RM OS- Together Forever - Page 5

Originally posted by: Ni33

Nice OS Shriya.

I suspected RK to be dead. Well after that second paragraph. And my guess was correct.

A really heartwrenching OS. You portrayed Madhu's feelings perfectly. Also some of RK's as well, when he showed them. Good luck with your exams.

And thanks for the PM.

Aww..thanks di..really means a lot 🤗

that was a beautiful story! Madhu's pain amd loneliness was described beautifully.

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Rishbala always together😛

Yeah...ALWAYS 😉

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! it was so beautiful...loved it...😃

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: silverfire

Amazing...

I had tears in my eyes when u explained madhu's pain. She is at least with her Rishu in the end.

The past n the present was beautifully written.

aww...glad u liked it dear ..thank u :)

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

what an OS...so heart touching...RK_madhu...their love...wowww...

I dnt have words..all I can say..this is one of the best OS

aWW...thnk u so much dear ..it means a lot 🤗

very nice[/QUOTE Thanks

Originally posted by: karamjeet

It's Heart Touchinggg OS...
Can't stop my tears from start to till end...
But i happy in end they met...but i waana read last line something from Rishu side to madhu like I love u Cupcake nd i miss u...not madhu's shocking expresion...

Thanks dear ,...glad u liked it

Originally posted by: Ronita03

Very emotional OS...

She was living with his memory but finally she met with her love in heaven... :-)

Thanks for the PM..

Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: drashtifan1

Lovely update Shriyu!!!❤️
Very emotional update!!! I was crying throughout!!!😭
Don't even think it was a bad one, it could have easily won an award for an emotional story in a competition.😊
I seriously loved it. 😳
I found only one part a bit confusing and that was-
"my whole body felt as if knifes were being inserted from everywhere."
What exactly did she fall on? 😕
Thanks a lot for the PM baby!! 😃

Thanks di :) Glad u liked it...n about ur doubt...she fell on the road..tht line does not actually mean tht she fell on something pricky...it just an exxagerated statement..which is desribing her pain...hope it clears ur doubt 😊