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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
nice os...it made me emotional...beautifully expressed...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
what an OS...so heart touching...RK_madhu...their love...wowww...
I dnt have words..all I can say..this is one of the best OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's Heart Touchinggg OS...
Can't stop my tears from start to till end...
But i happy in end they met...but i waana read last line something from Rishu side to madhu like I love u Cupcake nd i miss u...not madhu's shocking expresion...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very emotional OS...

She was living with his memory but finally she met with her love in heaven... :-)

Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update Shriyu!!!❤️
Very emotional update!!! I was crying throughout!!!😭
Don't even think it was a bad one, it could have easily won an award for an emotional story in a competition.😊
I seriously loved it. 😳
I found only one part a bit confusing and that was-
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y whole body felt as if knifes were being inserted from everywhere."
What exactly did she fall on? 😕
Thanks a lot for the PM baby!! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Very emotional OS! You made me cry. Beautiful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Heart breaking OS Shriya!
Its remind me Suru's OS Ethreal Love!
Past & present parts are nicely written! I feel bad for madhu! Very very emotional writeup!
Now shriya become lead killer "Sangat ka asar hai"!
Edited by PRATHA1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Oh heck! 😒
That was so heart wrenching..🥺
At last she met him i the heaven.. ❤️
they will be together forever now..
Very beautiful story dear. Death snatches everyone from our life..every near n dear ones.. But at the end we meet with our lost dear ones..there. In God's land. nothing can separate us after that 😊
thanks for PM..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AzraZaidi

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Yipppe I am first , i Cant believe it ... Suru was stalking since so long bechare , Suru u deserve the 1st place but no probs , you or me its the same 😉 HAha...Lol di...u turned up 1st...it was quite unexpected...😆
The banner is beautiful 😳😳 and the update was heart breaking !!! Thanks for liking d banner 😳
Yaaar i dont like sad stories you ,made me Cry😭 Haha...but u knw i love to write sad stories...haha 🤣
I felt so bad for madhu , it was very sad when she was hallucinating !!!! and then wen she

Even i felt bad for Madhu...n thats why i killed her in d end na...haha 🤣 so tht she meets her rishu...lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

oh baby! it was such an emotional heart wrenching story!! beautifully written!! i loved it!! Aww...glad u liked it di 😳

but back to back u killed the leads in ur stories!! first u killed madhu in "a walk to remember" & here u killed both!! but i'm so happy u killed both!! live together or die together!! that's the best think can happen to loved couples!!😳 as i said in ur previous story here too kavya will love this story bcos u killed the leads!! great!!😆 HAha...yeah,,,i love 2 write tragics...n i remember tht u wanted both of them 2 die in d story..so i did it here...haha 😆 I hope kavya di likes it 😳

i loved how u weaved the past & present!! u could guess very well which portion in the past i liked the most after reading my SS! yes, romance is my fav. genre & i loved the rainy night scene😉 Thank god!~ I was Really afraid tht i would b bad ovr there...glad u liked it di,...it means a lot 😳

i guess at the beginning itself Rk is gonnaa die out of some disease as madhu asked him to ppromise not to leave lol😆& also i guessed even she is gonna die bcos she was all the way remembering her past in road so i thought she will surely meet in some accident & she did LOL!!😆 but i wonder y he took 3 years to kill madhu LOL😆 he could have taken her with him in the moment he died rite?😆 haha... madhu is one jealousy biwi even at the end moment her jealousy banged her but then she realized it was she who is with her hubby!! LOL😆 sorry, shriya dear, i don't know y but even in ur emotional updates i'm making jokes lol!!😆 HAha ...Lol di..It was clear from d very beginning tht he is dead...so yeah...u guessed it rite...Lol di! Seriously..u r crazy..haha 🤣

okay! i need to share one thing... 2 days back i got a very similar idea bcos always kavya & Ni were pulling my lefs & making fun of my rishbala in my SS:LSAM saying them as PDA couple & bed rockers & all so i thought to write one os to satisfy them by killing both the leads bcos i dont want one to suffer without the other. even i thought to show Rk suffering from cancer which is the only deadly disease i could come up with & he asking his wife divorce in the biginning itself saying he is bored of her & he loves dipali who acts as his lover so that madhu will hate him & give divorce & move on in life but she knows very well her love will never cheat her & some she finds his reports & get shocked, then she will take care of him but he finally laid in death bed but before he could close his eyes she died in his arms not able to see her hubby die & in moment he also passed away, then they both walked hand in hand in beach - the end. i planned to pen it down but i got even better story from u so i'm backing off from writing this piece!! 😆 i m gonna wait for u story...😳
but to be frank u have beautifully written the story!! amazing yaar! especially the ending which is contrary to ur opinion! u said the end was bad but i felt it was perfect!!👏 Aww thanks di ...it means a lot ! ❤️
thanks for giving this beautiful story & for pm!!😳 No problem 🤗


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