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Zoya2

@Zoya2

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Congratulations on your new FF

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kg15

You know me??? 😲 To be very frank dear, I didn't expect it at all... Lol

I am not at all an experienced writer darling! It's just that I have written few shots. There are many more talented, ace ones here than me!!! But I tell you, you have really got an interesting style!! Keep going with it... I love such films a lot hence watched them a lot...:)

May I know your name dear?? :)

Well kind of. Have read some of your shots. Seen a couple of posts where you have posted a comment. And you are one of the coordinaters for the OS Contest. 😉

I love those kind of films as well. Spy, conspiracy, dyspotian, action movies are my first pick. 😆 And I will get really disappointed if they end up not being what I expecting them to be. Like Die Hard 5. And so many others I have seen. Like After Earth with Will Smith and Jaden Smith. 🤢 The special effects were okey, but that's it. Oh, my name is somewhat like my username indicates. 😆 My name is Nina, and my favorite number, which also happens to be a prime number, is 3. (I'm very fond of numbers and Math.😳) But didn't like calling myself Ni3, so added another 3. Thereby being Ni33. 😆 The number is absolute not an indication of my age. People by only hearing me think I am older than what I actually am. But when they see me, they think I am at least 5-7 years younger than what I am. Thereby never guessing my age correct. 😆 Perhaps a little too much information than requested.😆

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Intersting...m fan of spies ...and agents will u pm me next plz pm me

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan
Firstly a Big CONGRATULATIONS dear for ur First story!!!
actually I saw ur post regrding this story but didn't cmmnt as I never saw any bond films nd don't knw how to portray such spy characters!!! sorry dear!

Now coming to ur story u pen down it excellently dear!!! I must say u describe both Rishbala in an amazing way I totally loved it.. 👏
Will love to read it further!!! continue soon dear!!! :D

No worries Suru. It's all good. 😉 Perhaps you will begin watching Bond after reading my FF. 😛

Thanks. Can't take all the credit. Tainar di helped me by explaining what kind of errors I did and giving suggestions whether I should elaborate certain parts. 😳 Would like to see my teachers today and see what they think of me now as a writer. 😈😆 They would probably only be giving me a passing grade. I know them to well. 🤢

Hope none of you get scared of my comments. I known to be, as some people would say, giving comments that are brutally honest with a hint of sarcastic humor. I'm like that.😆 Like sarcastic humor a lot.

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice part 1. Pls pm me the next parts. And accept my buddy req😛

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Mrs.Somerhalder

@Mrs.Somerhalder

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This is just awesome! ! I totally love it!! Eager to know what happens next! Very interesting!

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Tainar

@Tainar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Yay!! Congratulations on your first story Nina! You did it all on your own, I was just your sounding board. Can't wait to read the next part! 🤗

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: madhurish
Hurray!! 1st to comment on ur 1st work!!🥳

Nina dear, firstly a huge thanks for writing such a story on rishbala!! i'm a huge fan of Bond movies & i was longing to read similar kind of story in rishbala version.. finally u came up with this!!😛 🤗

a big congo for ur first work!!🥳

i cant believe this is ur first story!!😲 u have written mighty fine dear!!👏 awesome start!!👏

kundra, rishbak kundra & maik, madhubala malik sounds like Bond, james Bond😉

even i added the bond bgm while they say their name!!😆

i find this madhubala is too brazen!!😉

u hooked up me in very 1st chapter itself!! now i'm eager to no what's gonna happen next!! how they knew each other? what is there in their past? what they are gonna do now? are they spies or cop or secret agent? i wanna know everything!!

but no hurry, u can update whenever u feel like updating!!😳

& haan.. special mention to title - i loved it!! i find it apt to the story!! it says a lot!!😉

thanks for the pm!!😊

Thanks Sudhu di! 😃 It means a lot coming from a writer like yourself.

I'm actually very fond of Love starts after marriage. Well as I mentioned Tainar di helped me. She explained what kind of errors I did and gave suggestions on where I should elaborate ceratin parts and do certain changes.

Glad you notice that. That was the idea. 😆 I love how Bond present himself to strangers in his movies. That's why I used it on them both. Even I imagined Bond bgm when I read threw it. 😆 They say great minds think alike. 😉

Well I was inspired by John McClane in Die Hard, so with the story in mind Madhu was the one who got a first bite from that apple.😉

Well for that you will have to stay tuned. I will hopefully update the next chapter soon, which will give you a bite of what's to come or what's has happened. Can't reveal to much now, can I.😉

You are welcome!😃

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Tainar
Yay!! Congratulations on your first story Nina! You did it all on your own, I was just your sounding board. Can't wait to read the next part! 🤗

Thanks Tainar! No, you deserve much more credit than that. Stayed tuned!😉