son is like madhu but daughter is like Rk 😃

who is that spiderman 😕 i hope she will not let them address that spider papa..

ok i don't like Rk that much but still want them together 😃 he may be ...no he is definitely selfish 😉

but still rightkameena is made for madu and madhu is made for him 😃

and the moral of my all comment is that plzzz at the end 😃

i want happy ending plzzz😳😃 happily ever after with madhu and Rk 😳😃

thankx for pm 😳 waiting for the next week for next update lonnng one 😃

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Ohh it is such a nice story !! Watrver rk did to madhu was totally wrong ! Mb shud not accept him easily !! I felt very emotional when ayush was telling that everybody is teasing them abt their father who is unknown !!very interesting !! Thanks for the pm.!! Hope.u will send the pm for further parts also !! And it would be better if it is long updates